(The new book is finished and the ratings are increasing~)
[Cultivation] + [System] + [Micro Group Portrait] + [Funny]
The notorious perverted salted fish was attacked by the flower of Kaoling to death.
Tangyuanyu, as the name suggests, is a salted fish, and likes to lie flat, a standard college student with crispy skin.
On a whim, he acted bravely and single-handedly captured the notorious campus pervert. As a result, he fell into the lake and drowned due to hypoglycemia.
In the blink of an eye, you are reborn in the world of cultivation, bind the system and complete the task, and you can return to your original life path.
Tanglanyu: Can this system make me feared by everyone?
System: Of course.
Tanglanyu: Can this system make me invincible?
System: required.
Tanglanyu: Great! Is this system the infinite ultimate domination system or the supreme invincible crushing system?
System: It's a perverted professional training system, dear.
Tanglanyu:?
System: As a qualified pervert, wherever you go, your personal dignity disappears, and your moral bottom line disappears. People will feel fear when they hear your name. When you do everything you can to win, you will inevitably be unfavorable. And all you need to pay is just a little insignificant thing about you.
Tanglanyu: (wary) Although I am 0, I can't lose my style, right?
System: ... You are the pervert, right? I'm talking about conscience!
[Lightning Protection Guide]: Non-traditional cool writing, micro-group portraits, slow-burning, he
Reader comments
This work has a lot of hot memes on the Internet. I don't usually like to read online articles that are filled with hot memes. Most of the similar works just slap together the punchlines, the writing is empty and perfunctory, and the content is interesting but without any structure. It is a test of my writing skills.
But this book is completely different. The overall logic is smooth and solid. The protagonist Xianyu looks very casual. He can leave the system after completing the first dungeon. He can deduce many plot details without the help of the system. His IQ is online and his ability to adapt to the situation is full. Various interesting jokes are naturally interspersed with the characters. The look and feel is lively and interesting. It is not a flow of writing that only focuses on throwing out jokes and ignoring character creation.
At first, I thought this was just an old-fashioned novel with a funny twist: Thousands of people dislike the protagonist, who accumulates popularity along the way and gains favor from everyone. Although the story does have a somewhat relaxed tone, it far exceeded my expectations. The protagonist never relies solely on external forces to cheat all the way. He has his own plans and actions, and there is a feeling that effort and reward are proportional. This setting is particularly poignant.
In group portraits, many supporting characters have quite a lot of roles. If you like group portraits, you can give it a try. After watching half of it, it is not difficult to find that it is not only the protagonist who is outstanding, but the supporting characters also have many highlight scenes. When the plot turns to a serious and heavy paragraph, the author will not forcefully insert meaningless jokes to destroy the atmosphere, and the sense of proportion of jokes is just right. This is a micro-group portrait work with a good sense of atmosphere. The portrayals of the protagonists and various NPCs are particularly three-dimensional, and the IQs of all the characters are online throughout. The plot is witty and recognizable, and the scenes that reveal the past lives of the characters are also very easy to cry.
The main plot is also good, with a lot of twists and turns. To be honest, it's quite interesting.
Of course, there are also small logical flaws in the work. For example, in the first copy, Yao Guang is cautiously guarded everywhere, but he only lets down his guard against salted fish. He is still a big colander. It can be said that his brain has been trained to GG through practice or he is too confident. The setting of only guarding against the big boss and not against the little Karami can barely make sense.
In fact, I recoded this long comment several times (I used Miaomiao Technology props to modify it later, so it will have a bit of a human-computer feel), because it has not been approved after I sent it several times, alas. .
As for the love line, there is relatively little writing about the love line, and it is considered love at first sight. The plot is more concentrated in the later stages, but the plot is pretty good to make up for this, so I can accept this book.
As for the ending plot, the line of Xianyu becoming the leader, well, I feel it is actually a bit inexplicable. It is right that Xianyu has his own choice, but since he is obsessed with going back but can leave his senior brother behind, the senior brother is also doing the finishing work for whether he can go home. Everything happened in the back and the evil talent was broken. Everyone was busy and was stabbed in the back. The sacrifice flow was followed later. The ending always felt a bit hasty. In short, it was quite contradictory. I couldn't understand it and was a bit confused.
Some of the pitfalls in the text have been more or less corrected in the extras.
No deputy cp
When I saw the author saying that this book was a hit, I felt that the quality of the book was not that bad, the light and dark lines were well connected, and the plot was quite attractive (in fact, I just came to my senses and got to chapter 190).
I guess it's not good at pushing. Best wishes.
The opening chapter is very attractive, and the author is also very interesting. Everyone in the group portrait team has a complete and unique story line. The supporting characters also have vivid personalities, and the foreshadowing laid out will be well-written. In the later period, the author insisted on finishing the plot but had no energy to refine it. It is a pity, because after reading the entire book, you will find that there is a complete story frame and narrative. However, the push mechanism and ratings of Mysterious Tomatoes resulted in very few people reading it, and there were also very few comments and interactions. Moreover, the author also said that the book was a hit, which resulted in the later period not being as good as the early stage and making it difficult for teachers. It is really impossible to persist in generating electricity purely for love. I hope this book can be seen by more people.
Very beautiful! ! Baby Salted Fish is cute and cute. I want to know the ending of the main text. Did Salted Fish use that prop and then reversed the situation, so he returned to modern times? Then the extra story said that Zangjin went to modern times, so why didn't Little Salted Fish use this prop at that time? Actually, I didn't understand the ending, but overall it's really awesome! The teacher's writing is also very good, and the group portraits are the best! !
He, I personally don't think it has a secondary CP. It's a bit tricky in the later stage but the finale is very comfortable.
To be honest, the writing is quite good. There are some flaws, but the points are more interesting than the flaws. The setting of the protagonist is sometimes very awkward, but he is shameless and sometimes has a unique flavor. At first, I thought he was a cool guy, but later I found out that he is a sultry guy. It is really interesting. The plot is also very unique. It is not a special routine. At least it made me feel fresh. The interaction between the supporting characters and the shaping of the supporting characters are also very perfect, highlighting the protagonist but not marginalizing the supporting characters.
If the data of this book were better, it should be 9.9 Or so. It is really not easy for the author to write a complete book when the data is very poor.
I haven't written a book review for a long time and I don't know what to write. I hope the author will continue to work hard!
I thought it was lighthearted and funny, but I found it was not. Looking forward to further developments. [Think]
Very nice! I really like the protagonist's character! ! The plot is also very novel, especially the part about the undercover Acacia sect. I haven't read a novel in a long time and my aunt smiled. It was so cute. . . And it focuses on praising the author's female consciousness. He does not blindly set all the important characters except the protagonist as male. I am really happy to see many plump female characters, not just as tool people! ! This is the first time I have read such a comfortable book about cultivating immortals! Come on, author! !
I just threw this book on the bookshelf. I didn't open it because the character design didn't suit my taste. But I was in a literary shortage, so I noticed this book. I just read two chapters and the author's writing style and plot captured my heart. It's very good, and the setting is really novel.
This is the first time I have reviewed a book on Tomato for a long time. In fact, the story logic and narrative line of the whole book as well as the characteristics of each character are quite good. However, I can see that the connection and emotional foreshadowing of individual parts are a bit empty later (for example, I can empathize with Wanfa Zong). The dungeon, but I still feel that the two senior sisters and the Tongbeishi Sacrifice dungeon are not good enough, but they are also very good. Unfortunately, the necessity of the appearance of fellow villagers → the necessity of the system to bring so many people to this world has not been obtained, and the extra story after rebirth has not been eaten). But I have to say that the idea is actually very novel. It is really precious to see an author who writes about "cause and effect" and "morality" so carefully in a software atmosphere where everyone is using templates to get pass rates, cool points, and dopamine~
It's very interesting. I think the experiences of everyone in the theme group are well written. I cried when writing the memories of each of them. Whether I was moved or sad, this article portrays the protagonist. I think it is also very good. He is flesh and blood and has a three-dimensional view. I really recommend everyone who reads this book to keep reading [Blow kiss]
It looks so good, why is it so funny to lie down like a salted fish? He is also very smart and his writing style is quite humorous. Each character is quite fleshed out and basically has a cause and effect, and there is no character that I really dislike. For example, the scene between Wen Renjian and Du from Wanfa Sect, I really didn't expect that Wen Ren burned himself to save Du, and then Du felt guilty and saved Wen Ren. That scene was so cool. It feels like I haven't seen this type of supporting role in a long time. Then there's Unjust Money, Bao Dan Tong Zi Shen, and the veterinarian Li Hua. Their settings are also very unique and fun. Gives people a refreshing feeling. I was feeling bored at night, so I came across this book by chance. I was attracted by the name, and then I went in to read it. The more I read, the more I became obsessed with it.
Super pretty! It's a pity that it's not very popular. More people will definitely watch it in the future. The salted fish is super cute.
It's really beautiful! Everyone has their own heroic dream! No matter if I start over again, I will lose the courage and strength to save you, but I hope you will not lose the heart to resist!
The words "recovering cause and effect, and fate playing tricks on people" are really vividly reflected in this book! Everyone should be happy
How can it be so beautiful? The structure is clear and clear, and every pitfall is filled in. The author's writing style is very good. It feels like I am back to the time when I was not a poisonous woman. Apart from wanting the author to write another 1 million words of extras after the completion, I strongly recommend this article. It is really good-looking.
，！ ! ! ! The foreshadowing is also well laid, and many of them are only realized after seeing it.
Made me laugh. Hahahahaha 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣I'm a good boy, I really know how to write
It's so good. Why didn't I discover this treasure earlier? ? I will share it with all my friends. I am so excited. How come our little salted fish is so perverted and cute at the same time? The plot is very interesting. I will give this novel a five-star rating. It is very awesome.
It's okay. I feel that the emotional line of the protagonist is not very clear. I fell in love with it out of nowhere. I don't know, maybe it was love at first sight.
After reading to the end, I really couldn't get into it. The book is okay.
Why is this rating so low? I'll tell you the truth, I'll tell you for nothing, this book is awesome.
God must give you a ram within a ram (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
The group portrait is so awesome that CP Hao, a group of little bitter gourds, gather together every day and cry bitterly in one second, and then become unserious the next. The people watching are so impressed. .
It's good, but the ending is a bit confusing
This is the serial book that I miss the most. I have to read it again and again after it is updated. I am twice as happy. It is so beautiful.
Very interesting! Super pretty! [Sending Hearts][Love]
Not bad, not bad. The plot may be very painful, but there are many jokes to make up for it. It's quite interesting.
I originally wanted to complain that there were too many supporting characters, but then I discovered that there were "micro-group portraits" in the copy. Okay, I'm blind. As expected, I'm still not suitable for this kind of novel.
It's good to watch, but it's still being updated and I have to stock it up. It's a bit sad [crying]. I'm also very interesting. The protagonist is also very funny.
It looks good, and the writing is good, but it's a bit too bitter, and the salted fish has become bitter salted fish.
The ending was a little rushed, but overall it was so exciting and beautiful.
I'll go, I'll go. It's like a fairy. It's very beautiful.
One of the few that can be read on Tomato, it's so good to watch, more extras!
This work has a lot of hot memes on the Internet. I don't usually like to read online articles that are filled with hot memes. Most of the similar works just slap together the punchlines, the writing is empty and perfunctory, and the content is interesting but without any structure. It is a test of my writing skills. But this book is completely different. The overall logic is smooth and solid. The protagonist Xianyu looks very casual. He can leave the system after completing the first dungeon. He can deduce many plot details without the help of the system. His IQ is online and his ability to adapt to the situation is full. Various interesting jokes are naturally interspersed with the characters. The look and feel is lively and interesting. It is not a flow of writing that only focuses on throwing out jokes and ignoring character creation. At first, I thought this was just an old-fashioned novel with a funny twist: Thousands of people dislike the protagonist, who accumulates popularity along the way and gains favor from everyone. Although the story does have a somewhat relaxed tone, it far exceeded my expectations. The protagonist never relies solely on external forces to cheat all the way. He has his own plans and actions, and there is a feeling that effort and reward are proportional. This setting is particularly poignant. In group portraits, many supporting characters have quite a lot of roles. If you like group portraits, you can give it a try. After watching half of it, it is not difficult to find that it is not only the protagonist who is outstanding, but the supporting characters also have many highlight scenes. When the plot turns to a serious and heavy paragraph, the author will not forcefully insert meaningless jokes to destroy the atmosphere, and the sense of proportion of jokes is just right. This is a micro-group portrait work with a good sense of atmosphere. The portrayals of the protagonists and various NPCs are particularly three-dimensional, and the IQs of all the characters are online throughout. The plot is witty and recognizable, and the scenes that reveal the past lives of the characters are also very easy to cry. The main plot is also good, with a lot of twists and turns. To be honest, it's quite interesting. Of course, there are also small logical flaws in the work. For example, in the first copy, Yao Guang is cautiously guarded everywhere, but he only lets down his guard against salted fish. He is still a big colander. It can be said that his brain has been trained to GG through practice or he is too confident. The setting of only guarding against the big boss and not against the little Karami can barely make sense. In fact, I recoded this long comment several times (I used Miaomiao Technology props to modify it later, so it will have a bit of a human-computer feel), because it has not been approved after I sent it several times, alas. . As for the love line, there is relatively little writing about the love line, and it is considered love at first sight. The plot is more concentrated in the later stages, but the plot is pretty good to make up for this, so I can accept this book. As for the ending plot, the line of Xianyu becoming the leader, well, I feel it is actually a bit inexplicable. It is right that Xianyu has his own choice, but since he is obsessed with going back but can leave his senior brother behind, the senior brother is also doing the finishing work for whether he can go home. Everything happened in the back and the evil talent was broken. Everyone was busy and was stabbed in the back. The sacrifice flow was followed later. The ending always felt a bit hasty. In short, it was quite contradictory. I couldn't understand it and was a bit confused. Some of the pitfalls in the text have been more or less corrected in the extras. No deputy cp When I saw the author saying that this book was a hit, I felt that the quality of the book was not that bad, the light and dark lines were well connected, and the plot was quite attractive (in fact, I just came to my senses and got to chapter 190). I guess it's not good at pushing. Best wishes.
The opening chapter is very attractive, and the author is also very interesting. Everyone in the group portrait team has a complete and unique story line. The supporting characters also have vivid personalities, and the foreshadowing laid out will be well-written. In the later period, the author insisted on finishing the plot but had no energy to refine it. It is a pity, because after reading the entire book, you will find that there is a complete story frame and narrative. However, the push mechanism and ratings of Mysterious Tomatoes resulted in very few people reading it, and there were also very few comments and interactions. Moreover, the author also said that the book was a hit, which resulted in the later period not being as good as the early stage and making it difficult for teachers. It is really impossible to persist in generating electricity purely for love. I hope this book can be seen by more people.
Very beautiful! ! Baby Salted Fish is cute and cute. I want to know the ending of the main text. Did Salted Fish use that prop and then reversed the situation, so he returned to modern times? Then the extra story said that Zangjin went to modern times, so why didn't Little Salted Fish use this prop at that time? Actually, I didn't understand the ending, but overall it's really awesome! The teacher's writing is also very good, and the group portraits are the best! !
He, I personally don't think it has a secondary CP. It's a bit tricky in the later stage but the finale is very comfortable. To be honest, the writing is quite good. There are some flaws, but the points are more interesting than the flaws. The setting of the protagonist is sometimes very awkward, but he is shameless and sometimes has a unique flavor. At first, I thought he was a cool guy, but later I found out that he is a sultry guy. It is really interesting. The plot is also very unique. It is not a special routine. At least it made me feel fresh. The interaction between the supporting characters and the shaping of the supporting characters are also very perfect, highlighting the protagonist but not marginalizing the supporting characters. If the data of this book were better, it should be 9.9 Or so. It is really not easy for the author to write a complete book when the data is very poor. I haven't written a book review for a long time and I don't know what to write. I hope the author will continue to work hard!
I thought it was lighthearted and funny, but I found it was not. Looking forward to further developments. [Think]
Very nice! I really like the protagonist's character! ! The plot is also very novel, especially the part about the undercover Acacia sect. I haven't read a novel in a long time and my aunt smiled. It was so cute. . . And it focuses on praising the author's female consciousness. He does not blindly set all the important characters except the protagonist as male. I am really happy to see many plump female characters, not just as tool people! ! This is the first time I have read such a comfortable book about cultivating immortals! Come on, author! !
I just threw this book on the bookshelf. I didn't open it because the character design didn't suit my taste. But I was in a literary shortage, so I noticed this book. I just read two chapters and the author's writing style and plot captured my heart. It's very good, and the setting is really novel.
This is the first time I have reviewed a book on Tomato for a long time. In fact, the story logic and narrative line of the whole book as well as the characteristics of each character are quite good. However, I can see that the connection and emotional foreshadowing of individual parts are a bit empty later (for example, I can empathize with Wanfa Zong). The dungeon, but I still feel that the two senior sisters and the Tongbeishi Sacrifice dungeon are not good enough, but they are also very good. Unfortunately, the necessity of the appearance of fellow villagers → the necessity of the system to bring so many people to this world has not been obtained, and the extra story after rebirth has not been eaten). But I have to say that the idea is actually very novel. It is really precious to see an author who writes about "cause and effect" and "morality" so carefully in a software atmosphere where everyone is using templates to get pass rates, cool points, and dopamine~
It's very interesting. I think the experiences of everyone in the theme group are well written. I cried when writing the memories of each of them. Whether I was moved or sad, this article portrays the protagonist. I think it is also very good. He is flesh and blood and has a three-dimensional view. I really recommend everyone who reads this book to keep reading [Blow kiss]
It looks so good, why is it so funny to lie down like a salted fish? He is also very smart and his writing style is quite humorous. Each character is quite fleshed out and basically has a cause and effect, and there is no character that I really dislike. For example, the scene between Wen Renjian and Du from Wanfa Sect, I really didn't expect that Wen Ren burned himself to save Du, and then Du felt guilty and saved Wen Ren. That scene was so cool. It feels like I haven't seen this type of supporting role in a long time. Then there's Unjust Money, Bao Dan Tong Zi Shen, and the veterinarian Li Hua. Their settings are also very unique and fun. Gives people a refreshing feeling. I was feeling bored at night, so I came across this book by chance. I was attracted by the name, and then I went in to read it. The more I read, the more I became obsessed with it.
Super pretty! It's a pity that it's not very popular. More people will definitely watch it in the future. The salted fish is super cute.
It's really beautiful! Everyone has their own heroic dream! No matter if I start over again, I will lose the courage and strength to save you, but I hope you will not lose the heart to resist! The words "recovering cause and effect, and fate playing tricks on people" are really vividly reflected in this book! Everyone should be happy
How can it be so beautiful? The structure is clear and clear, and every pitfall is filled in. The author's writing style is very good. It feels like I am back to the time when I was not a poisonous woman. Apart from wanting the author to write another 1 million words of extras after the completion, I strongly recommend this article. It is really good-looking.
，！ ! ! ! The foreshadowing is also well laid, and many of them are only realized after seeing it.
Made me laugh. Hahahahaha 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣I'm a good boy, I really know how to write
It's so good. Why didn't I discover this treasure earlier? ? I will share it with all my friends. I am so excited. How come our little salted fish is so perverted and cute at the same time? The plot is very interesting. I will give this novel a five-star rating. It is very awesome.
It's okay. I feel that the emotional line of the protagonist is not very clear. I fell in love with it out of nowhere. I don't know, maybe it was love at first sight.
After reading to the end, I really couldn't get into it. The book is okay.
Why is this rating so low? I'll tell you the truth, I'll tell you for nothing, this book is awesome.
God must give you a ram within a ram (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
The group portrait is so awesome that CP Hao, a group of little bitter gourds, gather together every day and cry bitterly in one second, and then become unserious the next. The people watching are so impressed. .
It's good, but the ending is a bit confusing
This is the serial book that I miss the most. I have to read it again and again after it is updated. I am twice as happy. It is so beautiful.
Very interesting! Super pretty! [Sending Hearts][Love]
Not bad, not bad. The plot may be very painful, but there are many jokes to make up for it. It's quite interesting. I originally wanted to complain that there were too many supporting characters, but then I discovered that there were "micro-group portraits" in the copy. Okay, I'm blind. As expected, I'm still not suitable for this kind of novel.
It's good to watch, but it's still being updated and I have to stock it up. It's a bit sad [crying]. I'm also very interesting. The protagonist is also very funny.
It looks good, and the writing is good, but it's a bit too bitter, and the salted fish has become bitter salted fish.
The ending was a little rushed, but overall it was so exciting and beautiful.
I'll go, I'll go. It's like a fairy. It's very beautiful.
One of the few that can be read on Tomato, it's so good to watch, more extras!