Xie Qi was confused when he entered the horror dungeon for the first time. He was still wearing women's clothing that was commissioned by a friend as a cosplayer. When a kind-hearted veteran in the dungeon informed him of the situation, Xie Qi used the female costume to hug the thigh of the highest-level veteran without any thought, and that person seemed to have a good impression of him in the female costume. However, what happened next was beyond Xie Qi's expectation, and he was taken in by a familiar man...
If there are two women's clothing, there will be two, and if there are two, there will be three or four. Different copies of Xie Qi will always use their identities as women's clothing to hug different thighs, but these people still don't give up after knowing that he is a man, and instead ask for more...
Reader comments
There are a lot of repeated clips, and many times it's like copying and pasting and changing the names, which affects the look and feel, but the subject matter is good and the ideas are okay. The protagonist is more suitable to be a college student. He is clear and stupid. He is not suitable at 25 years old. He is almost 21 years old. The protagonist behaves too much like a college student and has not experienced the baptism of society at all. This article can be read without thinking. It could use more psychological descriptions to reflect the characters. The current characters are very one-sided. Is it the influence of the copy or the reason why the protagonist wants to bury those children? A normal person's first reaction is fear and flight, right? The environment and atmosphere are not rendered enough and are a bit baffling. Come on, author, try to reduce repeated fragments, use more psychological descriptions and environmental descriptions, and practice your writing. The author's ideas are very good, and his imagination is also good.
It's Xiangxiang Rice. Can you give the author a small suggestion? There can be fewer words in each paragraph and more broken paragraphs. This will make reading more comfortable. I love you😘😘😘😘
Does the author dare to write an if line?
If Xie is Jiang's "girlfriend" (dressed as a woman and Jiang knows he is a boy) Jiang always likes to engage in intimate actions when they get along (deliberately in front of other people), but his good brother Lu, partner Gu and neighbor Wen have unspeakable feelings for his "girlfriend"...
Well, the author's writing is delicious, but I can't go into details after all, the relationship progresses too fast. The protagonist is not very smart. He knows that there is a bounty on his head. When he goes in for the second time, he is sure that he can attract the big boss, and he does not change his name and says that his name is Xiaoqi. After watching the film, the author is a good cook. And every time he loses his horse, he has to explain that he is not a boy, hahaha. Fortunately, he is the protagonist, otherwise he would have been killed, stupid baby.
It's so delicious. I give it full marks.
How can I put it, the plot develops very quickly, there are certain deficiencies in logic, and the plot is a bit repetitive, but it can't stop people who watch the emotional line from screaming. It's so delicious, and there are no big surprises. If you talk about other aspects, I will give it a passing three points, and I will give it a full score for the deliciousness!
I like it, the story is very layered and interesting to read layer by layer.
Great, such a cool word👍🏻
Boss, I💋💋💋Ni
It smells so good [shy][shy]
Nice. I want to fast forward to Shura Field. [Love][love]
It's very interesting. The first four worlds are short stories, and the following Shura Fields are just some sentences that appear repeatedly. It would be better to reduce these.
Very good. If children like to eat, they should eat more!
Very pretty, love to eat! Ah no, I love watching! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
There are a lot of repeated clips, and many times it's like copying and pasting and changing the names, which affects the look and feel, but the subject matter is good and the ideas are okay. The protagonist is more suitable to be a college student. He is clear and stupid. He is not suitable at 25 years old. He is almost 21 years old. The protagonist behaves too much like a college student and has not experienced the baptism of society at all. This article can be read without thinking. It could use more psychological descriptions to reflect the characters. The current characters are very one-sided. Is it the influence of the copy or the reason why the protagonist wants to bury those children? A normal person's first reaction is fear and flight, right? The environment and atmosphere are not rendered enough and are a bit baffling. Come on, author, try to reduce repeated fragments, use more psychological descriptions and environmental descriptions, and practice your writing. The author's ideas are very good, and his imagination is also good.
It's Xiangxiang Rice. Can you give the author a small suggestion? There can be fewer words in each paragraph and more broken paragraphs. This will make reading more comfortable. I love you😘😘😘😘
Does the author dare to write an if line? If Xie is Jiang's "girlfriend" (dressed as a woman and Jiang knows he is a boy) Jiang always likes to engage in intimate actions when they get along (deliberately in front of other people), but his good brother Lu, partner Gu and neighbor Wen have unspeakable feelings for his "girlfriend"...
Well, the author's writing is delicious, but I can't go into details after all, the relationship progresses too fast. The protagonist is not very smart. He knows that there is a bounty on his head. When he goes in for the second time, he is sure that he can attract the big boss, and he does not change his name and says that his name is Xiaoqi. After watching the film, the author is a good cook. And every time he loses his horse, he has to explain that he is not a boy, hahaha. Fortunately, he is the protagonist, otherwise he would have been killed, stupid baby.
It's so delicious. I give it full marks. How can I put it, the plot develops very quickly, there are certain deficiencies in logic, and the plot is a bit repetitive, but it can't stop people who watch the emotional line from screaming. It's so delicious, and there are no big surprises. If you talk about other aspects, I will give it a passing three points, and I will give it a full score for the deliciousness!
I like it, the story is very layered and interesting to read layer by layer.
Great, such a cool word👍🏻
Boss, I💋💋💋Ni It smells so good [shy][shy]
Nice. I want to fast forward to Shura Field. [Love][love]
It's very interesting. The first four worlds are short stories, and the following Shura Fields are just some sentences that appear repeatedly. It would be better to reduce these.
Very good. If children like to eat, they should eat more!
Very pretty, love to eat! Ah no, I love watching! ! ! ! ! ! ! !