Job Change: Is the Succubus Queen Beautiful? in Exchange for the School Beauty

The overall plot is good and the driving speed is very fast. There are currently four female protagonists: Catherine (the second vampire princess), Albena (the succubus queen), Lan Ruotong (the eldest daughter of the Lan family, her father Lan Xiangdong is the bitter cold monarch), Angelis (the evil fallen nun) (the protagonist's subordinates are the most powerful). The protagonist has a brain, and the villain also has a brain. Many Internet memes and book fans prefer to make jokes, and the author puts his status very low. Worth a look

There are many articles written by women, if you can read them, please support them. However, the most basic thing is that the heroine should not wear revealing clothes in front of other men. This problem has already appeared once (the tattered nun's uniform), and a new chapter is here (the succubus wears revealing clothes, and then appears with the male vampire count), so be careful to avoid lightning. However, the author still listens to the advice. I will give it five stars after the changes are completed. It's not easy to write stories with multiple female protagonists these days. Everything has been changed, now there is no problem

The plot is classic and the routine is simple, but it is really fun. If you lose your brain and ignore the poisonous points, it is a good novel. However, from the current reading, I feel that the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. The most important thing is the description of the battle. This is the standard that best reflects whether the novel is refreshing or not. The description of the battle scenes is too simple and tasteless. , There are only a few action descriptions, and more of them are off-site commentary. The spectators talk a lot, which greatly affects the sense of immersion and makes the battle less exciting. The author can learn more about fists and physical, magic and bombardment, which can greatly improve the perception. There are other shortcomings, such as Lan Ruotong's emotions are too blunt, and it is too fake to make a young lady fall in love just because the protagonist persists. It feels like it is just to advance the plot and collect the harem. Everything else is fine and watchable.

The protagonist's IQ is online, and there is no estrangement... You have to eat! Milky white snowflakes and turkey-flavored crispy rice must be eaten ruthlessly.

I really like the setting of this book. The world view is similar to the mmorpg game world. The various settings basically have the feeling of a game. It can be regarded as traveling into the real game world. It is rare to find such a book with such authentic taste. However, the author said that the data of this book is not good. It will be gone. It will be sad. I hope you will read this book. The author must hold on. I think the title can be changed, such as "Abyss Walker: Sacrifice to the White Lotus School Belle Contract Succubus" or something like that. This title is just average, and the title "The Big Adventure" is a bit unclear.

As always, the style of the villain is great. The guide to the art of war has a good attitude towards reading and will produce high-quality products. The articles are invincible and exciting. The harem of beauties is fun and practical. The character of the protagonist is also charming and cool. There are few conscientious authors!

The writing is very good, the setting is rigorous, the plot has no obvious poisonous points, and the writing style is also good. It is a good book, but there are too few. I will update ten chapters a day [note]

Continuing the style of the previous book, although it is a repetitive theme, it is not too repetitive. The plot advancement is very good. I want to watch Gu Yuan is as thick as Onako, who is cold on the outside and dragon lady on the inside!

I read it in one go. The advantage is that it combines Western fantasy, lord, farming, game, and villain writing. Although the settings are a hodgepodge and the writing is a bit cliche, fortunately, what is presented in the end is a good dish and the writing is smooth. The disadvantage is that some of the plots miss the point. It feels like it has been laid out for a long time and ended hastily. It may be because the outline has been revised. The female protagonists are a little thinner. The supporting roles are mostly facial characters. I think we can imitate Ji Cha and create a separate small unit drama for each female character. Finally, the author's words at the end of each chapter can be less or put in the comment area, which will affect the coherence of the plot. The author listens to the advice and hangs out intensively in the comment area. Like it. Subjective score 9.2

Good looking, good looking mouth and teeth! , There's nothing bad about it, it's very enjoyable, the male protagonist is very strong, but he doesn't feel too outrageous and boring, the plot is compact, and there's nothing bad about it, the male protagonist is not the kind of guy who has a small head controlling a big head.

A very nice realistic western fantasy city lord novel. The pace of this book is a little fast, and it ended before I could read it carefully. If the details can be polished, it will be a very good novel. My personal evaluation is 9+, and the reality is probably 8.5+, Hahaha, recommended.

It's so beautiful, but now the description of Succubus Light focuses on his IQ and character. I originally came to see Succubus, but I feel that there are too few exclusive scenes corresponding to it. I hope the author pays more attention to it😁 There is also the Dragon Lady. She is so busy writing salsa that her presence has been reduced to a low level. Exclusive scenes are also indispensable.

It's pretty good-looking, and quite refreshing. The only thing that feels a bit bad is that it feels like you're being punished by God if you say your name before the contract. You have to use dragon language, but you don't need it after the contract.

The handling of the beginning is really good. There is a lot of formal suppression first and then amplification, but the proportion and intensity of this suppression are very precise. It feels like the beginning of a textbook Shuangwen. There are many details that can be learned, and other basic skills are not mentioned [Blowing Kiss] I don't see any special writing or rhetoric skills, but it is completely sufficient for Shuangwen [Blowing Kiss]

Although there are minor flaws that make the protagonist look alternately strong and weak, it is great👍. I read more than two hundred chapters in one go. I haven't found such a good book for a long time. If I were to give it a rating, it would be at least 9.0 Or above. However, the rating may be low due to reasons I don't know about, such as harem sex and material selection. But come on, author✊, this book ranks above 9.0 In my heart. It's a pity that I don't like to follow up on reading. I don't know when the next time will be. But if I have time, I can give the author some reminders.

This is an urban martial arts novel, which mainly describes the story of the protagonist contracting with various abyssal female characters to reach the top step by step. First of all, let's talk about the advantages: First of all, the plot is a relatively pure and enjoyable novel, with no surprises, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and the pace is relatively fast, not too slow. Secondly, in terms of character creation, the male protagonist is decisive and decisive in killing, but the female characters are also more distinctive. Furthermore, the author is very willing to listen to the readers' opinions and understand the readers better. Let's talk about the shortcomings: First of all, the author's writing style is relatively plain, and the description of the battle part is not particularly graphic. Secondly, in terms of the characters, the male protagonist felt that the portrayal was a bit bold. When interacting with Lan Ruotong, he mostly thought about how to take advantage of others, which was a bit cold-blooded. The female characters were also portrayed in a dry manner. There was not much emotional interaction with the male protagonist, but the relationship heated up quickly, which made it a bit embarrassing to read. In summary, this is a fairly good urban martial arts novel, and it is recommended to be read when there is a book shortage.

Looks good! The emotional line of the heroine, the setting of upgrading combat power, the balance of numerical skills... Etc. These things all show that the author is very careful about this book. Read the chapter reviews at the end of each chapter. The author is very concerned about the content discussed by our readers. It is also full of lightning protection. It is very satisfying. The author who is obviously very warm is afraid of apologizing because he feels that he is not filling the word count and not advancing the plot. He is obviously very attentive. Come on, author! I hope you can add more side plots to each heroine. After all, you said at the beginning that you don't want them to be just pure contract beasts! I hope every heroine can have her own plump branch line! Looking forward to the other green tea Angel Sego!

@Guide I think the writing is quite good, but there is one thing I want to say. I have seen more than 70 of them so far. The protagonist has contracted two numerical monsters and the mechanics are awesome. However, he is still timid during the battle. He fights two second turns and a level 29, and is still thinking about this and that. The protagonist's Evil Fallen Saint is so awesome. When the protagonist is level 10, she has 1300 points. Now that the protagonist is level 15, her values ​​should be higher. Can't she solve it with just a few draws? Do you still need to call someone? Even if a living sacrifice is required, it should be easy to control them, right? Does it need to be so troublesome? Apart from this, everything else is pretty good. All in all, good luck to the author.

! ! ! It's a real person. I read it in one go and fast forwarded to some fighting parts. The plot is not toxic at the moment. You can see the shadow of other classic works. The world view is very stitched together. If the book is not dead and can be written, there is a lot of room for development. Currently, 150 demigods, 200 is a god. Overall, it is a pretty good book. If it can be written to the end, it should be similar to me leveling up to fight the Dragon Emperor alone. Abyss leads various dark clans to fight the light system. If I can keep writing, the author really needs to think about the overall framework. There are many directions that can be written in this direction. Focus on leveling up the earth and then collect the harem. After defeating other pheasant gods, the god of light comes to protect the homeland of mankind, or upgrade and directly transfer to various contracted planes. What kind of vampire? Plane wars against werewolves, dragon clan civil wars, the hands of the previous Abyss King on the mountain, and the grudges with the Church of Light. There are really many things that Barabala can write about. Whether it is a story with humans or aliens, as long as the order and setting framework are in order, it must be a good book, at least much better than most shit. I hope the data will get better and better, so that the author will not be unable to write. If this is a paid chapter, I can only give 7.5 Points, but Tomato is free, so I give 9 points.

I finished reading it in one go. Overall, it is very good. It is one of the few thoughtful articles in Shuangwen. The characters are very three-dimensional and will not whet the reader's appetite. The only shortcoming at present is that it is not enough to read, and the level of combat power does not match. Of course, it is a Shuangwen after all. I am not interested in the branch line of lord construction. You can consider reducing the weight. After all, sacrifice is the main line. I hope the map can be expanded. The world view is not too expanded. However, these are minor problems. I support it with 4 stars and a five-star review for the update speed.

This is the first time I read a book on this subject. Surprisingly, it's quite good. There are basically no poisonous points, and the pace is relatively slow. The male protagonist is basically invincible throughout the whole process, but the combat power is a bit messy. However, the author has also made a lot of patches, so it is not that outrageous. Many cross-level challenges can only be won by gathering various conditions. The author also said that he is not very good at writing battles, but it does not affect the viewing experience. The characteristics of the heroines are very well portrayed. In the latest chapter, basically all the key characters have to be eaten. Even the boss lady in the main palace is only a mouthful at the moment. The heroine's mother has a big background. I guess we have to wait until the later stages of the plot, but it will be soon. The author is really careful in illustrating the pictures, and he stands up slightly to show respect [laughter]

I have read the latest chapter. The author listens to the advice. The plot is compact and has no irritation. I usually have nothing to do and read sweet stories. This is the second time I come across books other than sweet stories. This is an interesting book. Although it is a more traditional counterattack routine, it is better than just hitting the summoning system that I like to read. Generally speaking, there is no poisonous point. My evaluation is that those who are still hesitating can really feel free to read.

The character descriptions are delicate, but the plot is a bit slow. Come on, author! [Blowing kiss]

The rhythm is quite appropriate, there are no bad points at the moment, and I can enjoy the updated version. Why is the score so low? I really don't hope this book will be scrapped [crying] Come on, Huang'er! He's already called Father, so what else is there to say? [Laugh]

It's good to read. I think it's pretty good. It's a very enjoyable book.

I declare this to be the best novel I have read in recent times 👏 The pace is extremely precise, neither procrastinating nor lengthy, and it grabbed my attention every second.

As long as there are no obvious logical problems in this type of novel, the characterization is reasonable, the plot is not nonsense, the three protagonists look like individuals, and some settings of Xiao Liu Bei, it is considered a good novel, at least the front part is good.

After reading many books on summons, this one is definitely ranked high. The plot is compact and the author will also refer to everyone's opinions. I especially like the sinful nun in it. The sense of contrast is so overwhelming that the pressure on others is really strong. I hope the author can strengthen it and provide more plots [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's pretty good. As a harem novel, it's okay. The advantage is that the pace is good and the writing is very easy to understand. As a refreshing novel, it can make people completely relax and read comfortably. In this regard, it has surpassed many Tomato novels. The protagonist's upgrade progress is quite satisfactory, neither too slow nor too fast. However, most of the combat power is tied to the heroine, and his own summoned combat power is not very prominent. Without the heroine, he cannot advance to many levels. There is a qualitative change in the heroine. (Although the heroines can just carry it with them like a Pokémon) The lightning protection aspect can obviously be done better. The heroine's dress can easily trigger lightning strikes (giving benefits to supporting characters and so on). If possible, it would be best to apply a patch. Anyway, a patch will not have any impact on the plot, so why not do it?

The broken halberd holds the wine of the First Emperor, and the sword points to the ecliptic without any edge. An old piece of history, Lu Deshuang, Song of the Dead in Bu Mo and Northern Hebei [sneery laugh] [sneak laughter] [sneak laughter] [sneak laughter] [sneak laughter] [sneak laughter]