
HP: Has Severus Snape Dumped Me Today?
HP西弗勒斯今天甩掉我了吗
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Baby Arisel is so cute, but the early stage was really miserable. As the protagonist, I hope that the protagonist will live a happy life in the future. In addition to happiness, he must also live a life as happy as the Dark Lord. Otherwise, how can he be worthy of the experience along the way? I suddenly remembered a sentence, what kind of ending should be worthy of the ups and downs of this journey.
It's very interesting. I like watching this kind of feeling of fighting each other. My current feeling is that our protagonist Axel is also very nervous. I like this kind of crazy beauty with a lot of bad intentions. I feel like a "blue long gland coral snake" really suits Axel. Sel is both beautiful and dangerous, and getting along with Sev is also very "good". I feel like the two of them are so cute just killing each other. They are really cute when they are fighting and killing (to protect me, I am afraid of Sel assassinating me). Sel has shown that Sel has strong magic power and learns things quickly. To put it simply, he is a genius, and based on the previous chapters and the cover, Seer has white hair, red eyes, and a mole under his eye. I feel that the cover does not depict his beauty [sending heart]. I feel that he has nothing, so he can abandon everything, but he is not willing to accept it all. , And then he became very crazy and felt like he had some mental problems (I didn't mean to scold him, I just felt a little bit after looking at these photos) and then I could see that he really hated others pitying him, and then he was a child who was very good at pretending and very scheming! I also got involved with Lu Tu. The bully Xiao Xifu has never read the novel. She is really a bloody beauty. Maybe it is because of his father and the environment, so his character is really extreme, so the description in the article is more depressing and bloody. 🥰What should I do if a pervert like me is really excited when I look at it? I just want to make him miserable more and more exciting, and then I will feel that he is so miserable. Imagine that scene, and then you will have two feelings. Thinking of such a beautiful face, stained with red scars and tears of fear, but also thinking that he is still a seven-year-old child (don't scold me, I really feel bold). If you don't believe me, go and watch it. That's it for the time being, but it's really rare. Although I said that the New Year time is tight and I am saving my manuscript, but I really want to read it.
Come in and read all these good books for me. I really like the character of Axel who is a little extreme and vindictive. The most important thing is the interaction with Severus. I feel that the relationship between the two people is completely developed in the confrontation. Sometimes when I thought Axel was going to start the cliche doting plot, he would instead give Severus a heavy blow without holding back any good shit. The scene with Severus embroidered on the underwear made me want to die laughing, hahahahahahaha. Moreover, the author's emotional description of Severus is also very detailed. From the beginning, the feelings of disgust, contempt, and pity slowly change, and the protagonist breaks into Severus' life by breaking into houses and robberies again and again ("real" housebreaking and robbery, the kind where he climbs through the window in the middle of the night). And after they got together, the description of Severus's possessiveness, which was a little dark in his heart, made me happy to death. The relationship between the two of them was not simply about who saved the other, but a complete confrontation and complete possession. Axel really wanted to fill up Severus's entire life. Well done, so fiercely entangling Severus 260 degrees without any blind spots. So cool! ! ! Axel is really one of the rare protagonists who has a strong sense of being alive. His jealousy is not only not annoying to me, but also very real and endearing.
I couldn't help but comment after seeing the latest chapter. I really like the protagonist's character [Adoration]. I personally feel that it is very similar to Scarlett's character. They are both full of unyielding fate and very vitality. While reading, the part where Scarlett swears often comes to mind. To be honest, the character of the protagonist is very rare and novel. There is a high probability that the protagonist likes and hates longer than love. For him, the jealousy and resentment of others towards him are his nutrients and support him to survive.
The character design is so cool!!!! It's pretty much the same as the introduction. Axel is very dark and narrow-minded. He is a very delicious little male ghost. It is very interesting. There is a strong sense of tension between the protagonists. It is very interesting and it took two or three hours to catch up. I am looking forward to the next plot development!
Good review! Your book must be well received. As for Axel, he's so pitiful. Is this a spoiler? I'm actually trying to make up the word count in order to complete the task. Axel has never received sincere love in his life, so he has nothing to fear. In the end, he is still worried because of love, and afraid because of love. If he is separated from his lover, he has no worries and no fear. If Axel was raised in a normal family one day, would he be a good person? I don't think so. His nature is rather evil. It should be said that he is somewhere in the middle. He is found wherever there is fun. Poor baby
Hate Axel's hatred grows in the seams of his bones. It is not like ordinary people's hatred, which will fade over time and will be resolved by a tender moment. His hate was alive, breathing, growing, piercing its thorns an inch deeper every time he saw Severus. When he was eight years old, he knew at first sight - he had to hate this person. Why can he look at himself with pity? Why can he look at me like this? Axel looked at Severus with an unknown fire burning in his heart. The fire was not strong, but it was never extinguished. It burned his internal organs and deformed them. He pushed Severus and the Marauder together into the lake. When the water splashed, he felt extremely happy. But the pleasure was fleeting, like a drop of water being dropped into boiling oil - it exploded more intensely and burned more painfully. Why? Why can't you even hate him to the fullest? He removed Severus from the tree and hung up his underwear. The whole school laughed, and so did he. But he was smiling, but the corners of his mouth were frozen there. Because he saw the way Severus looked at him - not anger, not humiliation, not even hatred. He just looked at me with pity, like looking at a noisy crow. That look was more vicious than any reply. Axel's hatred took root from then on. He began to pay attention to Severus's every move - the way he walked, the tone of his voice, the side of his face covered by his long hair when he lowered his head to read. Everywhere made him hate it, and every place made him unable to take his eyes away. At night he stalked him, clawing at him like an octopus. Severus pushed against him, and he tightened his grip. Severus scolded him and he silenced him. When he woke up the next day, he looked at the people around him and was trembling with hatred. Hate him, hate myself, hate everything that is inexplicable. "You hate me," Severus said once. That's not a question. Axel smiled, his eyes red with laughter: "Yes, I hate you. I hate you for making me like this. I hate you so much that I forget who I am." He hates everyone—those who pity him, those who give him alms, and those who love him. He hates those who are superior and those who think too highly of themselves. Others call him white-eyed wolf, but he admits it. But those people's hatred combined was not even one ten thousandth of the hatred he felt towards Severus. That hatred was as thick as ink and as thick as blood. It couldn't be taken back when it was poured out. If swallowed, it would burn through the intestines. Sometimes he couldn't tell whether it was Severus he hated or himself who hated Severus. That year, he went to the Screaming Shack. Not to save anyone, but to destroy Dumbledore. He told himself so. But halfway through, all he could think about was Severus's face - not the thirteen-year-old, but the eight-year-old, the ten-year-old, and every moment he hated it. He thought, if Severus knew that he was going to die, would he hate him for the rest of his life? Later, he realized that some hatred, hating and hating, became his destiny. A tit-for-tat confrontation for one year is a mortal enemy; a tit-for-tat confrontation for seven years is an addiction more poisonous than love. His addiction, named Severus.
Oh my god, when I see it now, I think it's super good-looking. The protagonist is so crazy. The crazier she gets, the more she falls in love with her [Adoration]. Hurry up and write the plot. I can't wait. I'm so looking forward to it! ! ! Madam, please use more braille and don't finish it too early [crying] I really think it looks good!
It looks good, and it's great to fight against Lu Fufu. This article is the first confrontation group I have read that persisted. The confrontation groups I read before were not so evenly matched. I just relied on myself to read the original work. There is a feeling that although Sri Lanka is an undercover agent, he should not be so venomous and arrogant. It belongs to the reader. It's rare to find an article that has an equal relationship and starts from the pro era. In this article, I can see the growth process of Si Jiao. It is his own growth process instead of following the timeline of the original work and getting mixed up with Lily. My personal feelings for Lily are very complicated, but I don't really want Si Jiao to have too much contact with her. There is a feeling that the good things Si Jiao does are all because of her or her guidance. However, people's initial nature is good and people's initial evil is a theory of relativity. Si Jiao has no idea at all in Spider Tail Alley. With good teaching, although Hogwarts is good, it is only for learning magic. There is no positive teaching. Unless you see the consequences of the wrong things with your own eyes, it will be difficult to correct it. [Thinking] Dada has given Sifu a relatively better family here. With the positive guidance of his mother, Sif has more support and can calm down and think about his own development instead of thinking about climbing up together. Thanks to Dada, I have seen Sif who has the same core character but has a better future.
It's very interesting, and the emotions are very delicately portrayed. I like the gray tone of this article, but the torture of the two little bitter gourds is very interesting. I feel that this article will be more sour. The protagonists are all very cute [blowing kisses], they make me look cute for no reason! I hope the author can update more! Who knows what it feels like for a student party to find a good article on the weekend! ::>_<:: If the traffic is good, I feel it is 9 points or above! [Laughing][Laughing] It looks great, highly recommended! [Love] [Love] [Love] The protagonist is very individual, which is a rare setting in foreign persimmons🍅! Looking forward to the next plot! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] (What else is there to say!\^O^/I really recommend this book!)