The Lovely Fortuneteller Searches for Her Brother at the Military Base, and the Cold Officer Kisses Her Senseless

It's very interesting, but I prefer the brother Su Beicheng. If he were not the male lead, I would be disappointed! It all depends on how the battle goes, so I won't comment before I finish reading it!

The heroine has a delicate body and a soft body. Her biological mother and stepfather are very good. She is currently a bit addicted. The heroine's setting of picking up yin and replenishing yang is a bit interesting. I haven't met the two men who say they are upright. I look forward to it [laughing]

This is my first review, and I specifically asked Ha to see how he would rate it. I didn't listen to the book to pass the time, I stayed up late to read it word by word. Special note: there were almost no typos or omissions, and the reading experience was very good. The first time I read it, I read it when it was only 100,000 words long, but it still took me so long to finish it. There is no such thing as a bad word count. I am very satisfied and can't wait for the update. I may be in the right state of mind to read this book recently. Click on the 100,000-word serialization. There are two comments. One is that the writing is not good. Let me focus on this: first of all, the story is good, and secondly, the writing is not bad. And I think - normal online writing only needs to tell the story clearly, without major logical problems, without character collapse, and without too many typos or omissions. The rest are just icing on the cake and will get better and better as time goes by, so keep up the good work. [Based on my own preferences: I quite like reading this book in the setting of era➕metaphysics. It would be even better if the female character is strong. In the early stage, the perspective was mostly on the heroine's mother and stepfather, especially some intimate scenes. I was the heroine's perspective, so it was a little awkward. But it is indeed well written, and the story revolves around development, so it is still acceptable. Especially when I look at the scenes between the heroine's mother and stepfather, I feel that when the author writes about the heroine and the hero, hehehe, I will be even more like a big yellow girl. I only read 1V1, but as the story develops in this book, I think 1v2 is also possible hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha😃 I can only say that the male lead is standing up and his image is not bad. Ps: There are some places that could have been written in more detail but were not written, which I feel is a pity. I hope the author can write a long article. It is no problem to write one or two million words casually in this setting. When the heroine gets along with these two men, she feels a little bit like, um, too close? I don't know if the author writes about strong women or weak characters (for male protagonists). I actually eat them all, delicate flower ➕ rough man, strong woman ➕ loyal dog, hahahahahaha. The reason why it can only be given 4 stars is personal preference: the contact between the female protagonist and the male protagonist and the second male lead. Keep watching and looking forward to the next plot]

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and overall it is quite satisfactory to my taste, but there are two outstanding points. One is the female rivalry. I originally had no opinion on the female rivalry. After all, it is quite interesting to have a few female villains to stimulate the plot, but there are too many female rivals. After the heroine has solved one, another one comes, and like Xiaoqiang, it feels a bit endless, except for the heroine's mother and the two female villains. The elders are nice to the heroine, but she doesn't have a female friend around her. Most of the women are spreading rumors about the heroine. The other one is the hero's mother. She has always felt that the hero and the heroine's brother have been together. The hero has made it obvious that he doesn't like men, and he is so attentive to the heroine. The hero's mother still doesn't believe it, and the heroine also misunderstands that the hero has run away from home. Apart from these two red flags, I think it's okay.

I don't know if it's multiple male protagonists or 1vs1. I'll give it 4 stars first. I personally prefer multiple male protagonists.

Looking forward to the subsequent plot and 1v2

In the novel, the male protagonist always loves to cling to the female protagonist, which made me laugh unconsciously and made me unable to help but keep reading.

Very easy and smooth meal preparation ~ The writing is smooth, the story is smooth, the characters are smooth, and it is not overwhelming to read. The heroine is also very comfortable. The male protagonists are also very straightforward [laughing]

It's a very interesting period piece that makes people want to read it more and more. I like to watch movies with multiple male protagonists the most.

It's nice to watch, the sweet and doting male protagonist is so clingy, I hope it will be more meaty in the later period, and then less of a demon to daydream about the female supporting characters, it will be better [face covering]