Gates of Hell and Another World

It's pretty cool, but I feel like the AI ​​is a bit too strong. Let al use less force [face covering]

Good-looking, not brainless, thoughtful

Ok ok My evaluation of the protagonist can be quoted from a verse in the Bible: When he opened the fourth seal, I heard the fourth living creature say, "Come!" And I looked, and behold, there was a gray horse; and the name of the man who sat on the horse was Death, and Hades was with him; and authority was given to them to kill a fourth of the people on the earth, by sword, by famine, by pestilence, or by wild beasts. (Revelation 6:7-8 KJV)

It's so beautiful, I must write it down [Sending my heart], it makes me want to fall straight into the pit [Cherish it carefully]

Okay, it's just that the protagonist's inner drama is a bit too much at the beginning [thinking], but it gets better and better later on [blowing kiss], author, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Looks great, looking forward to future developments.

It's pretty good-looking, so why should I give you a five-star review? Please update it soon.

It's okay, it's okay, there's nothing big or ugly about it at the moment [Thinking]

One star less because the author is too proud.

The previous writing was okay, but since the appearance of the 4-man team, you can regard this book as an anti-German work about local people resisting the protagonist's invasion.

The writing is good. Players of Men of War have a great sense of immersion. The author should stick to his own outline and it should be pretty good.

It's quite nice, but there are too many descriptions of the elf, right? It feels like reading a romance novel

The book is quite good. The plot is not very fast, but it is very stable. The biggest problem is that there are too few updates.

It suits my taste, the plot is good, I hope the author will continue writing

It's beautiful, the characters have stories and content. There may be some minor flaws, but nothing particularly inconsistent. Overall, it's very good.

It looks good, the author must finish it well [crying]

It looks good, I hope the author will continue writing By the way, is the author considering setting up a book club? [Laughing evilly]

Okay, stick with it and write a few million words

Beautiful work, highly recommended.

The scenes are realistically depicted, as if you were actually there.

The characters are vividly created and each has its own merits. .

It looks good, but the front is a bit boring. I feel like the progress will be fast

The storyline is compact, not procrastinating, and the pace is fast.

The novel has a rigorous structure. Beautifully written.

Not bad, come on author

Why do I always feel like I can't write long enough?

Not bad, nothing wrong with it

I don't know why, but I felt a sense of redemption when I read this book. The pig's feet are the emperor [crying]

Yes, but the command points and technology points were not clearly written, and the protagonist's mentality change was not written well.

It looks pretty good so far. The author's description of the protagonist is very delicate. I hope to continue working hard [laughs]