Journey to the West: Just When I Was About to Turn My Corpse into an Immortal, the Monkey Came Looking for Me

It's so exciting. I haven't seen such a touching fairy tale novel in a long time. There are not so many matryoshka dolls and miscellaneous realms. The characters are also very good. It turns out that not all fairy tale protagonists are inexplicably hunted down and then counterattack. The background. In the pre-Qin Dynasty, the protagonist turned his corpse into an immortal. Now he has become an earthly immortal and is no longer a mortal. Golden Finger can acquire more powerful spells by taking on apprentices, mastering the techniques and improving them, which can be cultivation techniques, spells, formations, treasure refining techniques, etc. The plot has just reached Ximen Leopard's rule in Ye. In addition to transforming into a ghost valley, there are also the troubles caused by your own scattered spells. You said that spells are thrown out without distinction of good or bad. I am still thinking about how to calculate the cause and effect. Now, in order to avoid affecting history, you should assist the Qin Dynasty to use burning books and entrapping Confucians to solve the problem of scattered spells. I don't know how many times it has boomeranged [laughing awkwardly]. It can be logically solved, but do you still remember the name of your book? Good guy, these 300 of you may not be able to enter the main line of Journey to the West, right?

I was attracted by the title of the book and clicked it casually. I thought it was just another cool book, but I didn't expect to find a treasure by accident! The protagonist is an old immortal with a true Taoist character. He does not kill innocent people indiscriminately and is not keen on grabbing treasures and power. He only seeks Taoism and has a calm mind. His behavior is completely in line with the appearance of immortals in traditional folk customs. It is very comfortable to watch. There is no sensationalism in order to make up the plot, and there is no awkward emotional line forced on the heroine. It is clean and calming to read. In the opening chapter, the protagonist is about to disintegrate into an immortal, and Sun Wukong comes to visit. The plot connection is naturally unobtrusive, and the overall rhythm is slow but very gripping. It feels like you are really reading a traditional mythological story, full of fairy spirit. Among the books full of cool articles about killing and killing, and system hacking, this one is really a breath of fresh air. The author has worked so hard to write this kind of story with a calm Taoist heart and a smoky atmosphere without losing the fairy charm! I sincerely recommend it to friends who like orthodox fairy tales but don't like mindless and cool writing. It's definitely worth a read and I give it five stars!

Different from the prehistoric concepts on the Internet, breaking away from the stereotyped life, many concepts and ideas are taken from the traditional Journey to the West model, which makes people's eyes brighter. You are not replacing anyone or being a stand-in for anyone. It is good to live your own life. Don't pay attention to those fellow authors who write negative reviews. Those people are all bad at writing and cannot see the good writing of others. Stick to what you think in your heart, work hard to polish the details, and focus on the plot. Come on!

A good book, with a fairy-tale feel. As long as AI is not used in character creation, the quality can be considered high-quality.

This novel is amazing at first glance, but it gets better and better the more you read it. The protagonist fakes his death at the beginning to escape, uses peach wood to deceive the evil spirits, and fakes his death to become a ghost and immortal. Although there is a hangup in the end, he does not follow the traditional immortality routine, but takes a new path. It gives me a feeling of ancient immortality novels. Although it is not as grand as the narrative of the four famous works, it still gives people a deep spiritual satisfaction. , The author's writing is smooth, the plot is full of tasks, each stroke seems to be vividly written on the paper, and the plot is euphemistically told, which is breathtaking. This book is a rare masterpiece. I hope the author will not forget to update it day and night, keep improving day and night, and bring us more content [laugh][laugh][laugh]

A traditional Xianxia, ​​a down-to-earth Xianxia. The protagonist does not refuse to help the people because of their stupidity, and the people do not know anything about it. Helping the Monkey Brother does not forcefully highlight the protagonist's superiority immediately, but describes the cuteness of the Monkey Brother, especially like the cuteness and mischief of the Monkey Brother in the old version of Journey to the West. Who knows? [Adoration] And the current comedian is the Donkey King, haha

An old Taoist article on cultivating immortality, a classic! This poem alone can capture the essence of Journey to the West. Not gold, not wood, not copper, it was once in the underworld. Not relying on alchemy furnaces for civil and military training, just relying on the skills of birth, old age, sickness and death. The place where the flag is illuminated still looks like a child, and when the old flag is waved, it looks like a white-haired man. As soon as the flag of disease is displayed, the plague rises, and the flag of death hangs down, and all the souls are empty. Even if you are a foreigner from outside the world, entering this formation is like a dream.

The old fairy tale is full of fairy spirit. I have only written more than 40 chapters and I can already smell the scent of the best fairy grass. Please update soon [Note][Note][Note]

Good book. It's not a gangster cultivating immortality, or a wild fight. It's very interesting.

This is a very surprising novel, both in terms of subject matter and description method, but it is very comfortable to read. In the current environment of tomato novel creation and even in the entire Internet literary circle, it is really gratifying that such a unique novel can appear. He uses antique description methods and antique narrative methods to depict a scene of Journey to the West, allowing us to see a piece of pure land even though we are surrounded by bloody stories.

It's good to watch. Although it is based on the theme of Journey to the West, it does not completely rely on the original work in terms of plot. The description at the beginning was a bit vague, but later on, it became more and more like a classic novel about gods and demons. Just before the little monkey speaks. It is often described as crispy and raw. If this word is used too much, it can be a bit dramatic. However, it does not affect the overall plot.

The background of Journey to the West is very well written and has a lot of feeling. Some people may think that the donkey is a poisonous point, but I feel okay. I have to be the ancestor of the side sect, and saving talents should be the state of spiritual practice. The only thing I feel uncomfortable may be that it is a bit different from the fairy queen character at the beginning. There is no turning point, and it feels like I have reached the psychological state of pure cultivation [Thoughts]

So far it looks good. Unlike many fairy tales on Tomato that have a whiff of AI. The writing style and plot are exactly the same, the protagonist is like a dead person, and there is no character arc at all.

It's really, really good-looking. The protagonist really has that kind of fairy-like feeling. It's the first time I watched Journey to the West without the prehistoric times. It really has a different feeling. As long as there is no inexplicable heroine in the follow-up, or a harem, it will definitely be a masterpiece. (It's not that it's not possible to have a female protagonist. The main reason is that I read too many novels that could have made me a god. As a result, the male protagonist lost all his brains as soon as he fell in love, and completely turned into an animal that thinks with his lower body. You have to be reasonable. Wow, oh, oh, oh, oh)

The setting and worldview are not complicated. Compared with the complicated ones like The Ancient World and The Gods, it is even very simple. The author's literary skills are somewhat special, and the writing style is a fusion of old and new. It is neither too old-fashioned nor too vernacular. It has a unique flavor and a very relaxed look and feel.

The writing is really good, and the author is talented. It's a pity that in Tomato, it's just readers. The protagonist is teasing children. What's wrong with this? Isn't this how you play with children?

The writing in Tomato is absolutely top-notch, the story is smooth, the plot is clear, the context is clear, and the characters are well created. But there is an obvious problem. The writing style is a bit like ancient vernacular novels, which leads to weak combat descriptions, confusing combat power, and some literary passages-character dialogues deviate from daily life, but this is also an advantage. If you like it, you can take a look. If you haven't seen this type before, you can try it. It can become gold.

It's good-looking, good-looking, and rare. And I don't think it has AI writing so far. I just feel a little bit cheated. I watched it for Brother Hou, but I didn't see the follow-up about Brother Monkey not being able to find the protagonist [crying]

Not bad, better than those cookie-cutter ones

The author's writing style is very good. When I first saw the theme of "Journey to the West", I thought it was just like the ancient times. But after reading it, I realized that it has some feeling of a classical romance about gods and demons, including the writing style. The writing on the front looks really good, and the taste is good. But the question is, don't you think what you wrote is too ink? What is your title? I really thought it was pretty good at first, but it's getting more and more boring.

Overall, the book was okay, and it looked pretty good, but I still felt like the plot went by so fast (a bit like eating fast food). Then, the description of various ghosts, immortals, earthly immortals, etc., Who clearly reside in the realm of the plot characters, is not careful and delicate enough. How to slowly gather the three flowers on the top and slowly transform into realms lacks the delicacy of the fairy novels that gradually climb the realm. In fact, not only the description of cultivation, the characteristics during and after the transformation state, and the things in the current state that are unique to the state are not detailed enough, but also about magical powers, magic, etc. Moreover, heresy, related to elixirs, utensils, talismans, spells, sorcery, etc., Are all just given names. He is obviously the founder of heresy and the lord of heresy. However, the plot only briefly mentions the spells related to heresy without describing in detail some of the heresy. Regarding the heretical things, I just occasionally wrote a little bit of the plot, such as using a spell to kill the old woman, cutting the grass horse, etc. If the heresy is not important to the protagonist, the author writes that everyone is willing to respect this ancestor of the heresy and feels that it is very important. In addition to the above-mentioned feeling of a fast food, and the lack of detailed descriptions of realms, techniques, etc., The plot does not have too many heretical descriptions of techniques, practice, fighting, and display of the protagonist. In fact, it still looks okay. The problem mentioned above can be ignored by the brain (if the author can see it, You can think about it and polish the subsequent plot carefully. Of course, detailed description does not mean that Luo Liba talks about the settings, so you have to control the scale yourself. I followed more than 300 chapters and found that the average paragraph comments and chapters were very few. If I want to optimize the above issues, the score may be better, and the paragraph comments and chapter comments will increase).

It can be said to be the best fantasy derivative novel I have ever read. The author has a very profound accumulation of Taoist culture and history. The story begins with Sun Wukong's apprenticeship and seeks martial arts. It is set in the Spring and Autumn Period and combines fantasy themes related to Journey to the West with history. Although it is a derivative novel, there are detailed allusions everywhere that can be explored in depth.

The ancestor of the side sect, the monkey who is devoted to regaining things, the one who hits people with the cane the most painful, the one who can pinch and count the backs of others, the one who is very diligent in changing mounts, the one who has disciples all over the world, the most careless old Taoist Tao Qian.

Where did this come from? Is this still a tomato? You can say that this novel is written like the reincarnation of Wu Cheng'en and has a unique flavor, you know? I personally recommend it with five stars. The writing is comfortable, the plot is smooth, and the timeline is not confusing. It can be said that as long as the author keeps writing, it will definitely be a masterpiece.

It is rare that this book is not one of those prehistoric versions of Journey to the West, nor does it contain those disgusting conspiracy theories. It has its own main storyline, and it's not too violent. It's just that the part where you meet a ghost and fight against a wall in heaven is not easy to tell. Also, don't be confused about who the protagonist is.

This book has the flavor of an early mythological novel. The author's writing style is really good and he has his own ideas. It's not like other novels that have a lot of realms and will be forgotten after reading it. The setting is also relatively retro. Generally speaking, I recommend reading it and finishing it.

I feel that Desk has a certain literary background. The unique novel has an inexplicable feeling like reading the four major classics. Some of the descriptions are very ancient and have the flavor of Water Margin. Some words are particularly wonderful, and the plot arrangement is also reasonable. It is not an ordinary novel. The novel feels cheating and so on. I feel very comfortable reading it.

A very nice novel! The logic is awesome, and the style is close to that of Water Margin, but simpler, and it reads like a storyteller. The male protagonist is also awesome, he's like a ghost valley. It seems that there is no female protagonist at the moment.

It's good to watch, but I feel a little frustrated. Some people scolded me and laughed. Although I can understand it, I just feel uncomfortable. It doesn't say how handsome the protagonist is like in ordinary novels. Instead, the image is still that of a white-haired old man. To me, it doesn't make sense. It doesn't mean that it must be handsome, but it doesn't mean that it can't fit into the mentality of an elderly person.

I thought this was an ordinary Journey to the West novel, but after reading it, I realized that there is something special about it. I was really surprised. Among the nearly 2,000 books I have read, this one is also among the best. It is very interesting. Come on, the author should not be unfinished.