After the Yandere Junior Sister Turned Black, I Became Her Only Favorite

(Involving the content of this book) Hungry, let's start with the marinade and let's talk about the advantages of this book first. I think the advantage of this book is that the author has a lot of feedback from readers. Most of the readers' comments in the book have been praised by the author. The author can pick up on the little jokes I made at the bottom of the book. The author also has feedback in the article from other readers' book reviews, which increases the distance between readers and the author. Even if I don't come here to read, I can still have a few conversations with an interesting soul. Then there is the character description of Su Moxue, who is a paranoid little girl. One of her most impressive plots was when Shen Yan went to the outer gate and she showed her wounds to the returning Shen Yan. This coincided with the first few chapters of the book that Su Moxue would attract Shen Yan's attention by self-mutilation. I like this form. Su Moxue was paranoid and a little childish at the same time. She did things that Shen Yan did not allow. She always wanted to be "cute" and get away with it. She spoke coyly and never left "Shen Yan" in every word. She hoped that when this child grows up, he would stop being so naughty. I have a question after reading this. Shen Yan needs 5 yanderes with a favorability of 100 to complete the system's tasks. But with Su Moxue's current situation, what method will he use to conquer the next yandere without the previous yandere's favorability decreasing? Looking forward to the author's writing in this regard. The last suggestion is for the author. I feel that there are too few descriptions of the character's appearance in the book. So far, Su Moxue's appearance is just a few plum blossoms, a washed white gray clothes and a hairpin on her head. Nangong Li is even more pitiful. He can only wear a pair of cyan clothes and has no other clothes to wear (I don't mean that a single description appears multiple times) [facepalm]. I hope the author can describe his appearance from other angles. I hope the author can continue writing this book well. This is the longest book review I have ever written [crying]. I saw this book on a recommendation. Someone will definitely read this book in the future. I hope that this book review of mine can be a bottle of happy water on your table when you are writing a book late at night, a heater in the cold winter, and can bring a little more good mood to your life.

This is a masterpiece that is anti-routine, heavy on logic, and strong on emotional tension. It is not suitable for readers who are looking for mindless fun and having girls in the harem, but it is very suitable for readers who like protagonists with online IQs, complex and profound character relationships, and step-by-step survival journeys in desperate situations. It allowed me to see another possibility for yandere novels besides "she chases him and escapes": finding balance in twisted emotions, giving birth to guardianship in the ultimate possession, and gaining a glimmer of hope in a fatal situation. Big cheers to the author! Maintaining this quality, this book definitely has the potential to become a god! It has been added to the bookshelf and will be updated day and night!

Advantages 1. The emotional description is very delicate. The detailed description of the interaction between the male protagonist and his junior sister, as well as the junior sister's affection and possessiveness towards the male protagonist, all fit the image of a yandere. 2. The other female protagonists appear naturally, and will not appear as characters in order to advance the plot like other yandere novels. Disadvantages/confusion points 1. The main line is unclear: To be honest, I still don't understand what the main plot is when I read this book. However, the author wrote about the memories of the junior sister's past life in the jade pendant (probably?) And didn't write it later, which made me very confused. Moreover, it was only in Chapter 77 that the male protagonist solved the cause of the demon clan inspection incident in the clan. In my opinion, it was a bit delayed, but the author himself has an outline of the long plot description/the foreshadowing of the junior sister's emotional line, the opening of subsequent dungeon events, etc. Please treat this as fart. 2 Junior Sisters 0 Growth: The male protagonist has tried every method he could think of to cover up his demonic aura for his junior sister, but every time the male protagonist would swallow her anger for her while the junior sister directly activates her demonic aura, making the male protagonist's efforts in vain, and it seemed to me that he was exhausted. Although the junior sister is a yandere and does not want to see the male protagonist being wronged, the male protagonist is wronged for the sake of the junior sister. Can't you understand and bear with it a little bit? This was really not very pleasant in the early stages. On the other hand, Nangong seems to be more understanding. At least it will give the male protagonist face (although she will definitely make trouble in the future), but Nangong, the female protagonist, is more comfortable to watch. 3 Number of heroines and harem: Three female characters have appeared so far. Read the introduction of the book and there will definitely be more female characters in the future. The author needs to make it clear whether the male protagonist wants to be a six/n-winged archangel or a junior sister or another female protagonist. It is good to be repeatedly pulled by Master Duanshui, but with the increase of female characters, the description of the interaction between the male protagonist and the character will inevitably become simple and boring, which will lead to the stereotype of the female character. This will make the current highlight of the book, the delicate interactive description and the emotional interaction of the female character, gradually disappear. And if it is a single pusher, it is up to the author to handle the feelings of other non-single pushers, but if it is not handled well, it will become a very big poisonous point. 4 Pages As mentioned before, the main line is unclear and the increase in female characters leads to rough interactions. If the author is willing to write a million words to solve the problem, this will test the author's grasp of the rhythm of the novel. I hope the author will not disappoint everyone. I also hope the author can answer the approximate length of this novel. All in all, this book is still very good to read. If the author has his own outline plan, then he can follow his own pace and make the main line a little clearer. I will give him a gift at the end.

The author's writing style is not bad, and it is beyond the level of novice writing, but it is still a bit immature in some places. As for the yandere, there is only Su Muxue in the book for the time being. She is a possessive type, and she is also very immature [face covering]. The protagonist's initial status is very low, a handyman, and Su dares to contradict the sect's genius disciple (but this disciple is interested in the protagonist and will not take it too seriously, and according to the introduction, he should be one of the female protagonists) One thing I think is very innovative about this book is that Su is a demon, but the species is a white plum demon. Finally, it is not a dragon or a phoenix. The author also often focuses on describing smells. This is a book that I can look forward to in the future. In my heart right now, it should actually be rated four stars. However, this is a new book, so I'll give it five stars.

When I read Chapter 39, it was very well written. The descriptions of each character were very delicate, and the plot was not dull. The only discomfort may be that Su's emotions were too heart-wrenching. However, the generation and ups and downs of emotions were very complete, and it didn't feel inexplicable. The author said that the protagonist's weakness and Su's emotions have improved. The quality of the plot in the early stage can be given nine points.

The most touching thing about this novel is that the author's control of emotions is so delicate and precise. There is no forced sensationalism, and no bloody routines. Every heartbeat, hesitation, grievance, and relief of the characters are written very realistically, as if they are happening around them, and it is easy for people to immerse themselves in it. The emotions are increasing layer by layer, and the stamina is very strong. After reading it, I couldn't put it down for a long time. The writing is clean and graphic, the story has a comfortable rhythm, and the emotional concentration is just right. This kind of heart-warming and easy-to-read work has a feeling that it will become a small hit, and the more I read it, the more I will become addicted to it. It is said that what is different from other novels is the realm of cultivation. I feel that if it were another author, the most likely thing would be to increase the favorability and combat power and then directly cut the grass and clear the level. Come on, author

There are very few cool points. I have only read Chapter 62. The yandere in this article is more about thoughts, that is, I hope that the other party will never leave me. It is a pity that there is no specific hope for the protagonist to have a relationship with the hero, because from the beginning to chapter 62, there is no mention of the heroine wanting to have a relationship with the hero. Moreover, the pace is very slow for me. Maybe it is because many Tomato books pursue fast pace, so I also pursue fast pace. It would be better if I change the platform. But it can be seen that the author wants to write this book well and has thought carefully. This is really good. The above is my personal opinion. I'm really sorry that I couldn't accompany you throughout the process. I also hope that the author will write better and better.

One of the few books that has been written into my heart! I really regret reading this book. I feel so empty in my heart (╥╯╰╥)ง. I hope you will continue to keep it up. Don't collapse. I gave you my first time. If you collapse and run away halfway, I will never forget you in my life o(´^｀)o (This review has many subjective factors. I have only read more than 20 chapters, so it has little reference significance)

The writing is very good. Can you arrange for the protagonist to use Yanling Dao or Hengdao as a weapon later on? I feel like I have never seen an article about cultivating immortals + yandere + harem where the protagonist uses a knife. Miss Ye calls the male protagonist senior brother, and the male protagonist calls her senior sister. Are the two of them bragging about each other in business?

The writing is very good, I look forward to the Shura Field in the future [laughing evilly]

This is really nice. The author is serious about listening to suggestions to improve himself, and he cares about the readers. This is so appealing to fans. You must finish it, author.

How to say it? The author's emotional descriptions are quite delicate, and there is a warm feeling when reading them. In the current environment where AI writing is rampant with all kinds of random writing, it is a breath of fresh air. It has a very refreshing feeling, but sometimes the plot line feels a bit delayed, but come on, author, I believe it can be better.

Undoubtedly, it is better than other templated yandere articles that only know how to be crazy. The writing is very delicate and the rhythm is well controlled. I hope the author will not give up ❤️‍🔥

Great, great, author, come on

Very interesting, good luck to the author

It's a great review, not a fake one. It's really good at writing.

Very good. To be honest, I'm a bit humbled [face covering] Why does it feel like the character changed in the later part? In the early part, the senior sister was described as cold and cedar-like. But in the later part, it feels like she has become like a tsundere young lady. It feels more formulaic than before.

It's okay, it's a bit slow to warm up and a little less refreshing, but it's really a very good yandere novel.

It's pretty good-looking for this subject matter. You'll know what level you're at after watching it.

It is one of the few slow-burning novels with clear logic, full character descriptions, coherent plots, and is not obtrusive. If you compare other cool novels of the same type to short videos, then this is a simple book, mellow and profound.

Good grasp of personality and emotions

This is my first time rating. After reading this novel after getting used to impetuous works, I feel like I am reading a fairy book and my eyes are temporarily enlightened.

It's very well written. I haven't seen such a slow-paced novel for a long time. I feel very friendly after reading the author's replies to readers. There have been more comments in the past two days. I hope the author will get better and better [laughs]

It's very beautiful, the emotions are described very delicately, and the male protagonist is even more calm.

Not bad, it suits my taste very well. It is slow-heated without losing the unique flavor. It would be better if the pace is a little faster. [Sending Hearts]

It looks great and fits the taste perfectly.

It's very well written, I hope it doesn't end badly.

Emotionally delicate and well written

Not bad, very detailed writing

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