Simulating Immortality, Chinese-Style Succubus, Asking Heaven to Die

The story is really good, and the protagonist's strength in suppressing the battle is reasonable. He won't be so happy that his battle strength collapses every second, nor is he so overwhelmed that the plot becomes suffocating. However, this is only the early stage, so I can't say it too fast. Then the length control of the simulation chapters needs to be strengthened. The second simulation chapter is too long. It started from the tenth chapter to the latest chapter eighty and continues, without mentioning the actual situation at all. At the beginning of the third simulation, the main character was able to convey the experiences of old friends in the previous simulation to the people being simulated now. It was not my cup of tea at first, and then I didn't know what I was looking at, so I gave up.

I'm sorry, I saw that the writing here is really good. Although it is in the same genre as the previous author, he doesn't have the common problems of the previous author. You can get multiple entries in one simulation. Unlike the previous works which were very rigid, you can only get one entry in one simulation. Moreover, this simulation is based on the future, that is to say, it is something that has not happened yet. None of the events written by the author so far are abrupt and well written. I was fascinated by it. It's worth reading. I feel like it would be on the list even if I put it at the starting point. There's nothing wrong with the writing. Anyway, it's pretty smooth to read. Come on, author, I hope you won't collapse in the rest of the book, and I hope you can write about 1,000 chapters. [Think]

The writing is good and well written. Shennong has tried I can't understand the back part.

It was smooth and natural to watch in one sitting. As long as I don't use big poison or insert big swords in the future, I will definitely get a rating of around 8.5 Or even above.

It's pretty good, I think it should be around 9 points. The whole article is relatively smooth, but there are weaknesses in Goldfinger, and the entry level classification is not very good. The blue epic is too strange, and there are too few entry levels, only about five levels, but the content is really good.

It feels good, because it is different from a bunch of other simulations where I don't always know how the author writes it. It feels like there are four different things. I am trying to suppress the combat power, but at the same time I want to write this book into a good novel. I can only say that I have finished it. This one is at least the same as the one simulation entry a year.

It's quite good to watch, maybe because the subject matter and content don't have a wide audience, but if you watch it patiently, you'll probably like it. There are some minor problems that are innocuous (for example, the female characters are relatively flat and stereotyped, and the main male characters are all pretty good), and some people watch it themselves. The cover and introduction of this book may be aimed at cultivating immortals, but this book is a bit biased towards the strategy of fighting for hegemony and cultivating immortals, which is not a pure cultivation of immortals. I can accept these. The strategies and plots are quite interesting. It is a mildly enjoyable article, not a brainless one. Come on, author.

Let me go, the devil from outside the territory, this writing and this story are good, good As a simulation article, the content of the second simulation was too long, and I didn't feel that it was any more enjoyable.

The writing is smooth and the protagonist's character is stable. These two points have surpassed 80 to 90% of authors. Secondly, the author has a strong awareness of lightning protection, and the writing often has some cultural embellishments, so it is not jerky to read. The battle is also well written in Tomato. If you look closely, the text is very impressive and the visuals are quite strong.

The writing is really good, the author is not a newbie, he looks like an old Bidden at first glance. You can get into the trap, I'm reading chapter 41 now. There is not a single nonsense word in the whole text. From a novel perspective, characterization and plot description. Psychological description. The plot is also coherent and well written. This comment is limited to Chapter 41. I haven't finished reading the rest yet. [Working on draft] Chapter 104, so what is behind the door. Let's get here first.

The writing is excellent, the plot logic is clear and compact, and it is a well-written book, but it does not make people want to read enough. It is not difficult to get a score of 9 or above, but after 500,000 words, reading and following up will probably decline, and it is difficult to achieve particularly good results.

It looks very smooth. I read the latest chapter in one go. Except that the classification of the entry levels is a bit strange, everything else is pretty good. There's also not a lot of words to say about The Sims. This is the second simulation now, everyone has his own way of dying. It's also more harmonious. It's just that there are too few people watching it, but I feel like it has the potential to score 9 points if it continues.

It is not a traditional fighting and killing game, but it unlocks the world view step by step, calculating step by step, planning at the right time, and constantly making back moves. It is a fantasy world view with a good combination of force and intelligence. There are battles of wits and courage, fighting and killing, and many reversals. It is more comfortable to watch.

The vocabulary is fluent and gorgeous, and the portrayal of the protagonist is clear and powerful. It is not a pile of words, but a few distinctive features that allow the imagination to deepen. At the same time, every simulation is of high quality. At the turning point of fate, different choices, different encounters, there is no cliché plot of killing people and seizing treasures, but letting people constantly see through the truth. A few strokes, the words are elegant and elegant

Wow, it's okay. It's not as boring and template-y as I thought. It has its own little ingenuity in it, and the characters are well drawn. Some of the settings are really comfortable to watch. I like it.

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled in the World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I followed the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" Divine Body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am old, and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update! (Although it's not bad, but)

Pure celestial being. I originally thought it was just a simulator-like industrial cool article with a title. But slowly I discovered that both the author's writing style and other content are very good. There are many pitfalls, and the author has filled them in. There are some difficult opinions about simulation, and the author has also taken them into consideration. Pure Fairy Grass In the third simulation, there was a bit too much nonsense and the look and feel was a bit messy.

It's not bad, it's an old theme, but the characters in it are all well-written. Many simulator stories are either desperate to make them long or they just go crazy and end up unfinished. This has been handled very well. It is currently dominated by the simulator world. It is similar to the familiar main line of the Double Dragon world framework but has its own things. The Chinese-style succubus is also a must-have part. Instead of being reduced to a running story, it has become more attractive. The author is really good at writing about people. The emotional lines are relatively high among male videos. The emotional lines with several female protagonists are very good. It can be considered a high-quality book if you put it next door.

It's all about interests and calculations. There are no permanent enemies, only permanent interests. In the simulation, the protagonist may have one or two wives, but in reality, the protagonist is still stable and focuses on doing what he wants. The plot doesn't have too many flaws, just some minor flaws, but they're not harmful either.

Have your own set of logic and your own style, surpassing 90% of the simulation articles on Tomato, a seasoned protagonist and a family of people who don't have the right style of painting? The protagonist is still scheming, but this person should be full of emotions, like an indifferent machine, but still human. As far as the plot is concerned, there is no suppression or prejudice, nor is the ascension a scam. It was calculated at the beginning, and then gradually fell into true feelings. The qualifications are a bit poor, but judging from the current chapter, the shackles of qualifications have been overcome. The main feature is that the protagonist has many back-ups, a bit like Cihang's savior, and the protagonist's skills have a strong ominous atmosphere. Simulations account for the majority, because a simulation that lasts a long time takes up about thirty or forty chapters.

The author's writing style is very good, the pacing is smooth and flowing, and the characterization is not stereotyped. However, it still follows the bonding style later on. There is a female protagonist. Most of them are like this. It is still within the framework of romance, and there is no interest in the later part.

To be honest, it's really good to watch, but after simulating dozens of chapters at a time, I return to the starting point after death. I feel lonely and a little tired after reading it. I went to read other things. I'm back to read it in Shuhuang.

It looks good, and the writing is good but it could be more mature. The main shortcoming at present is that the information transmission is not very good in the second life and it is too unconstrained. I hope there will be improvements in the third life. Getting more and more stupid

Wonderful, only about a hundred chapters so far, very well written. The characters' emotions are richly described, and it only has about a hundred chapters now. I hope that the more I write, the better it will be. Don't stop and forget about the eunuch, it's not enough. Worth reading, good book

The story is good. At first I just looked at the name and thought it was a mixed martial arts simulator based on the Tang Dynasty Shuanglong template. But after the story unfolded, I found that it was unexpectedly good. The protagonist is affectionate and meaningful, the content is interesting, and the setting is okay. It's a good book.

The writing is good, and I get a new entry in the simulator every 10 years, and my appetite increases the upper limit. The plot is reasonable, and new entries can be obtained through combination, making the simulation fresh and rewarding. In summary, I feel satisfied, the combat power is not broken yet, it is not brainless, and it is worth watching.

A very good book, with foreshadowing and recycling I don't know what [what] I'm writing next

The writing is pretty good now, but in the future it will be a magical book if it doesn't. Later, it started to become a holy scripture. It was boring. I quit, quit.

I give it five stars. After all, there is nothing wrong with it. But in fact, it has the same problem as many other simulations. It's just that the author wants to make up a story But the original purpose has nothing to do with the story This kind of thing related to cultivating immortals is always about strength outweighing everything rather than decrypting the story. I read an article before and I am very good at improving my strength because there are limitations that are reached to the limit and then solve them and then tell the story.

The overall quality of the simulation essay is very high [I understand]