The state-owned property splits the north and the south in the long night,
Huang Suan is lying deep in the Yutang.
Nine oxen secretly store up the backbone of iron,
The two tigers sink into the air and hold the mist in their palms.
The Kingdom of Wu in the Southern Dynasties
Jinling
Duke Ning's Mansion
Deep in the mansion, a few stubborn bushes of weeds poked out from the cracks in the bluestone slabs.
Jia Liao—a name so taciturn that he was almost forgotten in the branch of Ningguo Mansion—was standing outside the moon cave door of the side hall with his hands hanging down.
At the age of 14, he was extremely tall, but very thin. The loose blue silk shirt hung on his shoulders, empty, like a bamboo pole holding a cloth flag. The thin sunlight in the afternoon slanted across the eaves of the corridor, casting a deep shadow on his sunken cheeks. That face, long and narrow, with slightly wider eyes, was indeed as silent and lonely as a yellow tiger in the mountains.
Reader comments
The writing is sophisticated, and to be honest, it is one of the few books on Tomato that makes me feel like it has the flavor of classical Chinese. This aspect deserves praise. However, the writing and plot are too scattered. As a Hong Lou fan, I will not overly pursue the slap-in-the-face plot like Shuangwen, but it is indeed a bit slow. The main plot may be the story of the protagonist using his strength to create a new dynasty, but it has just begun. The martial arts foreshadowing in the previous chapters is just an introduction and has almost nothing to do with the main plot. After that, the protagonist behaved a little weirdly. From being a small laborer to treat his father's illness, to starting to lay out the Luocao bandits' den, he suddenly wanted to overthrow the Southern Dynasty, and also wanted to attack the East. It's not that this plot is inappropriate, but it does foreshadow each other.
The writing style and logic are excellent. It is not an ordinary civil examination, but a real creation. However, within the author's framework, there is no logical confusion and no OOC characters. The setting and characterization of the protagonist are very likable. I hope that the protagonist will complete his great career and come back soon, and participate more in some events in the large manor, which may be more satisfying.
Let's change the name next time. Don't call it Red Mansion. Call it Little Days.
After a few chapters, the protagonist's character and the direction of the plot are laid out very smoothly. It is very rare for Tomato to read a book of this level. No matter how the subsequent plot is designed, this alone deserves five stars.
I took a quick look and found that the writing is very good. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have brains. They are among the top batch of Tomato's Red Mansions novels. Moreover, the writing style is very good. It is half vernacular and half classical Chinese. There is no AI flavor at all. The author's level is not low👍👍
It's good to read, half classical Chinese and half vernacular, suitable for careful reading. Time travel requires rebellion [laughs]
After reading a few chapters, I feel that the rhythm is okay. But the naming is not according to the backup. The protagonist is from the generation with the character character , and the father should be the generation with the character character Yu, not Jia Dun.
The big brother who writes novels must keep writing [crazy]
The author is an educated person, and there are not many people who are willing to come to Impetuous Tomato to write a book. This is a very good-looking story with many scenes and characters, which is quite a test of your skills. Although the author is like a liberal arts student and may not know much about the body structure that can support such strength without being injured. It is stronger than rebar and cannot be penetrated by modern compound bows. There are some bloody and bone-breaking plots, but it does not affect the author's ability to write a very exciting story. I hope to continue writing it.
In fact, the writing is pretty good. Not to mention the Red Mansions fan fiction, at least it is much better than the historical fiction. What is the main shortcoming? There are too many supporting roles and too many roles for the protagonist. Relatively speaking, it's a bit less, which I can't accept. Of course this is me
Of course. From another perspective, if the supporting characters have more roles, it will be beneficial to the development of the novel in many aspects, such as the relationship between the various characters, but it will not be friendly to an impatient person like me.
The first part may seem a bit dull, but the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. I recommend it.
Good book, unique among Red Mansions
Looks good, come on everyone
Let me tell you, it's very complicated, but the content is okay
Great writing, come on, come on, come on
The front part looks a little wordy, but the back part looks like a god.
Run quickly, there's a lot of poison behind you
Not bad, quite interesting
Write it down, please write it down
Well written and well written
Very well written, looking forward to it
Very good, this is dry food
Okay, a gentleman keeps his weapon in his body until the time comes.
Come on, it's the only one I can read. Come on bro
Unique and beautiful.
Very beautiful; very good
Super good book and good writing [like][like][like]
I've looked at it so far and it feels pretty good.
He wrote more than most Tomato fans.
Pull it down, pull it down
It's amazing. It's rare to see such a beautiful book. The writing is very good.
There is nothing to say about the writing style, and there are no facial-like characters.
The words are well thought out, the plot is sparse and compliant, it is a rare masterpiece [Like][Like][Like]
The writing is sophisticated, and to be honest, it is one of the few books on Tomato that makes me feel like it has the flavor of classical Chinese. This aspect deserves praise. However, the writing and plot are too scattered. As a Hong Lou fan, I will not overly pursue the slap-in-the-face plot like Shuangwen, but it is indeed a bit slow. The main plot may be the story of the protagonist using his strength to create a new dynasty, but it has just begun. The martial arts foreshadowing in the previous chapters is just an introduction and has almost nothing to do with the main plot. After that, the protagonist behaved a little weirdly. From being a small laborer to treat his father's illness, to starting to lay out the Luocao bandits' den, he suddenly wanted to overthrow the Southern Dynasty, and also wanted to attack the East. It's not that this plot is inappropriate, but it does foreshadow each other.
The writing style and logic are excellent. It is not an ordinary civil examination, but a real creation. However, within the author's framework, there is no logical confusion and no OOC characters. The setting and characterization of the protagonist are very likable. I hope that the protagonist will complete his great career and come back soon, and participate more in some events in the large manor, which may be more satisfying. Let's change the name next time. Don't call it Red Mansion. Call it Little Days.
After a few chapters, the protagonist's character and the direction of the plot are laid out very smoothly. It is very rare for Tomato to read a book of this level. No matter how the subsequent plot is designed, this alone deserves five stars.
I took a quick look and found that the writing is very good. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have brains. They are among the top batch of Tomato's Red Mansions novels. Moreover, the writing style is very good. It is half vernacular and half classical Chinese. There is no AI flavor at all. The author's level is not low👍👍
It's good to read, half classical Chinese and half vernacular, suitable for careful reading. Time travel requires rebellion [laughs]
After reading a few chapters, I feel that the rhythm is okay. But the naming is not according to the backup. The protagonist is from the generation with the character character , and the father should be the generation with the character character Yu, not Jia Dun.
The big brother who writes novels must keep writing [crazy]
The author is an educated person, and there are not many people who are willing to come to Impetuous Tomato to write a book. This is a very good-looking story with many scenes and characters, which is quite a test of your skills. Although the author is like a liberal arts student and may not know much about the body structure that can support such strength without being injured. It is stronger than rebar and cannot be penetrated by modern compound bows. There are some bloody and bone-breaking plots, but it does not affect the author's ability to write a very exciting story. I hope to continue writing it.
In fact, the writing is pretty good. Not to mention the Red Mansions fan fiction, at least it is much better than the historical fiction. What is the main shortcoming? There are too many supporting roles and too many roles for the protagonist. Relatively speaking, it's a bit less, which I can't accept. Of course this is me Of course. From another perspective, if the supporting characters have more roles, it will be beneficial to the development of the novel in many aspects, such as the relationship between the various characters, but it will not be friendly to an impatient person like me.
The first part may seem a bit dull, but the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. I recommend it.
Good book, unique among Red Mansions Looks good, come on everyone
Let me tell you, it's very complicated, but the content is okay
Great writing, come on, come on, come on
The front part looks a little wordy, but the back part looks like a god. Run quickly, there's a lot of poison behind you
Not bad, quite interesting
Write it down, please write it down
Well written and well written
Very well written, looking forward to it
Very good, this is dry food
Okay, a gentleman keeps his weapon in his body until the time comes.
Come on, it's the only one I can read. Come on bro
Unique and beautiful.
Very beautiful; very good
Super good book and good writing [like][like][like]
I've looked at it so far and it feels pretty good.
He wrote more than most Tomato fans. Pull it down, pull it down
It's amazing. It's rare to see such a beautiful book. The writing is very good.
There is nothing to say about the writing style, and there are no facial-like characters.
The words are well thought out, the plot is sparse and compliant, it is a rare masterpiece [Like][Like][Like]
Good book, the protagonist is very handsome