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If the whole world couldn't move and you were the only one who could move, what would you do?
Lin Bei glanced at the NPC in front of him and said that I have a bold idea.
[Evil smile][evil smile][evil smile]
Reader comments
In short, it's just a piece of bullshit with a protagonist who is both fake and stand-up, and doesn't even know how to use any hooks.
The protagonist has his own taunts. There are four people at the beginning, and all three of them taunt the protagonist.
I can really see where the author was thinking and writing. Shi Ting is basically killing a chicken with a knife, either CCB or assassinating others. The parts other than Shi Ting are still the ancient Dragon King plot. The protagonist has a troublesome physique and can take revenge just because of other people's eyes. The villain can also persevere in troubling the protagonist for the sake of the protagonist's harem. Just like Dou Po's breaking off the engagement is not a big deal in the eyes of today's people. These conflicts are a bit old-fashioned and boring.
There are some other points I want to complain about. For example, the protagonist's style can increase favorability just like joining the ice. Pets collected by CCCB need to be re-leveled. I would say that the protagonist's style is the biggest golden finger. If it is used to increase favorability from time to time, isn't it a evil way?
Those who are stuck will not develop, so they will be pressed hard.
I thought it was a good book, but chapter 13 turned out to be a poisonous one. The author didn't know what he was writing about, and he didn't know what he wanted to express about the protagonist. It was inexplicable.
Let me clarify myself. The protagonist is just an ordinary person. There will be evil and darkness, but most of the time he is still a normal person. It is just that the golden finger will further stimulate the dark side. If it causes discomfort, just quit. I write how I like. I just write wherever I want, and I do whatever I want.
Some people say that many plots are inexplicable, such as the fall of the Dwarf King. In fact, I have a purpose. I actually want to deepen the reality of this world. These are not NPCs, but living people, but it seems that it has not achieved the purpose, including the finding of trouble. I also just wanted to introduce a new villain to pave the way for trouble later, but it seems not ideal. I feel that everyone doesn't like me leaving hooks. Is that so?
The protagonist does not look like a time traveler or a player at all, but more like a native. He is the son of a noble. If he dares to scold you or have bad ideas, the player will directly destroy the whole family. Once the option of killing is given, he will not give you a chance to explain. The hidden dangers will not be eliminated, as long as you have this idea. It's not good for the protagonist. Just wait for the maintenance time that day and kill even the city lord. Kill the city by the way and see if it can be completed.
It's hard to comment. I feel that the protagonist is far away from people and very close to his nerves.
Abnormal behavior, mysterious operations
Have you started to lose your mind since Chapter 13? Inexplicable
The protagonist is a real loser, and he has no use for anything. You even came several times that you didn't need. I just skipped the timeout many times, as if there was nothing there. I really don't understand, what's the point of setting up such a cheat?
Let's objectively evaluate the content. It's actually very new. The author said that some things were not well written. You should understand. If you don't write details, at least send a few photos. Otherwise, there will be nothing for us to see, which makes it difficult for me to say.
Before reading "Venom", I should read Chapters 16, 17, and 18. I thought it was some kind of book, but it turned out to be a semi-sadistic one.
Actually, overall it's okay
AI novel, conflict between front and back texts
Good looking and highly recommended
There are very few books of this type, but this one is still readable.
In short, it's just a piece of bullshit with a protagonist who is both fake and stand-up, and doesn't even know how to use any hooks.
The protagonist has his own taunts. There are four people at the beginning, and all three of them taunt the protagonist.
I can really see where the author was thinking and writing. Shi Ting is basically killing a chicken with a knife, either CCB or assassinating others. The parts other than Shi Ting are still the ancient Dragon King plot. The protagonist has a troublesome physique and can take revenge just because of other people's eyes. The villain can also persevere in troubling the protagonist for the sake of the protagonist's harem. Just like Dou Po's breaking off the engagement is not a big deal in the eyes of today's people. These conflicts are a bit old-fashioned and boring. There are some other points I want to complain about. For example, the protagonist's style can increase favorability just like joining the ice. Pets collected by CCCB need to be re-leveled. I would say that the protagonist's style is the biggest golden finger. If it is used to increase favorability from time to time, isn't it a evil way?
Those who are stuck will not develop, so they will be pressed hard.
I thought it was a good book, but chapter 13 turned out to be a poisonous one. The author didn't know what he was writing about, and he didn't know what he wanted to express about the protagonist. It was inexplicable.
Let me clarify myself. The protagonist is just an ordinary person. There will be evil and darkness, but most of the time he is still a normal person. It is just that the golden finger will further stimulate the dark side. If it causes discomfort, just quit. I write how I like. I just write wherever I want, and I do whatever I want. Some people say that many plots are inexplicable, such as the fall of the Dwarf King. In fact, I have a purpose. I actually want to deepen the reality of this world. These are not NPCs, but living people, but it seems that it has not achieved the purpose, including the finding of trouble. I also just wanted to introduce a new villain to pave the way for trouble later, but it seems not ideal. I feel that everyone doesn't like me leaving hooks. Is that so?
The protagonist does not look like a time traveler or a player at all, but more like a native. He is the son of a noble. If he dares to scold you or have bad ideas, the player will directly destroy the whole family. Once the option of killing is given, he will not give you a chance to explain. The hidden dangers will not be eliminated, as long as you have this idea. It's not good for the protagonist. Just wait for the maintenance time that day and kill even the city lord. Kill the city by the way and see if it can be completed.
It's hard to comment. I feel that the protagonist is far away from people and very close to his nerves.
Abnormal behavior, mysterious operations
Have you started to lose your mind since Chapter 13? Inexplicable
The protagonist is a real loser, and he has no use for anything. You even came several times that you didn't need. I just skipped the timeout many times, as if there was nothing there. I really don't understand, what's the point of setting up such a cheat?
Let's objectively evaluate the content. It's actually very new. The author said that some things were not well written. You should understand. If you don't write details, at least send a few photos. Otherwise, there will be nothing for us to see, which makes it difficult for me to say.
Before reading "Venom", I should read Chapters 16, 17, and 18. I thought it was some kind of book, but it turned out to be a semi-sadistic one.
Actually, overall it's okay
AI novel, conflict between front and back texts
Good looking and highly recommended
There are very few books of this type, but this one is still readable.
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So far it's okay, keep going [laughs]