Dream of the Red Chamber in the Northern and Southern Dynasties: The Strength of Nine Oxen and Two Tigers

The writing is sophisticated, and to be honest, it is one of the few books on Tomato that makes me feel like it has the flavor of classical Chinese. This aspect deserves praise. However, the writing and plot are too scattered. As a Hong Lou fan, I will not overly pursue the slap-in-the-face plot like Shuangwen, but it is indeed a bit slow. The main plot may be the story of the protagonist using his strength to create a new dynasty, but it has just begun. The martial arts foreshadowing in the previous chapters is just an introduction and has almost nothing to do with the main plot. After that, the protagonist behaved a little weirdly. From being a small laborer to treat his father's illness, to starting to lay out the Luocao bandits' den, he suddenly wanted to overthrow the Southern Dynasty, and also wanted to attack the East. It's not that this plot is inappropriate, but it does foreshadow each other.

The writing style and logic are excellent. It is not an ordinary civil examination, but a real creation. However, within the author's framework, there is no logical confusion and no OOC characters. The setting and characterization of the protagonist are very likable. I hope that the protagonist will complete his great career and come back soon, and participate more in some events in the large manor, which may be more satisfying. Let's change the name next time. Don't call it Red Mansion. Call it Little Days.

I took a quick look and found that the writing is very good. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have brains. They are among the top batch of Tomato's Red Mansions novels. Moreover, the writing style is very good. It is half vernacular and half classical Chinese. There is no AI flavor at all. The author's level is not low👍👍

After a few chapters, the protagonist's character and the direction of the plot are laid out very smoothly. It is very rare for Tomato to read a book of this level. No matter how the subsequent plot is designed, this alone deserves five stars.

It's good to read, half classical Chinese and half vernacular, suitable for careful reading. Time travel requires rebellion 😄

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the rhythm is okay. But the naming is not according to the backup. The protagonist is from the generation with the character character , and the father should be the generation with the character character Yu, not Jia Dun.

The big brother who writes novels must keep writing 😫

In fact, the writing is pretty good. Not to mention the Red Mansions fan fiction, at least it is much better than the historical fiction. What is the main shortcoming? There are too many supporting roles and too many roles for the protagonist. Relatively speaking, it's a bit less, which I can't accept. Of course this is me Of course. From another perspective, if the supporting characters have more roles, it will be beneficial to the development of the novel in many aspects, such as the relationship between the various characters, but it will not be friendly to an impatient person like me.

The author is an educated person, and there are not many people who are willing to come to Impetuous Tomato to write a book. This is a very good-looking story with many scenes and characters, which is quite a test of your skills. Although the author is like a liberal arts student and may not know much about the body structure that can support such strength without being injured. It is stronger than rebar and cannot be penetrated by modern compound bows. There are some bloody and bone-breaking plots, but it does not affect the author's ability to write a very exciting story. I hope to continue writing it.

The first part may seem a bit dull, but the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. I recommend it.