The Outcast: Wandering the Mortal World

I have written down the low scores below the shortcomings. I can only say that the author did not follow the comics carefully enough, so please focus on the details. However, at least the author writes his own story, which is different from those that simply add individuals. There are a few paragraphs in the middle that are a bit twisted and buggy, but overall it's smooth and runnable. Some of the Taoist thoughts and logic of the exercises can be seen that the author has been reading and thinking about the book. At least as a cloud player, it feels okay to read, and Chunshuang has not gone through these in a hurry. So far, this is a good fanfic, and I hope it won't collapse in the future. After all, after joining a relatively large stage like Miyadu, the conflict between the official stability and the foreign heroes using force to break the ban, and whether the restrictions of Miyamoto and the freedom of Taoism can really be organically integrated, it depends on whether the author can control it. But that's what fan fiction is good for. The big frame of the original work is all set up, so it can be used as long as it's not too dismantled and tinkered with.

I feel that compared to those cool stories that change the world and one person, this one hardly changes the direction of the story. The protagonist is to witness these people making their own choices and briefly see and accompany them as friends. It is really well written. The journey and kindness of an ordinary person, Zhang San, have the protagonist to come to the world for a while.

I really like it, please give it a thumbs up to the author And listen to me: "You are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you You are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team. The donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team Donkey, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, you are the donkey of the production team, urge more, urge more [angry]"

I feel that the writing is pretty good. Originally, if I followed the original work completely, what kind of fan fiction would I be reading? I could just read the original work. The protagonist does not upgrade entirely by comprehending some magical sword skills, but by understanding his own Tao, what is freedom, and what is his own Tao. It's not a completely enjoyable read, but it's very enjoyable to read.

I watched it last night, and it's now 3:47 in the morning. What should I say after watching it? The writing doesn't seem to be too exciting, but it's not too ordinary. At least it's not the same as what I've seen. I don't want to comment. But it's really good. It's like I read half of a person's life, this fan fiction. I seem to have no energy to read the rest of the content. I seem to think that this is enough, at least these are enough.

Good books are not popular series! (I won't be able to give a long review, so I can only give it five stars)

This book has a sense of storytelling through listening.

The writing is great and the pen is not bad

It's okay, author, come on

That's okay, it's quite ink-stained [laughs][laughs]