The Outcast: Ten Divine Arts from the Start, but Every One Is a Mutated Version

Non-toxic, classic and refreshing. Encourage The back is too poisonous

A very good novel, very comfortable to read. The protagonist Chen Ah Qi has a lively and lovable character. He seems to be lazy, but he is particularly attentive to key matters. He has his own opinions in his heart, and is gentle and refreshing. He possesses all kinds of weird secrets, but he does not rely on the original characters to achieve his goals. Instead, he uses his own way to make up for the regrets of Lu Linglong, Xiao Zizai and many other characters who are difficult to deal with. The characters in the article are flesh and blood, and the relationships have positions and true feelings. It is a hearty and enjoyable read. The plot does not rigidly copy the original work. For example, Zhang Chulan and the Heavenly Master are recognized in advance. It seems to deviate from the main line, but in fact it is a gentle change that adapts to people's hearts. Someone helps and solves the shortcomings, but it is more touching. The overall rhythm is refreshing and the emotions are sincere. It is a high-quality fanfic that understands readers well and is warm-hearted.

How can I put it, the characters depicted are quite cute, but the styles are too different, they don't follow the original characters, and some settings also deviate from the original works. It seems that I haven't read the comics very much, but it is already very interesting.

Overall, it's okay, new ideas and new gameplay. It's just that the confrontation with Xu San and Xu Si at the beginning was a bit abrupt. I'm used to it. Gou Daoliu likes to hide his skills and Wudi Liu fights the sky, the ground, and the air. It's easy to run away if you can't accept it for a while.

This is not the best among one-person IP fan works, but it can be regarded as one of the middle and high-end ones. The plot is very stable from beginning to end, and there is no sudden change in the style of writing. The whole text focuses on humor and daily life. By the way, I regret it. The character of the protagonist is distinct, and the time traveler does what he likes. There is not so much intrigue. The protagonist's dealings with others are not as stiff as the writing, it is very natural. There is no problem in giving five stars, but the author is too slow to update and there are currently fewer chapters. The style of this one-person fan fiction focuses on humorous daily life, with a little bit of humor, not the kind of passionate dragon Aotian. If you like reading funny and casual books, I highly recommend this book. Of course, if you are serious about it, most of the plots are okay. If you really want to find fault, most of the skills used by the protagonist in the later period are Naruto's skill packs. To be honest, this is a bit of a surprise when I read it. It seems very inconsistent. After all, in the eyes of the Tang Sect and the Lu family mad dog, this is a naked slap in the face. Is a national style modern martial arts literature writing about Naruto's ninjutsu? It's too stiff and seems awkward. The main reason is that it's not the same system, and the cultural backgrounds are different. It's not good to combine it with hard writing. As long as you have read and understood the theme culture, power system, and background world view of the two series of "Under One Man" and "Naruto", you will basically be embarrassed when you see the Naruto skill pack in this book. Although it is not to the point where you can't stand it, it will still be uncomfortable to watch.

Yes, but did you forget that Kamui has an attack method? The useless golden finger, the exercises that the protagonist gave to others were all bought with the investment points he saved, and then he couldn't practice them himself.

It's a relatively good-looking one-person fanfic. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is spending points to give cheats to others. Although others can get more points back after practicing, there is nothing else. It would be better if they can also give back some skills (qi) or stronger skills than others.

It's well written and I like it very much. There's no violence and the protagonist is not selfish. Although there are systematic reasons for it, I like this kind of protagonist who has no intrigue and can help others when he can.

This is a book that can relax your brain and not pollute your eyes. The plot is relatively relaxed and the characters are basically online. If you are a fan, you can continue reading as long as you can accept it. If you really can't accept it, then there are plenty of choices out there.

It looks good, the writing is smooth, and the protagonist's character is likeable. However, the frontal combat ability is too poor, and Kamui Obito has the ability. What about Kakashi's Kamui ability? What about the most important divine power, the ability to cover weapons and carry out the strongest attack, like Armament Haki?