Legend of Living Heroes: Yun Shang and Mo Ling's Threesome Strategy

Children come in a black box. The author has something to say. Come on, the big brother who writes Mo Ling Yun Chang Zhuan [blowing kiss]🥰

First of all, I am a reader from tb, where the author has spent half a year serializing the second half of the book, so I can be sure that the author will definitely complete the book and not make it eunuch! Credibility deserves recognition! Secondly, putting aside the details of the plot, the author has a strong grasp of every subtle emotional change in the relationship with the two heroines. Whether it is the tacit understanding with the childhood sweetheart of the junior sister, or the pursuit of redemption with Yun Shang, the little devil from the sky, they are all portrayed extremely profoundly [shy] [shy] [shy] There are many originals! Yes, if you are a classmate of youth romance Japanese comics or love light novels, don't miss it. The author's writing is not inferior to the classic Japanese comics at all [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] Of course, if you are a player of the Huoxia game, then this book is not to be missed. For example, the author has his own thoughts on many minor setting issues in the original work, such as why Fuyun and Fugui came to Shuzhong, and why Brother Huo can promote the reconstruction of the Tang Sect. He has also well added [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] and some vivid secondary characters. There are also many original plots by authors, which I estimate account for more than half of the space.

It's a surprising work. After all, I only found it from the system recommendation at first, and I thought it would be bad because it didn't have any ratings. But after reading a few chapters, I felt unexpected. It is different from the second game of Legend of the Living Heroes in Persimmon. This one abandons the system numerical perspective of the original game, allowing people to better enter the character's perspective without suddenly feeling out of place. So you can eat it with confidence. The performances of junior junior sister Tang Moling and adopted sister Ye Yunshang are not that OOC, and in most cases they are in line with the original work. Although only the two little ones ended up with Brother Huo in the end, the other characters who got married also had a happy ending. Compared to a real full harem, it is obviously more reasonable for two little ones to be together. And this will not lead to too many harem characters, uneven descriptions, and overly facial expressions. Of course, I don't find the junior sister ⭐🦆🐜 to be inconsistent. Maybe the junior sister should really look like this from my perspective. Wukou + Seyu's little junior sister is indeed invincible. Speaking of originality, from a personal perspective, the originality of this book is considered to be very good among Tomatoes [face covering]. It can only be said that there are too few second creations in your game. Whether it's Tang Yan's character design or the extra plot of the two little ones, after watching it, I can't help but go to TB to catch up on the follow-up. So don't worry about interruptions or eunuchs. Tang Yan is a character that was not originally there. Adding her own emotional line here can be regarded as adding more plausibility to the plot of the junior sister and the living brother being together. Generally speaking, it is highly recommended. Compared with the other 🍅very popular Xia Zhuan fanfic, I think this one is not bad either in terms of character creation or plot. I don't know why Tomato didn't promote this book. I can see that it is fate. Maybe it is the title of the book? I can only say that there is no one who can say that it is a masterpiece. Also, I really need to train the author a little better. Two little candies are still not enough. Everyone can come to the group to whip it (oxen and horses) together and write more. [Cover face]

I came from the forum. The author's writing is so sweet. I love to eat. The two little ones just want to be wives together. [Laughs][Laughs] It's beautiful. I love watching it. The part where we got married is so sweet.

Okay, okay, a lot of original game content has been inserted, which can be understood even if you haven't watched the game, and some original content has been added.

The protagonist is ugly, everything goes wrong, and he is a bit of a bad guy. His little junior sister is his spiritual support. But the protagonist is honest, kind and motivated, and has good popularity. The plot is not boring to watch. The junior sister and Ye Yunshang are very cute. After reading too many different routines, this book makes me look good. I will comment again after seeing the latest chapter Jinxiang Palace. The first thing to mention is that the emotions are sincere and complex. Because of the enrichment of various daily plots, the emotions of both the protagonist and the supporting characters appear real and humane. The incident in the Tang Sect is a small climax of the plot conflict and a prominent manifestation of emotional entanglement. Shou Yunshang and Mo Ling are an explosion of emotions accumulated in daily interactions, which is very exciting. By the way, the characters are also very vivid, and the characters' language and behavior are very distinctive. As for the plot, the main line is the development and changes of the Tang Sect and the emotional line of the two heroines. In the middle, Yun Shang's various ways of doing things fill in a lot of daily plots, but it does not make people feel bored. Many of the stories in the middle are detailed enough to describe the dangers of the world and the complexity of people's hearts. Some of the evil villains written in just a few strokes are full of malice and heart-stopping. It's still unclear how the situation in the sect's arena will develop, and we look forward to the follow-up.

There is only one question, what does the author mean by creating a senior sister named Tang Yan? What role does it play?

Start with a 4-star rating. If the experience is good, change it to a 5-star rating.

The addition of an original character, Tang Yan, is okay and not obtrusive.

Come on, big brother who wrote the biography of the living hero

I saw the author push it from Ab, let me use my spiritual sense to investigate. Advantages: The writing style is excellent and can be called a breath of fresh air in Tomato. It would be irresponsible to say that the second creation of the Legend of the Living Heroes is a bit unfair (dog head saves life) It imitates the writing style of Bird and Bear very well, and also retains the author's own characteristics. It will be very comfortable for those who have played the game. The overall story direction is based on the original work but the original plot and characters are impressive and not obtrusive (my senior sister Tang Yan [crying]) Disadvantages: The second person mentioned by the author himself (it varies from person to person and is not considered a shortcoming). Other than that, I can't find any faults. Suggestion: Update 20,000 words a day so I can find faults more

Author, go kill the bird bear

Really pretty

Although not all female protagonists can achieve perfection, it is still very touching.

I'm from Tieba. Please give me some support. Is this senior sister a player's avatar or something like that?

I've seen Chapter 60, and Coffee's game is not online yet. Can I beat Rui Sheng later?

The book is beautiful! Dreams are also delicious [Adoration]

@Hahahahahaha [laughing evilly]

Second brush, very beautiful

Why are you so good at writing [crying]

It's very interesting and well-written. It's still my favorite Yun Shang Mo Ling. Like suki. Five stars for encouragement, come on [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]