I Announce That I Have Read All the High-Quality Articles in HP😎
I want to see something similar to "HP: When they blend into their respective fandoms". After four years of reading fan fiction on Tomato, I am already invincible... (At this time, a burst of strong music sounded🔥🔥🔥)
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It's a good read, but it requires some understanding of British politics and official language, but generally the author will write notes, so it's not difficult to understand. By the way, I recommend "Yes, Minister" and "Yes, Prime Minister". The first part writes more about the protagonist's growth background (that is, the civil service system), which may not meet the expectations of some readers for HP fans to "get to the point quickly and start a magical journey." But this is also the theme of the "two worlds" that the article wants to express, just like what is written in the introduction about how non-magical governments view the magical world. Most of the other protagonists in the fanfic still act from the perspective of a person in the magical world. A few of them write about non-magical attitudes and rarely involve the response and behavior of the entire government. The entry point of this book is very unique, I hope the author can continue writing it.
The heroine is of mixed race and indigenous origin during her childhood. The writing is excellent, the plot is novel and reasonable, the characters are three-dimensional and the entry point is unique. The heroine is independent, sober, mature, thoughtful, and observant, comes from an upper-class society, and knows how to advance and retreat (my ideal character😭) There is currently no trace of the male protagonist, and I personally hope there will be no cp, because it is difficult to imagine what kind of boy can keep up with the female protagonist. It doesn't matter if the love line is well written. There isn't much space about the parents, but you can still tell that my mother is free and rebellious, exactly like the person I imagined Alphard would like! My grandfather is the person who gets the most attention. He is a strategist, calm and restrained yet still affectionate. He has a network of people all over the world. He was a former cabinet secretary and civil servant and still has great influence. The relationship between him and his mother is a bit sad. Dozens of chapters of family background were laid out in the early stages, which I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Even if you don't understand British politics, you won't panic at all. The author explains it in detail. If you really don't understand it, just skip it and it won't affect the development of the plot. I was even planted with ym and ypm, let's see how it goes this year👀 I really want to read the author's book list, it's so well written, and I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it! ! 🥺Please be sure to write it down, this kind of writing makes me want to make money! ! 😍
The writing is really comfortable and the details are well handled. The early stage is mainly about some explanations of the political situation (history brings ecstasy!) And the portrayal of interpersonal relationships, which is particularly good... Each character is portrayed in such a three-dimensional way. I particularly like the heroine's character, she is independent and sober and has her own unique insights. Ravenclaw deserves it! Ella is really nice! I look forward to her playing Quidditch in the later period, and enjoy your sky~ I am also very moved by the friendship with Hermione (currently only updated to her hiding in the toilet). When I read the original book, I was thinking about how our Miss Hermione is so miserable😭... The best girls! The character of Arnold was also positioned very well. When I saw the part where Arnold read the letter, I really wanted to cry. Everything Elira ever had, plus understanding and freedom - Arnold, you did it. And the heroine's father turns out to be Alphard Black! I'm kind of looking forward to the scene when I meet Sirius later hahahaha (there will be a plot of returning to Black's old house, I want to see the reactions of Kreacher and Walburga) All in all, a great book~recommended for everyone to read!
Very creative angle of entry. It details the history of the relationship between the Minister of Magic and the Prime Minister, and also relates to the craze for research on supernatural abilities that was prevalent around the world in the 1980s. The protagonist is a girl who was influenced by British civil service education. She has the curiosity and innocence of a little girl and can handle interpersonal relationships skillfully. The magical world was originally just information from the heroine's grandfather. As the protagonist enters school, the veil of the magical world is gradually lifted and becomes clear, and the protagonist wants to further explore the magical world. The difference between the magical world and the ordinary world lies not only in magic, but also in the rules of social operation, people's different perceptions of various things such as injuries and talents, and even ways of thinking. I hope the author will write better and better in the future.
The writing is excellent and fluent, and many of the stories involving British government affairs are very professional and easy to understand. The protagonist is very three-dimensional and attractive, and each supporting character is also described very vividly! The rating for such good writing will improve quickly [Blow a kiss]
Super well written! Big cheers for the author! Faster and faster! This article gives me a sense of rational and restrained beauty, structuring two completely different worlds from a political perspective. I love Arnold and Cecilia so much! Arnold is a patient guide for Ella, guiding Ella to understand the world in multiple dimensions. For Cecilia, I admire her more. From the daughter of a pastor to the wife of a high-ranking government official, the cognitive differences brought about by class crossing, it seems that Cecilia should have been a little painful when she first married Arnold, right? The elderly Cecilia gave me the feeling that there was a certain degree of progress and retreat, and she herself became part of that system. This transformation is like throwing a person who doesn't know English at all into a pure English environment to survive, right? I feel like she is so powerful. The interaction between grandparents feels so loving, that kind of tacit understanding that belongs to an old couple.
It's great. It's the first time I've seen the magical world from another angle. The identity of the heroine brings this perspective to a different level. The description of some things related to the British high-level government is very interesting. It's like watching a drama. Some of the dialogue flowed into the cerebral cortex along my eyes and then disappeared hahahahahaha. I just saw the letter from Hogwarts. I'm really looking forward to the story behind it. The most important thing is! The author's writing style is very good. It's rare to see such a good writing style in Tomato!
This is a HP fanfic with a novel angle, cleverly integrating British politics and the magical world, just like adding cocoa powder to a cake, introducing a new flavor, novel but not obtrusive. The author's writing is powerful, the story logic is clear, the characters are full of influence, and the history is rigorous. In fact, compared to Ella, what attracts me most is my grandfather. My grandfather's language has the restraint and obscurity unique to civil servants, and he tells us the world picture of the late 20th century. The British humor from time to time sweeps away the seriousness, and implicitly expresses his love for his family. His view of the world is rational and cold, full of Cold War official colors. This, together with his rich life experience, constitutes his personality charm. I believe that the author who can create such a character is also a knowledgeable and sharp-thinking person in reality. Many novel authors write works based on the magical world, but few write HP fans based on the real world. This is the first one I have encountered, which makes me more and more curious about the subsequent development. Judging from the current structure of the article, this article will not only tell a conventional story about defeating Voldemort and ushering in peace. Will Ella be the one to break the invisible "Iron Curtain" between the two worlds? How will the art of balance for "non-magical people" profoundly change the wizarding world? I really look forward to the development of the subsequent story, and I hope the author can make more updates [Blow kiss] P. S. When I was reading, I always imagined my grandfather and Ella to be Harry Hart and Eggsy in "Kingsman" [Thinking] I can only say that for this image of an elder who has gone through many years of hard work, but has shown complete care and guidance to the younger generations, a clear and stupid college student like me is completely unable to resist, and can only abandon my armor. P. P. S. I found out that the author followed me. Is this the original fan welfare? Hahaha. One more thing I have to complain about is that some parts of the article gave me a faint human-machine feeling. Maybe I am too sensitive, but since gpt-4, I have PTSD when I see the "not but" transition sentence. I feel uncomfortable writing it myself [laughing and crying]
It reads quietly and distantly, like the warm sun or a trickle of water, accompanied by the distant bells under the English sky... The first 30 chapters read like a drizzle in London, with the rain falling on the window sill accompanied by the sounds of passing cars and people... It is well written and reminds people of British dramas, especially Sherlock Holmes and Yes, the Prime Minister. Thanks to the author for the creation, 10/10 a good article Wuwuwu, it's only the beginning of 26 years. Where can I find such good articles to read in the future?——
So far I have only read the first few chapters about arriving in London, and I have a good impression. It may be a bit obscure for people who don't know British history (like me)... But it is logically rigorous and more based on reality. The writing style is my favorite type, and the setting is also interesting to me. When I quit it, I found that it was a completely new book and I realized that I had to follow a long way to follow it. And seeing that it is a child generation, I don't know whether the follow-up will interact with the original plot. By the way, the current AI covers are very unfavorable and seriously inconsistent with the impression of the writing style. Although there are a lot of AI-generated novel covers now, I still can't help but hope that thoughtful creators can avoid using AI-generated images.
Damn, it's so beautiful. The heroine is very good. It's a type I've never seen before. The only pain is that I saw it when I was just a seedling. If this book is completed smoothly, it will become another masterpiece of HP.
A very novel perspective, like the County Party Committee Courtyard version of Journey to the West, the political and power struggles in the magic world and the real world are connected. The heroine is not only among the best in magic and professional skills, but also in diplomatic skills. I am looking forward to the subsequent development, especially the part where Umbridge comes later~
The two architectures are very harmoniously connected, and the characters in the plot have just the right contact. Outside the plot, the author describes it with reasonable evidence, and the emotions are also very delicate. You can feel that the author did not write about the characters, but used a perspective to explore the magical world. I am looking forward to more stories, like it!
The writing is super great, thank you to the author. I think it may be because the cover is more discouraging, like a regular Mary Sue HP. After reading HP, I found that it is not at all. As soon as I click into this book, I can't stop. It's so well written. You can try changing the cover
The writing style is very good: it has the British language style of "Yes, Minister", and the historical and cultural backgrounds are integrated and connected like precise gears. The angle is novel: the protagonist comes from a British political family and is mainly influenced by his grandfather's politics, rather than the common ordinary people who are mainly influenced by the education in the magic world or from a magic family. And the cover needs to be improved, it doesn't match the style of writing. The plot of Harry Potter is currently a bit behind. The front part is mainly to support the identity and background of the protagonist, as well as the fact that the protagonist is the same age and generation as Harry, and is friends with Hermione. Ps: Behind first-year Quirrell there is Voldemort, a basilisk, an eight-eyed spider, a prisoner (this is his uncle), a dementor, a death eater, a werewolf professor, etc. Grandpa's evaluation of Dumbledore's "reliability" may change in the future. I hope Grandpa is holding up well (after all, the previous article seems a bit too high). After all, his granddaughter is in a school where kpl settlements are held every year (just a joke: Hogwarts is one of the safest places in the world. Harry, who fights the boss at the end of each year, has something to say)
It's very beautiful, writing hp from a different angle
It's really beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] The two worlds really match each other so well, as written in this book The author must continue writing!
It's rare to find a novel with ypm flavor😭😭 I like the dialogue in it. Please give the author more [blowing kisses][blowing kisses]
It's good to read. The author's British political language is really silky. You can see from the first glance that he has a strong literary foundation. It's amazing🫶. This is the type of HP novel I've been looking for. Also, madam, are you in the car too? I didn't hit the mark. I feel bad when I think about one less chapter in the next chapter😭
The writing is super good, and it perfectly and expands the original world view of HP, making it feel real and reasonable. The description of human nature is very delicate. The heroine is rational but not emotional, her behavior is logical and reasonable, and the fandom does not lick the original characters. It is really amazing [Blow kiss]
It's very interesting and hardcore. I hope I can keep writing.
Super pretty! The rare fine chaff of tomatoes, yes minister blends well with the world of Harry Potter! My grandfather is actually Arnold! I look forward to Humphrey and Huck appearing later~ The heroine's character is really well developed! The heroine is still Black, and I look forward to the collision with the heroine after Sirius appears later. . . .
Great selection of materials, very unique angle
It's super beautiful. The heroine is portrayed very well. Thank you to the author.
The writing is smooth and the structure is clear. The plot does not deviate from the original work and has added details. The original characters do not appear many but none of them are OOC. The plot is reasonable. You don't have to understand the bureaucracy and political structure of the Commonwealth and the European Union to understand the meaning behind the text. It's very beautiful. I hope the author will update more [please update]
The teacher is so strong, especially his understanding of the British political system is really amazing👍. This is the first time I have seen such HP articles, and I am even more looking forward to the magical world in the future [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]
There is a faint feeling of translation, the logic is relatively clear, and the political aspect feels very professional. It should be that I have specifically checked the information or studied this myself.
The character set under the foggy London and bound by etiquette is very touching, and the perspective of the HP is also very creative. I look forward to the follow-up CP.
Oh my god, it's so well written.
It's beautiful. The writing is not novice and the narrative style is very mature. Why is it that when I encounter novels that suit my taste, they are always serialized?