
The Max-Level Commander Returns to the Mountain: Master, Stop Hitting Me!
满级指挥使回山:师父,别打了!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 560k Words
- Genre
- Two Male Leads
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- Lessons from the Cold Mountain Cliff寒山崖训诫录Former title · until Oct 2026
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I wrote this book because I wanted to write about a person who was decisive and killing outside, and how he immediately became intimidated when he returned to his master's door, which is the ultimate sense of contrast. This is what happened to Chu Yunxiao - the decisive commander of Zhenwu Division, who turned into a trembling "Xiao Qi" as soon as he returned to Hanshan Cliff. The master's cane, the senior sister's "caring" punishment, the third senior brother's smile hiding a knife... These "fear" constituted his twenty-four years of life. It wasn't until King Jing Xiao Jingyuan appeared that he discovered that there was someone he could rely on. It turned out that underneath those "fear", there was unspeakable "love". The ultimate contrast + the teacher's instruction + the long-lasting relationship between the two male protagonists. If you like this, you might as well take a look. ——February 2025
It's super good-looking, and I don't know why everyone is a little cute in my eyes (except this master, who should just stay cool 😄). At first, I felt sorry for Xiao Qi, but when I saw it later, I sometimes wanted to scold Xiao Qi, because this stinky Xiao Qi was disobedient!! But Xiao Qi is too cute [admiration] (reluctant to let go), and the senior sister portrays her well [loving] [loving] (senior sister NB), and even though the fifth senior brother appeared a little late, he is really good to Xiao Qi (well, other senior brothers are too). Finally, I sincerely hope that Xiao Qi will always be happy, and so does Da Da. Finally, I hope that the third senior brother will let go of Xiao Qi!! Suddenly I realized that I didn't comment (surprised), so I commented immediately 😘
I started reading this book around chapter 40, and I hadn't logged in at that time. (I rated it as soon as I logged in. The first book review is dedicated to my favorite author DaDa❤️) The author DaDa's writing style has really improved a lot from the beginning to the new book (tied, DaDa). The readers in the comment area are also very active, the atmosphere is very relaxed, and the most important thing is that this book is also super beautiful, crazy Amway. I look forward to the author's new book. I wish the author and everyone who reads this review good health and happiness every day. 💕
Each character is very delicate and has his or her own characteristics, but it's just that you can't guess what's going on in your heart, and you feel like you can't tell the difference between good and bad. Xiao Qi is really a commander who talks about love and justice, but every time he values love and justice, he ignores his master's words. Once again, she failed to take Master's words seriously and knowingly made a mistake. Senior Sister was worried about coming to see her in person, but was injured due to Prince Jing's forbearance, and she fell into the hands of Young Master Netherworld again. I wonder what Xiao Qi felt? (I don't know what Xiaoqi thinks. Anyway, I just know that he must be feeling uncomfortable.) Damn, the senior brother who always speaks the truth (it's best if this generation speaks the truth, hehe) has only appeared once in total, should you please let the senior brother come out for a walk?
The plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the characters are vivid and vivid. Xiaoqi's relationship with her teachers has undergone many changes, and her feelings for her brothers and sisters are gradually increasing. The relationship with Prince Jing also continues to heat up, and the redemption between both parties is super touching. In the transition between the arena and the court officialdom, Xiao Qi has become more and more responsible. The feelings of the fellow disciples towards Xiao Qi are also slowly revealed in the following chapters, the third senior brother's bold love, the fifth senior brother's care and so on. Xiao Qi will always live in an environment of love, but everyone has different ways. Shimen and Prince Jing have always been behind him to protect him. Pieces of old events are uncovered, the truth comes to light, and the plot of the story is full of twists and turns. The author is great and interesting^, and the new book is also very nice. I support it. Recommended for all babies to come and see it 💕
Although I have only read more than seventy chapters, I can't help but comment! No one can reject such a flesh-and-blood, affectionate and righteous Xiao Qi!!! ↖(^ω^)↗—Whether it is the task of the court or the sect, Xiaoqi really takes it seriously. For the people around him, for the people he cares about, he is completely willing to sacrifice himself (of course, he also saved a lot of money for himself) and his fourth senior brother accidentally rescued the refugees. In an ambush, he would not hesitate to offer to trade himself for the safety of his senior brother. When he was in danger on the way to the northern border, he did not hesitate to save his senior sister when facing the other elders. He almost lost half his life and did not regret it. How could such a character not make people feel distressed? It made me feel sad to see it. ꒦ິ^꒦ິEveryone in the master's family attaches great importance to Xiao Qi and "pampers" Xiao Qi. Every time Xiao Qi goes down the mountain, every time the master, sister, and brothers teach him, he must put his own safety first, because they all know that their child is an excellent child, and it would be false to say they don't feel sorry for him. The youngest child must be the one everyone watched grow up - I like this character so much. Very charming character (I screamed excitedly at night) I really discovered a treasure, the author Dada (*¯¯*), the author has been updating it continuously! Very hard work! I am very grateful to the author for continuing to write. When I discovered this myself, I had already updated the extra chapter - I am very lucky and super happy ^ω^ The plot is more coherent and interesting. I like the calm plot. I really have to praise this guy in terms of characterization. The group portraits give me a good feeling. Whether it is the senior brother who loves children and waves his banknotes one after another (super envious of Xiao Qi), the weird but dangerous senior sister (the medicine that makes Xiao Qi obedient) and the sixth senior brother who is a martial arts idiot but feels very safe. Especially when seeing the sixth senior brother punishing Xiao Qi ten times, it feels like a family. Thank you for writing this article so that I can see a flesh-and-blood character. I am really happy ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥ A hearty reading. Well done Jamel Xiaoദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧You are really awesome and Xiao Qi may you and Xiao Qi be happy forever! Unexpectedly, the eldest brother, a meticulous person, would have a crush on his senior sister and eventually get married. Xiaoqi also became an uncle!!! It seems that the senior sister's little treasure is like a group favorite. His father is a strong martial artist and his mother has superb medical skills. His uncles are all better than each other (ahem... Even the "aunt" is the emperor... Ahem, be serious) Wuyouxi I hope you and Xiaojiang can go on without any worries (this character design is so touching, the sickly sweetheart and her head wife, the evil smiles are unyielding) The fifth senior brother is still rich (greedy) I hope this big family will always be happy, I am very lucky to witness your story
The characters are three-dimensional, the descriptions are detailed, and there are many scenes of admonishment. The protagonist and the senior brothers and sisters all have a CP feeling inexplicably. It's very interesting. The author updates very quickly. I'm a huge fan. I highly recommend it ~ good article
Master-apprentice story, the master is strict but his care is felt, the senior sister is gentle and loves Xiao Qi, please give me more support!
It's so beautiful when I go! The author will take every fan's opinion into consideration. The content is very story-telling and will not be perfunctory. The image of each character is well written and the characters are very vivid. I plan to read it several times! Rush really fast! The author will also update daily 😳
Very nice!!! I like Third Senior Brother and hope the author can give him a good ending!!! (I hope he will let go of his obsession.)