Wei Mi: Xiao Ke, Don't Be Impatient, It's Useless to Be Impatient.

I have read many fanfics, and this is a good mystery fanfic, but there are too many original characters. When reading a fanfic, I still hope to see the protagonist getting along with the original characters. For example, if the reporter role is replaced by Hugh, the plot of the East End can also be introduced, and it is more likable. To be honest, I didn't really like the way the little reporter was portrayed. She abandoned the article several times because of her, and she didn't really like the protagonist being stripped of her waistcoat. Also, there are too many words in each chapter. I want to skip the plot but I am afraid of jumping too much. However, compared to other Shuangwen colleagues, it is already quite good, so I encourage you with five stars. Finally, I want to ask, is there a female protagonist? The mysterious worldview is not suitable for a female protagonist. The protagonist also has a fiancée, which is not easy to handle. But the single heroine is acceptable, and the emotional scenes with my fiancée are okay so far. The harem can't accept it, even if it's my family, the harem is a big thunder.

Has the author settled it? The look and feel is much better than the previous book. The plot is quite reasonable so far, and it's a good mystery fanfic.

I'm very happy to have discovered a good-looking mystery fanfic, one of the rare ones, but I just felt that it was very contradictory to read. The protagonist in the author's works is very kind, even kind-hearted and naive, and even the Virgin, with high-sequence Pickles around, actually understands the underlying logic of this world. There is no fear or caution, he does things casually, and he has full trust in any unknown stranger. This style is full of separation from the mysterious world. It reads like a female video borrowed from extraordinary settings. The protagonist is a good person who can be rubbed by others. He is too soft. This is far from the mysterious Xiaoke. In this dangerous world, Xiaoke's kindness of always maintaining restraint, caution, protection, responsibility, boundaries and distance is the prerequisite for what this world can really do, right? (I have only read Chapter 25 so far. The article is indeed good, but I just feel awkward and uncomfortable. I hope you can forgive me. I will continue to read it. Cheers, author [sending my heartfelt wishes]) Oh, by the way, one more thing to add. The character creation of the female reporter is not satisfactory. If you want to add a brave fellow with a sense of justice, then this person's behavior and methods in the author's writing will be very uncomfortable.

It's a good fanfic. The male protagonist is a bit of a bad guy, but I don't think kindness is a mistake that needs to be criticized. Just don't be generous to others. I don't know if there is a female protagonist, but I think it tends to have a lot of female protagonists. Personally, I think this kind of Cthulhu novel is better without a female protagonist.

Dear author, can you change the name of the original character? You know it was very embarrassing to see Dunn in Backlund [grievance]

Very good, but I don't know what Kun, the time traveler, is used for, and if I want to create a new sequence, this setting is good

After reading it, it was like discovering a new cake in the cupboard, with light and fluffy cream and just the right amount of fruit decoration. When I took a bite of it in anticipation, I found that the taste turned out to be bitter. I questioned the clerk angrily, but was told that this was a specially added bitter agent. It is simply incomprehensible. Sure enough, we should listen to our elders and not eat the good-looking food sold outside.

It's well written, and I can't find any faults so far. Recommend

The next few chapters are quite memorable for me. Anyway, I quite like it. I am looking forward to the ending of this book. Good luck to the author!

The quality is high and the plot is not obtrusive, but this aspect is still too easy to be punished. I will give it five stars first as a sign of respect. Brothers, please remember to lower the stars if your ratings are high in the future.

In Tomato is a good secret text

The photo is really nice

It's okay, but I want to see Shuangnan

It's rare to see this kind of delicate writing in Tomato, so [note]

A 5-star good book, but the update speed and plot advancement are slow.

The best Lord of Mysteries fanfic I've ever read

Very nice, good luck to the author

Get one of the five-star reviews!

It's well written, but I don't know why so few people read it.

The best Lord of Mysteries fanfic I've ever read

A very good book, a good reading experience, the plot is smooth and the language is concise. I look forward to finishing it.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, author, come on aa When will I return...

The content is pretty good so far, except that all Tingen Nighthawks have been assigned to Backlund. What about Tingen? And I've already watched half of it and I still haven't found anything to do with Klein.

After the protagonist went to the manor on the mountain, it instantly transformed into a horror movie. It scared me to death in the middle of the night [laughs]