Ark**********

It's quite creative, sandwiching Delta and Arknights together. However, the author may be a main player of Delta and has never played Ark. His understanding of the game and writing habits are still lacking. Your ideas are novel, but your writing style is quite old. Who are you? Generally speaking, you are a growth substitute. Maintain this creative mentality, practice your writing and grasp the rhythm of the plot. I believe you can do better.

There are some problems in the early stage, but it is quite creative. The improvement of the writing style can be seen by the naked eye. It is very good after about ten chapters. The emotional expression is excellent. The most important thing is that the protagonist is a person from the Chaos Sequence. There is no unnecessary conscience. Everything he wants to do is what he wants to do, so it is more interesting.

Not bad, not bad, I just want to ask, don't you have Delta operator skills?

Looks like I like it very much

The content is quite to your liking, but the layout is uncomfortable to look at.

Can't go up, can't come down, stuck here

To be honest, Zhiye's "girlfriend" is too heavy. Also, you can't update meow.

Although the writing in the front is not good, the writing in the back is still very good. I listened to it for a whole day on the battlefield.

Although the writing techniques in the first few chapters are really too redundant and messy, they gradually improved from the beginning. Although the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement, there is hope for the future.

Just make do, if you can read it as a text, you can read it.

I feel that the overall story is okay, but the story is mediocre. It has a bit of boat flavor but not much. Please support it. Come on, the author, and keep working hard.