死了一万次，全网求我别预言了！

The book is pretty good, but if you don't delve into the logic, it's right. But there are some problems. Whether you adopt it or not depends on the author. Everything depends on the author. 1. The fearful behavior of the protagonist feels a bit too exaggerated. This is one of the important reasons why there are problems if you look into the logic a little bit. The protagonist is too cowardly. It is difficult to "empathize" with Chu Yanran when reading the novel. 2. How can the protagonist be so scared when he is so numb in the model apartment copy? It's a bit awkward, but I feel that this problem is getting better. After the unknown woman appeared when the protagonist was stuck and meowing, the perception gradually improved. After the protagonist actively asked to go upstairs, it felt very good. The latest chapters are very good [blowing kisses] All in all, the intensity of fear has not been controlled well. It depends on how the author writes it. After all, I can't build a refrigerator. Come on, author, I can see that starting from the model apartment, the more I write about it, the more appointments will be made. [Sending my heart] Finally, five stars are given, and the author continues to work hard (the long holiday is not enough [crying]) The progress of the author is really obvious. The previous plots in Model Apartment were really embarrassing to watch, but starting from the transformation of the protagonist in Model Apartment Rift Girl, it is a really good Dihua novel. The protagonist has a big boss aura and is no longer as timid as before. Furthermore, Chu Yanran's words are obviously more convincing. When Shen Qinghe's memory begins, the author's writing style also improves. Chu Yanran's Dihua also changes from telling pretense to heartfelt admiration. Not only does it become more convincing, but it also has an invisible boss style. The last memory of hell, Shen Qinghe's autobiography, is better written, and there is a kind of despair that can be felt from the words. This is the author who has made the most obvious progress I have ever seen. He has made such obvious progress in just a few thousand words. The only pity is that the writing style started to change according to the circumstances. I would like to offer another five-star praise for the subsequent plot. Now I just hope that the author can at least maintain the writing style of the latest chapters and not stop updating. [Blow kiss] Additional comments on 2026/3/15: This is the first time I have seen an author who will revise books on a large scale after gaining strength. It is simply amazing. The revised plot is much better than the original plot, and the protagonist's image is more popular. Suggestion: Midnight Hotel has been changed, so Sunflower should also be changed, otherwise the characters of the protagonists before and after will be a bit abrupt. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you. No one is perfect. What is more important is that you are willing to work hard to make progress and strive for perfection. You are the best author I have ever seen in this regard! [Love][Blow kiss] Additional comments on 2026/7/4: The finale is coming soon, Doomsday Train is killing people like crazy. Although the sword is good, the writing is better than the previous copies. Thumbs up to the author! (I hope Lu Fan can be reborn in despair [sending my heart]) Just looking at the last two books, the ratings definitely shouldn't be so low, they might even be 9 points, ugh. Additional comments on 2026/7/5: The ending is so beautiful, I can see the author's writing getting better and better. It's over in a blink of an eye. It's obvious that all the people who were stabbed have been resurrected. It's a happy ending, but it's still so uncomfortable [crying]

The good thing about this article is that it is good-looking, refreshing, and mindless. The protagonist will be admired no matter what he does. This article is very enjoyable. The protagonist is brilliant, but after reading it for a long time, you will inevitably feel a little tired. Anyway, it is quite interesting, but it always feels a bit lacking. If I have to say it, I would give it 4.5 Points.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! The plot is logical and linear. The character transformations are not very abrupt, but some of them are a bit awkward. The one that was squirming on the ground really gave me a hard time (ㅍ_ㅍ) Especially the third copy, please forgive me for crying out loud, I will cry hard later (｡•́•̀｡) Come on, author! ! ! I want to be your loyal reader! ! ! ! ! Expect

Wow, the author listened to the advice and immediately changed it if there were some unreasonable things! ! ! It's so rare to find an author who can listen to advice! ! ! I decided to keep following this book until the end! I hope the author will always keep an attitude of listening to advice! If the rhythm or logic is wrong, I will discuss it with the author (if the author agrees). I hope to see the rise of a good book again [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Also, if this really becomes a famous book, the author must not forget me [Sending my heart] (There is no malice, don't complain if you don't like it, there is no malice, don't complain if you don't like it, there is no malice, don't complain if you don't like it, say important things three times)

If you don't have a deep control over the protagonist and like to read a little brainless, this novel is quite interesting. The other supporting characters are very clever. Although the male protagonist will behave very embarrassing and cowardly, he will always be thought of as the key to breaking the situation. Then other people will be shocked by the male protagonist's pattern, and will be very moved. In short, it is good-looking. [Like] There is just one shortcoming. The male protagonist's behavior is too exaggerated, and it is better not to add so many ellipsis when speaking. Even if it is made up, it will still feel like the male protagonist is afraid, which will be a bit embarrassing. 😅Also, if it can be reverted, there is no need to write a barrage reaction before the male protagonist died tragically. (Purely a personal opinion, I can still accept it and I'm still watching [laughs]) So pretty! The back is so beautiful! The male protagonist's performance at the beginning was really embarrassing, but he changed a lot later. Although he was still scared, he didn't show it much anymore. Later, the male protagonist really looked like a big boss. Zhang Hu and that... Uh, that girl joined the male protagonist's club, and they would go through every dungeon together. It was the third dungeon where the male protagonist truly transformed. There was a scene where the male protagonist died too many times and had a mental breakdown. A cracked woman appeared in the back. He made some very cruel transformations to the male protagonist's body, probably. Then the male protagonist's eyes became more indifferent and numb to death (because he died too much). Then when other people looked at the male protagonist, they felt that he was undergoing a divine transformation. Although the scene where he died too much was the scene of the mental breakdown and the subsequent crack. The female part is a little uncomfortable to watch, but after Chapter 90, it is very exciting and beautiful. The male protagonist is not afraid of death anymore. If he doesn't know how to survive, he will have to go back anyway, so he will try a few more times, and he starts to take the initiative (although his legs are actually afraid and want to tremble). Then the girl is also very powerful. She can always see the real key to breaking the situation from the actions of the male protagonist, and sometimes she relies on her to survive the crisis. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Come on! Great author! Beautiful!

The writing style is okay, a little brainless, the characters are vivid and emotional, the subject matter is very novel, there are no brain-burning twists and turns, overall it is pretty good I'm addicted to watching it ヽ(๏~๏)ﾉ (Second revision) There is no heroine, the characters are vivid and vivid, and everyone has their own feelings. The protagonist is very weak and timid in the early stage, but gradually changes in the later stage. The first few copies of the plot are a bit ordinary, but the next two copies have been significantly improved. The writing is obviously better than before, and the ending is unexpected. The whole book is a bit cruel, but the ending is good. I think the score of 6.0 Is indeed low. I think it should be between 7.5 And 8.8. To sum up, it is a bit awkward in the early stage, but it looks better in the later stage.

A novel that you can't put down once you open it! The pace is tight and not procrastinating, and every twist is unexpected and reasonable, completely capturing people's curiosity. The emotions of the characters seem to be right in front of you. After closing the book, those characters and stories are still echoing in your mind, full of stamina. A book with great potential.

Very beautiful! ! ! I stayed up all night and finished reading it. The third copy is really great! (The first sentence reminded me of the five buildings I had seen before. This type of movie is really easy to cry [I almost cried].) Everyone in this building is a villain, but they have their own helplessness under the skin. In fact, they are all poor people forced by life. If you really want to hate, you will feel like you are drawing a sword and looking around at a loss. It has been too long and you don't know what to hate. (Take my brother and Shen Qing as examples, it has been too long, and the hatred I once had has really faded away. The author handles the characters' emotions very well [crazy]! Hate is too tiring, and it is too luxurious for them.) There is also the part about strings that really poked me. The last sentence when my brother left first made me cry [crying]. The plot description is very good, there is no heroine, and Yanran's "I understand" every time, including the barrage and the imagination of each player, made me laugh. I'm a bit at a loss for words at the end, but I don't know what to say, but it's really beautiful, I highly recommend it! ! [Blowing kiss][like]

At first I almost gave up the book because the protagonist was weak in the early stages. Unexpectedly, the plot became more and more exciting later on. The character transformation was very realistic and not abrupt. The plot was compact and not watered down. The more I read, the more addictive I became. I finished it successfully.

The writing is okay, the characters are vivid and vivid, every twist and turn in the book is unexpected, and the plot is not cliche. I recommend it.

The ghost story is really well written. Compared with those ghosts who are just NPCs and have no own storylines and are just tools to serve the plot, I prefer this kind of redemption at the soul level. Especially the latest chapter, "The rope is only broken at the smallest place, and the bad luck is only for the poor" is very well portrayed. Zheng Tiezhu's story really touched me for a moment.

Although, fortunately, the ending is happy, and I think the characters are well developed. Unfortunately, the book is a bit short, and I seemed to finish reading it in one go. However, I still cried when I read the end of Unity. The protagonist is also very good, and I also admire his perseverance. Overall, from the first chapter to the finale, I think it is well written.

The story is really good, please don't add a female protagonist (⋟⋞)

I was very interested in this novel at the beginning. Although the main character is timid at first, it is very interesting to read with a few mind-boggling monsters. Now I have read the third copy. To be honest, I am a little disappointed. The main character has died so many times. Even if the character does not change significantly, I have to at least adjust it. I can't accept sudden big changes. However, the author's writing is good and the novel is also in line with my wishes. I hope it will get better and better in the future. I am looking forward to it. There is an extra "I have". I was typing in split screen and didn't notice it just now.

It's so good. I want to watch it all in one go. It's still being serialized. Who knows?

Come on, author, there are really very few articles on this subject. I hope there will be more articles. Is there a female protagonist in this article? I personally don't like having a female protagonist (if you don't like it, don't complain)

It's very enjoyable. I had a lot of fun watching it. I also like the plot of the copy, it's very warm. But there are also flaws. After all, the protagonist has died dozens of times and has seen a few rough and turbulent people, so he wouldn't be so cowardly. Then, I hope there will be some new characters. It's a bit boring to go through the Iron Triangle every time The last dungeon is very emotional and beautiful... But even though the ending has foreshadowing, it still feels a bit abrupt? But it would be nice if everyone came back. In the end, it was very warm that Chu Yanran was still in Shinhwa, Brother Lu, and Brother Lu continued to pretend to be the boss. Give five stars to the character

It's just fun, nothing else

No matter what, I finished reading 390,000 words in two days. It's a no brainer. Just go through the plot once. If you read this in detail, there must be a lot of loopholes. It's very good to read as a recreational article. [Adoration] The writing style is quite funny, and the routines in each copy are similar [face covering]

The characters are very vivid and I can remember their appearance. The atmosphere is in place, the mood is unified, the sense of substitution is strong, there is no unnecessary nonsense, and the rhythm is clean! The improvement in writing is really obvious. It no longer piles up rhetoric, but uses precise details to impress people. The pictures and emotions are more tense. The writing is good, and each chapter is more stable and beautiful. Keep up the good work! Take good care of you! This book is expected to be a hit👍

A good book

Just read it without thinking, writing is not easy, four stars

It's a bit awkward in some places, but overall it's good.

It's very interesting. Come on, the author is awesome.

It's very beautiful. Please forgive my poor words. There is also a third copy. Holy shit, forgive my tears. I highly recommend it [cry][cry][cry]

The plot is like a dream

Very good, very beautiful

Good looking, no girls at the moment

Interesting new stuff

It's tied, it looks good and I recommend it.