I Traveled Through Time and Became a Pet Cat Demon Queen, and I Sacrificed It

It's very good-looking. If you like knives, come here. I guarantee that white knives go in and red knives come out. The description of the protagonist is also very interesting. Each person in the six-person team has their own personality charm. The setting of the cat is great and cute. After reading it, I am simply the most loyal believer in the cat door. The author's writing is so beautiful. Ｏ(≧▽≦)O

[Author's self-evaluation] This is my first attempt at a long story, and I have a lot of problems. The most obvious ones are the piling up of adjectives, redundant descriptions in some places, and sometimes the battle scenes are too gorgeous and lack the cleanliness of a fatal blow. Emotional foreshadowing and transitions can be more delicate and natural. As a newcomer, my writing skills are limited, but I will continue to work hard to polish it, learn to balance delicate description and plot advancement, and reduce unnecessary rhetoric. Thanks for reading, making progress.

Teacher, I will follow you💪[laugh]👍 So many knives 😭 good looking 🥰 so many knives 😭 so good looking 🥰 so many knives 😭 so good looking 🥰 so many knives 😭 so good looking 🥰 so many knives 😭 so good looking 🥰 so many knives 😭 so good looking 🥰 So many knives 😭 good looking 🥰 so many knives 😭 so good looking 🥰 so many knives 😭 so good looking 🥰 so many knives 😭 so good looking 🥰 so many knives 😭 so good looking 🥰 so many knives 😭 so good looking 🥰

Well, overall the plot is quite complete and the pace is okay. However, the author needs to work harder on the characterization. Some small details or descriptions of the characters' actions feel slightly the same. Personally speaking, the description of the dialogue between several people in the team needs to be strengthened. I feel that the author wants to describe the pistachio, the contrast between appearance and duplicity, or other character traits. However, the writing is still a bit immature, but it is okay and I can continue to read. In fact, the author tortured the protagonist so much that I was very excited. I was very excited while watching it. I just really liked watching the scene where the team saved Xiao Li. The final ending was also very exciting to me. Come on, author, and look forward to our next meeting.

I finished reading it and really liked this fast-paced short story. The author's writing style is really good too! I cried many times when cats were injured. Another mention: The author's last words to us are really meaningful. Miss Lin's taste [crying] and the Rose Maiden House. I really like this kind of writing [crying] Come on! !

It's so beautiful [crying] [crying] I really didn't hold back when I finally came back [almost crying] [almost crying]

Howl look! The characters are quite interesting

What a bunch of little bitter gourds [almost crying] [almost crying]

Four words, awesome and beautiful

Woo woo woo, the author's writing is so good, and the following scenes really made me cry to death, woo woo woo

The teacher is really awesome, Klass

Such a beautiful book, why isn't it popular? It's so delicious.

Super pretty. The little cat inside is well written. I really wanted to masturbate, and the ending was very good. I laughed inexplicably in the small theater at the end. 😜

The group portraits mainly focus on kittens. They have a very cute atmosphere and are sometimes very dangerous. Long live the kittens!

Very pretty! I just didn't expect it to end so soon😭😭

Super nice, super cute, super nice, super like it

Although it's a bit cliché, it's well written. The plot is razor-sharp but the emotion is not razor-sharp, and the relationship is sweet throughout.

It's nice to watch, I like the little interaction among the six people [blowing kisses] Beautiful, strong and miserable, the group's favorite, ahhhhhhhh [licking the screen] I like it so much