A mute woman with no power to bind a chicken × the top killer in the world
(This is a writing practice, and there are many shortcomings. If you don't like it, you can bypass it. Please be merciful, thank you)
Lin Wan was the most silent person in the village, huddling for survival under the beatings of her stepmother and the coveting eyes of her stepbrother. Until that night, she dragged back a dying man in the bloody stream.
His name was Lu Chen, and he had serious wounds on his body and a dagger with a cold blue light. She secretly hid him, using the half bowl of porridge she saved and random herbs found in the mountains to clumsily maintain this unfamiliar breath.
When there was a leak in the woodshed, he silently pushed the hay to her; when she burned the back of her hand, he asked coldly: "Why don't you cry when it hurts?" Lin Wan just smiled and shook her head and gestured with her scarred hands - she was used to it.
Until the drunk stepbrother kicked open the wood door. The moment the black shadow rushed towards her, a blue blade light was faster than her trembling pupils.
When blood spattered on the pyre, Lu Chen wiped off the dagger and stretched out his hand to her who was huddled in the corner: "Come with me, or stay here to die?"
She grabbed the bloody hand.
From then on, the mute girl in the mountains stepped into the real dark night. She didn't know that the person who led her out of the abyss was the first killer of Yama Luodian, who was shocked by the news. She also didn't know that the twisted carvings on the waist badge that she didn't recognize would involve her in what kind of turbulent undercurrent.
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Reader comments
Pretty good. A mute girl with a miserable life experience × a charlatan killer is not a heroine, golden finger, strong woman, canary... Setting. Because of the grace of saving their lives, the two people came together, the mute girl had someone to rely on, and the killer had peace of mind. It's good that the author can finish the story according to the storyline without too many ups and downs, and it has a beginning and an end.
The word count is small, no mistakes are made, and the writing is complete. Can be seen.
The world is far away,
May Lu Qi and Xiao Linghua (Lu Chen and Lin Wan) live in peace for the rest of their lives.
After reading the special comments, I found that although the novel is short, the characters and plot logic are very good. It belongs to the kind of long-running redemption novel. A poor mute girl who is not favored accidentally saves a cold-blooded and powerful killer. From then on, the gears of fate turn. On the way to escape, they gradually got used to and relied on each other, gained friends, and finally gave birth to a big fat child. From then on, the killer went into seclusion and the mute girl had a family. It's a perfect curtain call. I hope the author will reply after reading it to prove that there are readers who recognize your work. [Like][Like][Like]
It's good-looking, and it's a plain and true story.
The previous focus is mainly on how the relationship between the male and female protagonists heats up. There is not much written about other things, but it does not feel boring to read because the author writes the psychological changes of the male and female protagonists in a very delicate and touching way.
What follows is a turbulent situation, with the male and female protagonists moving toward peace little by little.
The thing itself is not written much or complicated. It mainly writes about the feelings of the characters and the words that are very similar to the narration of the story (?). I don't know if the author will write some modern articles in the future, especially campus articles, but I feel that the author will write very well.
I don't know why so many people in the comment area say that this article is dull. I think this article is very ups and downs. Isn't their experience very thrilling? [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking]
The author's writing is really good! The book is not long, but the story is very complete and smooth, and the plot has ups and downs, twists and turns. There are not many characters, but each one is full. Even characters who only appear in a few sentences, such as Red Scorpion, can get a glimpse of the character's emotions behind the text. Moreover, the author is logical, has a beginning and an end, and writes an ending for everyone. The author is very good at describing details, hiding emotions in many small eye movements, which is particularly picturesque. Again, I would like to praise the male and female protagonists. They really have very normal personalities and outlook. It is rare to find such a couple in novels nowadays. The male and female protagonists have no misunderstandings and will not be jealous of friends of the opposite sex. In the days when the male protagonist is away, the female protagonist has been doing what she can, working hard to grow up, and taking care of the family. She is really the kind of woman I have always admired, gentle and tough, wrapping ordinary days with love, and a woman with great wisdom. The only thing I feel a bit regretful about is that there are too many killer waves in Tuoling Town later on. Every time I try to mislead and set up a trap, it feels a bit repetitive. But overall it's very good!
Yes, the plot is novel, and the characters are also novel. However, the plot is too short. The part where the male protagonist fakes his own death and escapes from the killer organization on a mission is very concise. If the plot is carefully polished and the writing is more delicate, and it has 200,000 words, it will definitely be a hit! Of course it looks good now [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
Super good-looking and intelligent [adoration][adoration][adoration][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
It looks very good so far (´∀｀*). The author's writing style is good and the characters of the male and female protagonists are well created. However, I personally feel that sometimes the description of their emotions is a bit wordy.
It feels like the style of AI
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The writing is very delicate, the reading is moving, the descriptions are vivid, and the male and female protagonists are really sweet! The process is step by step, not hasty, but a long-lasting and deep feeling.
Along the way, the male protagonist and the female protagonist are keeping each other warm. The male protagonist's life is no longer full of blood and blood, and the female protagonist also has a warm home. They are growing up along the way. The calmness of the male protagonist and the gentleness of the female protagonist are so matched. I really like this [almost crying]
It's very good-looking and the setting is very attractive. Although Lin Wan is a mute girl who loves to cry, she has a very tough character, while Lu Chen is gentle and strong. The two of them live an ordinary life in a real sense. They don't have servants and maids. They have a rich family. They are a happy and simple couple, perfect.
A long stream of water is not a brainless novel. It is very interesting.
I've seen too many palace fights and house fights, and I felt pretty good after reading this kind of killer story.
This book is pretty good
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Very beautiful, so catchy
Very well written and beautiful
A very good novel
Very well written, very short and beautiful [Like]
Very nice! Very good writing
Good looking good looking good looking
Very touching, very poignant to me
Very good, I like this
It's so well written, I love reading it
The ending is too short. I hope the author will write more and read more good books.
Lu Chen and Lin Wan meet true friends in adversity
From then on, the killer went into seclusion and the mute girl had a family. Lu Qi and Xiao Linghua
It's okay. It's pretty.
It's nice to see two miserable children trying to save each other.
Pretty good. A mute girl with a miserable life experience × a charlatan killer is not a heroine, golden finger, strong woman, canary... Setting. Because of the grace of saving their lives, the two people came together, the mute girl had someone to rely on, and the killer had peace of mind. It's good that the author can finish the story according to the storyline without too many ups and downs, and it has a beginning and an end. The word count is small, no mistakes are made, and the writing is complete. Can be seen. The world is far away, May Lu Qi and Xiao Linghua (Lu Chen and Lin Wan) live in peace for the rest of their lives.
After reading the special comments, I found that although the novel is short, the characters and plot logic are very good. It belongs to the kind of long-running redemption novel. A poor mute girl who is not favored accidentally saves a cold-blooded and powerful killer. From then on, the gears of fate turn. On the way to escape, they gradually got used to and relied on each other, gained friends, and finally gave birth to a big fat child. From then on, the killer went into seclusion and the mute girl had a family. It's a perfect curtain call. I hope the author will reply after reading it to prove that there are readers who recognize your work. [Like][Like][Like]
It's good-looking, and it's a plain and true story. The previous focus is mainly on how the relationship between the male and female protagonists heats up. There is not much written about other things, but it does not feel boring to read because the author writes the psychological changes of the male and female protagonists in a very delicate and touching way. What follows is a turbulent situation, with the male and female protagonists moving toward peace little by little. The thing itself is not written much or complicated. It mainly writes about the feelings of the characters and the words that are very similar to the narration of the story (?). I don't know if the author will write some modern articles in the future, especially campus articles, but I feel that the author will write very well.
I don't know why so many people in the comment area say that this article is dull. I think this article is very ups and downs. Isn't their experience very thrilling? [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking]
The author's writing is really good! The book is not long, but the story is very complete and smooth, and the plot has ups and downs, twists and turns. There are not many characters, but each one is full. Even characters who only appear in a few sentences, such as Red Scorpion, can get a glimpse of the character's emotions behind the text. Moreover, the author is logical, has a beginning and an end, and writes an ending for everyone. The author is very good at describing details, hiding emotions in many small eye movements, which is particularly picturesque. Again, I would like to praise the male and female protagonists. They really have very normal personalities and outlook. It is rare to find such a couple in novels nowadays. The male and female protagonists have no misunderstandings and will not be jealous of friends of the opposite sex. In the days when the male protagonist is away, the female protagonist has been doing what she can, working hard to grow up, and taking care of the family. She is really the kind of woman I have always admired, gentle and tough, wrapping ordinary days with love, and a woman with great wisdom. The only thing I feel a bit regretful about is that there are too many killer waves in Tuoling Town later on. Every time I try to mislead and set up a trap, it feels a bit repetitive. But overall it's very good!
Yes, the plot is novel, and the characters are also novel. However, the plot is too short. The part where the male protagonist fakes his own death and escapes from the killer organization on a mission is very concise. If the plot is carefully polished and the writing is more delicate, and it has 200,000 words, it will definitely be a hit! Of course it looks good now [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
Super good-looking and intelligent [adoration][adoration][adoration][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
It looks very good so far (´∀｀*). The author's writing style is good and the characters of the male and female protagonists are well created. However, I personally feel that sometimes the description of their emotions is a bit wordy.
It feels like the style of AI
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The writing is very delicate, the reading is moving, the descriptions are vivid, and the male and female protagonists are really sweet! The process is step by step, not hasty, but a long-lasting and deep feeling. Along the way, the male protagonist and the female protagonist are keeping each other warm. The male protagonist's life is no longer full of blood and blood, and the female protagonist also has a warm home. They are growing up along the way. The calmness of the male protagonist and the gentleness of the female protagonist are so matched. I really like this [almost crying]
It's very good-looking and the setting is very attractive. Although Lin Wan is a mute girl who loves to cry, she has a very tough character, while Lu Chen is gentle and strong. The two of them live an ordinary life in a real sense. They don't have servants and maids. They have a rich family. They are a happy and simple couple, perfect.
A long stream of water is not a brainless novel. It is very interesting.
I've seen too many palace fights and house fights, and I felt pretty good after reading this kind of killer story.
This book is pretty good
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Very beautiful, so catchy
Very well written and beautiful
A very good novel
Very well written, very short and beautiful [Like]
Very nice! Very good writing
Good looking good looking good looking
Very touching, very poignant to me
Very good, I like this
It's so well written, I love reading it
The ending is too short. I hope the author will write more and read more good books.
Lu Chen and Lin Wan meet true friends in adversity
From then on, the killer went into seclusion and the mute girl had a family. Lu Qi and Xiao Linghua
It's okay. It's pretty.
It's nice to see two miserable children trying to save each other.