Proposal at the Beginning: the Little Loli Is Actually SSS Mysterious

It's a spoof, and it's very purposeful. It's no problem to propose to Lolita and lead to the topic. It's good to have a small day in the second stage, and it's making progress. It's not bad, I'm leaving first. Come on.

I read the latest chapter in one breath, and it was so comfortable to read. All the members' IQs were online, and everyone was able to react reasonably and in line with the information they already knew [laughing] [laughing] Tomato had to lower his wits from time to time when reading those novels. Because it is generally like this, I had no choice but to accept it. Finally, I saw some novels where the official, protagonists, and all the people have normal IQs. Childish Meng is super strong, but she only shows dependence on the protagonist. This is a very important and refreshing point in this novel [shy][shy] It spoofs various tasks issued by the system, and the stories often look very funny. The protagonist has more and more means due to the existence of the system. He defeated a monster with bare hands before his physical fitness was strengthened. Now that his body has been strengthened in all aspects and with various rewards that may appear in the future, he should soon have a strong position in the entire mysterious world.

I saw that shit-yellow button in one breath [smile] Overall, it's pretty good, and my IQ is relatively online. But the protagonist's mentality needs a change so that he can clearly recognize his own abilities. Then if the system task does not come, the task will have to be accepted [face covering] and there will be no penalty for failure. It is necessary to distinguish what is light and what is serious. There are no other problems. [Thinking] It's just that there are too few to watch. Every character that appears so far is great in terms of description. [Like] Let me reiterate that I am not a lolita fan! Well, no! No! Yes!

It's a very nice novel, but the plot of the little loli is a bit lacking. I hope the author can update it quickly [Sending my heart]

It's okay, but the plot with Zhimeng is a bit lacking. When will the author release the candies between the male protagonist and Zhimeng?

Nice! Love watching! More updates! If you want to call me, just call me! I declare that Zhimeng is the number one heroine! ! Follow-up comment: It's a headline-grabber, Zhi Meng's role is too small, please give Zhi Meng a royal sister form!

It's okay, but I recommend that first of all, you absolutely can't be with the official. It doesn't matter which organization you join or not, you have to be free. Second, add the plot of the childish dream. Most people come here because of the name of this book.

Advantages: It's a very novel setting. I particularly like the childish dream in the title. I want to see more stories about the protagonist and her. If they were told in a larger space, this kind of candy-sprinkling story would easily get high scores from readers. Disadvantages: It is obvious, as other comments have said, that the protagonist goes to help the country next door solve the problem of beasts for no apparent reason. Knowing the danger, he does not consider the country's invitation or the impact of his own accident on his parents. From a standpoint, most readers will be dissuaded. After arriving in the neighboring country, the magical girls depicted have to work hard and make sacrifices, etc., Which will make them shudder. From the perspective of a sweet novel, it's pretty good-looking, but the aspect of the story is a bit too affecting to the viewing experience. There are many ways to write about childish dreams and the protagonist, and it feels like a good hand is being played badly.

You said you would transform, then you wrote a magical girl chapter, and then you went back after finishing it. So will there be any transformation later? I have to say that if there is no transformation later, both the readers of Bianwen and those who do not read Bianwen will be offended. Those who don't read Bianwen are already offended, because those who don't read Bianwen will definitely feel like Chi Daoshi when they see Magical Girls [laughing]

It is quite a work with a Nikkei style, with moderate system elements ➕ supernatural recovery ➕ magical girl elements. Overall, it is a very interesting subject matter. The love part is also well written, with advantages and disadvantages. Then it is normal that the total score is not high and there are many low scores in the comment area. Everyone still has a lot of opinions on the story design of the protagonist going to the heroine's country to help fight monsters. I personally think the protagonist's motivation is reasonable and easy to understand. I meet a beautiful girl from two dimensions, and then I don't want something to happen to the person I like, so I go to help. From the perspective of motivation design, there is no problem. The story design of literary and artistic works does not need to be uploaded to other places, but it is normal for everyone to feel dissatisfied, and it is also the freedom of every reader to give scores. Then another point is about the Lolita part of the title of the book. The author has also given foreshadowing and design. There will definitely be a large plot in the future. There is no need to rush, the story will unfold slowly. I personally still like this work very much. Book friends who like Nikkei style can try it. Above↑

Overall it's very, very good! I just wish there were more magical girl scenes, um, it's so fun to watch. I hope the relationship between the two heroines can be better.

I went and watched Magical Boy in one sitting

When I saw Chapter 59, I thought it was okay, but it was originally about the male protagonist interacting with Weird, but in the end, most of the chapter was devoted to magical girls. The Weird plot only lasted a few chapters. There should be multiple female protagonists, but at least let's enjoy it first.

A knife came to mind. They went to Jinling, and the bearer who was carrying 300,000 souls found out that Shanai was the bloodline of the Japanese pirates at that time. He was about to kill him, but was discovered by the protagonist. He blocked it subconsciously without knowing the situation. The protagonist persuaded the failure without knowing the situation and insisted on protecting him. As a result, the collective showed the bloody real-time situation on the spot. Then the collective sensed that the protagonist was the bloodline of the survivors at that time, and showed it to the protagonist, 300,000 souls, and asked the protagonist at the same time. The protagonist falls into the ultimate separation and tangle, confused, and then is sensed by Zhimeng, who wants to obliterate 300,000 souls and those who bear them. He comforted the protagonist, and then was discovered by the country and asked Jiuzhou Cauldron to suppress it. Xuanyuan Sword wiped it out, and the remaining energy was absorbed by Jiuzhou Cauldron to denounce China. In the end, Xia Nai was killed in front of the protagonist, and his blood was extracted and cursed to kill all his descendants.

It's a bit like a light novel from ten years ago. Just don't stop updating it. Give it some support, but don't step on some possible mistakes [laughs]

The questions are very novel, the subject matter is also very creative, the pace is neither too fast nor too slow, and there is nothing ruinous. The interview gives people a fresh feeling. It is not heavy on oil and ink, but has a main line. It has personal growth and emotions. It is not just about feelings. It is ambiguous and bad upgrades. The characterization is also good, and it has a lot of personality, and it is also consistent with reality and logic.

Catch up on the latest chapter in one go. Don't be fooled by the title. This is a fun book. It's very funny. The author is in good spirits.

The writing is quite interesting, but it's a bit painful to see a family come together. Zombies can't stand the sun. I wish there were less family dramas.

I sincerely recommend not reading the comment section. There are a lot of people who are busy commenting without reading much, and they always like to use realistic standards to impose novels. There is no need to be led away by other people's opinions. Although this book has some flaws, I feel it is still acceptable.

I finished Chapter 311, and the writing is pretty good, about 80% or 90%. However, the current Tomato score is 6, which is obviously lower than the content level of this book, so I will give it 5 stars to support it. If it is normal later, I will change the rating.

It's a good-looking and interesting novel, but some people in the comment section are too red-faced, which makes it more difficult to compete with the novel. I laughed while reading it [laughs]

I like the creation of the characters, especially Loli Childhood Dream, and I feel like there will be a very special story background explanation later. The plot is relatively light-hearted and funny, and there are also fighting and exciting parts, so it's not stressful to read.

OK, it's also very good-looking. I hope the author will never stop updating. I finally found another book that I want to update. I want to see the end.

I feel the rhythm is very good, it makes people feel comfortable, and my blood pressure is not high. I am looking forward to the next development.

It's okay, I can read it without thinking, but the logic is a bit flawed

Okay, who doesn't want to propose to Loli in a hurry and pretend to be a soju in real life? [Blowing kiss]

Just so-so, not pretty. Five stars is my habit, not a review of the book

It's okay, but it's a bit uncomfortable to watch in some places. But make do with it.

The content is rich and interesting. I want to know the next plot. Please update it soon.

A true and objective book review with multi-dimensional description, clear structure and substantial content.