Bai Lin's world was originally silent,
Until Yangxue fell into his forest briefly like an unexpected snow.
But the snow will eventually melt, and the forest will still be lonely,
That year, no matter how strong the cinnamon fragrance was, it could not keep away the people who were passing by in a hurry.
There is no snow in the deep forest, and the snow does not return to the forest when it falls.
Reader comments
After reading the entire article, I feel that the author's narrative ability is acceptable. It would be better if the description of the environment could be more specific and vivid, and some advanced synonyms could be used for word selection. For environmental description, you can use the five senses method (sensory management method) or a combination of movement and stillness; for word selection, you can go to Little Red Book or music notes to search and accumulate. All in all, your writing is good and there is a lot of room for improvement. I believe you will be able to create more masterpieces in the coming time👍
After watching it, I think the narrative ability is very good. Keep up the good work, baby, you can give it a try for your debut.
After reading the entire article, I feel that the author's narrative ability is acceptable. It would be better if the description of the environment could be more specific and vivid, and some advanced synonyms could be used for word selection. For environmental description, you can use the five senses method (sensory management method) or a combination of movement and stillness; for word selection, you can go to Little Red Book or music notes to search and accumulate. All in all, your writing is good and there is a lot of room for improvement. I believe you will be able to create more masterpieces in the coming time👍
After watching it, I think the narrative ability is very good. Keep up the good work, baby, you can give it a try for your debut.