Dragon Raja: The Black Doctor's Little Monster

The writing is good, and the most impressive thing is the characterization of the characters, but in many aspects it can be seen that the author is a novice. 🤔 I would like to make some suggestions. 1. It is best not to exceed four lines for each paragraph. The four lines for mobile reading do not allow you to reduce the content, but to divide it into more paragraphs. 2. Many descriptions are already clear enough. If you add an extra bracket to explain, firstly, it will affect the perception, and secondly, it will affect the sense of substitution. As for other plots, I won't comment too much. I hope the author will write better and better [Note]

It looks good. If I don't join Kassel, my daily life with Eri is pretty good. I occasionally torture my brother-in-law, but it's too little.

If you only focus on the perfect ending and don't care about the plot structure, you can fall in love. The author's writing style is still very good. The protagonist's personality and ability settings are good, and the writing style is quite delicate. However, many characters are marginalized and there is a sense of confusion from the original basic setting. The plot party may feel uncomfortable 🤔🍉 The good points remain the original judgment, and it is not recommended that new readers of Dragon Clan fall into the trap of plot parties. The setting is too complicated, the source of childishness is severely persecuted, and all descriptions of people other than Hui and the protagonist are downplayed. Moreover, the author's own understanding of the setting of Dragon Clan is extremely unclear. The characters appearing in the book deviate greatly from the original characters. It is easy for new readers of Dragon Clan to greatly misjudge the original characters, leaving people with other than the protagonist and Hui. It feels like everyone else is a clown, seriously underestimates Herzog's IQ, and overestimates the acceptance ability of the elephant turtle. The character of Zhong Hui conflicts with the original work. She will not say "so-and-so is bad, so-and-so is good" to the people important to her (no matter how different her character is under the influence of the protagonist's appearance, her blank slate character and innocent nature will not let her say such words). Many details affect the perception.

I love it. Can you please update more? I support you by watching commercials 😄

The author is really good at writing daily life. The first two-thirds of the content is written very well, both in terms of rhythm and picture description. However, the quality begins to decline in the later parts. Whether it is fighting or daily life, the rhythm is a bit out of touch, especially the description of the battle is really not good. It feels wrong at first glance, but the excellent love daily life makes up for it. The whole text is basically written around Eri, so I can only say sorry for the other regrets in the original text. There is almost no description. Those who want to save the world can only go out and turn right. The rating I give you is really based on my daily experience. It is really well written.

There will always be someone who can write down the dragons that Jiangnan can't write down for him. There is always someone who can provide plots that Jiangnan cannot provide.

Very good writing and a good plot, which made the corners of my mouth curl up.

It's very good, it can be considered a new dragon novel.

Nice. But I would like to ask the author, what timeline is he in now?

It's quite good. I have never read Dragons. I have only heard a few words from other people. Anyway, I quite like this novel, but the author is a bit partial to that kind of sentence structure. Xx, not xx, xx, xxx. But overall it's pretty good.