Xie Qi was completely bewildered when he first entered a horror instance. He was still wearing the women’s clothes he’d put on for a cosplay after a friend asked him to. Once a kind veteran in the instance explained the situation, Xie Qi immediately used his outfit to latch onto the highest-level veteran for protection. That person also seemed rather fond of him in women’s clothes. But what happened next was beyond Xie Qi’s expectations: once the man realized he was a guy, he went ahead and had his way with him…
Once Xie Qi had worn women’s clothes, he did it again, then again. In different instances, he always used his feminine disguise to cling to someone powerful. But even after these people found out he was a man, they still wouldn’t let go. If anything, they demanded even more…
There are a lot of repeated clips, and many times it's like copying and pasting and changing the names, which affects the look and feel, but the subject matter is good and the ideas are okay. The protagonist is more suitable to be a college student. He is clear and stupid. He is not suitable at 25 years old. He is almost 21 years old. The protagonist behaves too much like a college student and has not experienced the baptism of society at all. This article can be read without thinking. It could use more psychological descriptions to reflect the characters. The current characters are very one-sided. Is it the influence of the copy or the reason why the protagonist wants to bury those children? A normal person's first reaction is fear and flight, right? The environment and atmosphere are not rendered enough and are a bit baffling. Come on, author, try to reduce repeated fragments, use more psychological descriptions and environmental descriptions, and practice your writing. The author's ideas are very good, and his imagination is also good.
Does the author dare to write an if line? If Xie is Jiang's "girlfriend" (dressed as a woman and Jiang knows he is a boy) Jiang always likes to engage in intimate actions when they get along (deliberately in front of other people), but his good brother Lu, partner Gu and neighbor Wen have unspeakable feelings for his "girlfriend"...
It's Xiangxiang Rice. Can you give the author a small suggestion? There can be fewer words in each paragraph and more broken paragraphs. This will make reading more comfortable. I love you😘😘😘😘
Well, the author's writing is delicious, but I can't go into details after all, the relationship progresses too fast. The protagonist is not very smart. He knows that there is a bounty on his head. When he goes in for the second time, he is sure that he can attract the big boss, and he does not change his name and says that his name is Xiaoqi. After watching the film, the author is a good cook. And every time he loses his horse, he has to explain that he is not a boy, hahaha. Fortunately, he is the protagonist, otherwise he would have been killed, stupid baby.
It's so delicious. I give it full marks. How can I put it, the plot develops very quickly, there are certain deficiencies in logic, and the plot is a bit repetitive, but it can't stop people who watch the emotional line from screaming. It's so delicious, and there are no big surprises. If you talk about other aspects, I will give it a passing three points, and I will give it a full score for the deliciousness!
Great, such a cool word👍🏻
I like it, the story is very layered and interesting to read layer by layer.
Nice. I want to fast forward to Shura Field. ❤️❤️
Boss, I💋💋💋Ni So fragrant 😳😳
Very good. If children like to eat, they should eat more!