[Comprehensive Comic] Yanyun System Keeps Deducting Money!

The rice cooked by the boss is delicious [][][][]. The emotional line is not obtrusive at all, and the male protagonist's character is also very good. I really like the daily interactions between the male protagonist and other characters. It's really very sweet to say. I hope you can keep going for more, I'm really looking forward to it [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Huh? Just lie. Isn't the protagonist a genius? [What] [What] Why why is it so brittle? In the early stage, he is simply a fragile shark, especially the male protagonist who cannot win in a life-or-death fight. Who knows the contrast between others who can easily KO him🥹. Although he is a growth-oriented male protagonist, his combat power is not a little too weak. At least I won't suffer too much. It's really frustrating to watch. Although the backgrounds are different, Yan Yun's skills still have a bit of a fantasy feel. Although one is not strong individually, he is better in many. And in the early stage, the male protagonist was too obsessed with the life of ordinary people. Besides, the male protagonist knew that he could change the world, right? Possessing super strong martial arts, the ability to change the world, financial affluence, and the ability to know the plot in advance. After a year of working under these conditions, you still can't beat the supporting role? [Laughs] [Laughs] And doesn't the male protagonist have sexual recovery ability? Why doesn't he use it after he wakes up after being injured later? There is also the mentality of the male protagonist. Wow, others have come to visit me, and they all come here with bad intentions and still say that I am just an ordinary student. [Face covering][Face covering] Wow... I really don't know what to say. There are many places where I want to reflect the character of the male protagonist, but I really don't know what to say here. Overall, it seems that the emotional lines are written very delicately, and the combat power really needs to be evaluated, and the change in the mentality of the male protagonist is really stupid now [face covering] [face covering]

Jpg of the main character looking for a book, such a young article

Okay, this author is also writing about awesome Foklas, okay, I just called my whole family to resign and drop out of school, and they all read this novel full time at home, okay, I am Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer odious, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to eat 200 servings of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helped me generate the author's bikini photos, and Doubao told me tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and os finally allowed me to eat something delicious. Ended the game. ! It's awesome. OK, OK. I wish the author directly that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine.

It's good-looking. The male protagonist's character is gentle and kind. It's currently the first world, the world of the literary writer Stray Dogs. I'm looking forward to what kind of sparks Yan Yun and Zongman can create [Send Heart][Send Heart] The author's writing style is very delicate and gentle, and the daily life he depicts is also very warm. It's good to watch and will read more [Send Heart][Send Heart] I look forward to the author's follow-up works [Send Heart][Send Heart]

Note: This comment is just a personal opinion and does not mean any challenge. Overall, the writing style is good although it is still a bit juvenile. However, the description of the appearance of the protagonist in the first few chapters is a bit too much, which makes people feel a little tired from reading. The article mentioned that the protagonist has read Fumino. If you have read it, you should understand Dazai Osamu's character. However, the protagonist gave me the feeling that I don't know Dazai Osamu's character (I didn't say what the author meant, just the feeling the protagonist gave me). If you like to read Master Control, you can read this book.

The writing is quite nice, but the author wrote it in an all-oriented way. I felt like it was all-oriented before, but now it is written in a friendship-oriented way. Now I can see that the protagonist and the detective will like each other a little bit, and then in this world, I feel that the author mainly wrote about Dazai Osamu and the detective. Others mentioned it. The author's style is quite big.

Good looking! ! Finally found one that suits my liking! [Crying]🥹🥹

So few! But very beautiful(´艸｀)

The boss is simply sent from God [sending my heart] [admiration]

It's so good. I read this book because I was bored and it turned out to be so good. It's a pity that the content is too little. Does the author dare to update 100 chapters at once? Let me see what NB [shy] [shy] [shy] is.

Very beautifully written! Boss, please update quickly, I'll eat, eat, eat!

Not bad, but when the protagonist is injured, why don't he use a fan instead of Liangyi ointment? It can't just be consumed by Liangyi ointment 😂

It's super beautiful, but the number of words is too few, but so far, the writing and other aspects are very good [note] Why do you feel that the protagonist's subjectivity has weakened? And why does the protagonist keep weakening repeatedly in the later period, which feels like the combat effectiveness has been weakened. So far, the early stage is still good, but the writing style and plot need to be modified in the later stage. The logic is not very smooth. I hope it can be changed a lot. Everything else is okay. I look forward to the next world [Sending Hearts]

It looks good, it looks good, do you still want to update it? Boss, do you want to update it? Please update it, boss, please, mommy T_T

Very warm daily [send heart][send heart]

Nice! Come on, boss

Very very very beautiful

Love to watch👀Please give me more❤️*^_^*

It's quite interesting. Even one world is too long.

The controller can come, there is not much difference except that there are fewer chapters.

Teacher, I really hope you are a donkey in the production team, so that you can keep writing articles.

Not bad, I hope I won't be disappointed in the future. Updated @ pathetic poems

Let me go, it's really good. I was shocked if the author dared to update it to 100,000 words. .

I particularly like the protagonist's character, which makes people feel warm and happy watching it.

It's not bad, really. I have ten years of experience as a bookworm. It's really good. The score is a bit too low. My level is between 8.3-8.8.

Super good-looking. Super good-looking. Super good-looking. The plot is very good! !

The author's writing is great. After reading so much, I feel that the emotions are particularly delicate and warm and loving [Sending my heart]

I like it. It's rare to see Yanzi and Zongman.

Author, just be jealous of me, why do you have to write out the details of cooking! Show it to me in the middle of the night and I'm hungry. Apart from the description of the appearance, it's really beautiful!