Arknights: Which Arknights Is This?!

It's quite creative, sandwiching Delta and Arknights together. However, the author may be a main player of Delta and has never played Ark. His understanding of the game and writing habits are still lacking. Your ideas are novel, but your writing style is quite old. Who are you? Generally speaking, you are a growth substitute. Maintain this creative mentality, practice your writing and grasp the rhythm of the plot. I believe you can do better.

There are some problems in the early stage, but it is quite creative. The improvement of the writing style can be seen by the naked eye. It is very good after about ten chapters. The emotional expression is excellent. The most important thing is that the protagonist is a person from the Chaos Sequence. There is no unnecessary conscience. Everything he wants to do is what he wants to do, so it is more interesting.

Not bad, not bad, I just want to ask, don't you have Delta operator skills?

You can tell at first glance that he is a regular porridge bar foodie.

Why is no one rating it?

Although the writing in the front is not good, the writing in the back is still very good. I listened to it for a whole day on the battlefield.

To be honest, Zhiye's "girlfriend" is too heavy. Also, you can't update meow.

Can't go up, can't come down, stuck here

The content is quite to your liking, but the layout is uncomfortable to look at.

Although the writing techniques in the first few chapters are really too redundant and messy, they gradually improved from the beginning. Although the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement, there is hope for the future.