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I have read several similar books on Tomato. I thought it was a cliche plot, but after reading Chapter 70, the plot is quite novel. It is indeed quite good. It is worth reading [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

At present, the plot seems to be a bit similar to the control flow of Re0 and the fourth natural disaster. The protagonist obtains information through death, and after rewinding, he can tell the truth or use evil tricks to prevent the tragedy from happening in advance, which is also the main highlight of the plot. It can be seen that the author has put effort and ingenuity into the plot, and the actions of each character are at least logical. Characters will die, and the protagonist under Lin Yu's control will also make various trial and error actions. It does feel a bit like the player is playing a game. Compared with other control texts, it can be said to be unique. There are some flaws in the plot, but the ones that should be complained about are all complained in the commentary, so it's not a big problem. Also, can I divide it into paragraphs without a few words? Sometimes a paragraph is only half a sentence, and a sentence spoken by a character has to be broken into three or four paragraphs. It's really exhausting for me. I hope the author can optimize the number of words in each paragraph [Strike]

The new book is on the way, so I would like to give myself a five-star review and encourage it [laughing evilly]

It has a novel feel compared to other works of the same type, come on💪

It looks pretty good so far, but the number of words is a bit short, and the protagonist cannot control the heroine's time and the time will flow normally when something happens in real life. This setting also limits a lot of things.

It's pretty good among its kind. The main reason is that the role and positioning of the protagonist are relatively vague.

It's very interesting, but it's a pity that there are less than 90 chapters. I don't know if there is such a well-written and completed novel. It was a pleasure to read it in one sitting. I saw a similar one before, but it also had more than 100 chapters.

Very novel plot, very interesting [blowing kiss]

Personally I think it's very interesting, and the plot is not too draggy. The only flaw is that the number of words is a bit short, otherwise it would be a surefire success.

Yes, this book is alive

Not bad, not bad, cliche plot, but very interesting.

I think it's pretty good. I look forward to the heroine having more interactions with the protagonist. The author has at least read it himself so that there won't be too outrageous AI errors.

I'm looking forward to how it will develop [laughs]

Rich content, pretty good plot

It's so beautiful, good luck to the author

Short This type of theme has just come out. In the early stage, the player's control brought shock to the natives. I don't know what will happen later.

Compared with other types of stories where the male protagonist controls the female protagonist, the writing style is quite good [laughing evilly] and is worth reading.

Okay, okay, worth a look

A good book. It's just that the update is too slow. Save it first and watch it later.

The plot ideas are clear and the subject matter is also very good

The first ten or so chapters are relatively confusing. The more you go to the back, the better it gets. The content becomes more sophisticated and detailed. It's a slow-burning style.

The plot is okay, but the most important setting behind it makes the plot more reasonable and compact.