My Benefits-Only Neighbor Is the Zerg's Grand Prince

I read the review before reading the book. The bad reviews are right. Some of the plots are indeed too long-winded. There are too many interspersed memories and there are too many supporting characters, which affects the perception of the main plot. The author has a magical operation. When the two protagonists seem to have just met (I can't remember the specific chapter), he suddenly gives a thunderous extra story. He writes that the two protagonists can run and jump, and they will live a happy daily life in the future. In the first few pages, it was obvious that the problem of new writers is the same as writing a running account: they write wherever they dream. You can clearly feel the progress later on. When I read the first few chapters, I wanted to leave immediately. After reading the first chapter or the second chapter, it was much better. Then the author said that it was written about bloody things, but he really wrote about bloody things, which is very ancient and classic. But I also like to watch it (I made preparations, but I almost didn't get over it). If you don't like it, don't watch it. It will easily make you angry. Later, the writing became better and better, and the author's character creation became better and better. The main CP was good-looking, and the secondary CP (reader CP) was also good-looking. There was no bloody plot progression, the emotional development was quite natural, and the writing was quite sweet. What I also like about the Zerg society is that it doesn't involve the struggle between male and female Zerg with bitterness and hatred. To sum up, there is a big pitfall in the early stage. If you can accept it, you can go and take a look. In the later stage, both the main CP and the deputy CP are very good, and there are improvements in all aspects. The more you write, the better.

Flaws do not cover up strengths. I read the review before reading the book. The bad reviews are right. Some of the plots are indeed too long-winded. There are too many interspersed memories and there are too many supporting characters, which affects the perception of the main plot. However, the author did a good job in shaping the characters. The main CP is good-looking, and the secondary CP (reader CP) is also good-looking. There is no bloody plot advancement, the emotional development is quite natural, and the writing is quite sweet. The Zerg society is also what I like. The struggle between male and female Zerg without bitterness and hatred is the second Zerg society I like in this book besides Nao Chun. I hope the author will write about Zerg in his next book. I like this style of Zerg writing.

After seeing Chapter 64, let me rate it, 8-8.5. I'll read it again after hundreds of thousands more words. If it gets better, I'll change the rating 🤔. The emotional line is good, developing slowly, and the characters of the two protagonists are quite likable; the plot line, the Chinese version is quite interesting, I really like to read writing/writing copywriting and other themes. I haven't read many Zerg stories, so the setting feels very novel, which is good; the only shortcoming is that there is a lot of nonsense, or it is not nonsense but easy to, um, off topic🤔? For example, I want to read about Zerg writing, exploring social life, and emotional lines, etc., But there are a lot of past life stories in the writing, and I am not very interested in reading about making careless friends in past lives, meeting other young potential authors, etc., And these have nothing to do with Zerg, writing, and emotional lines. It's a "long talk" [face covering]; and for example, when asked what do you think about something, there are often hundreds, a thousand words between answers before the answer comes. These hundreds of words are all divergent thoughts about similar situations and similar problems in previous lives, and there are too many off-topic things [face covering]. But the overall core content is really well written. Interested book friends can feel free to give it a try 👍

The subsequent differentiation of the tail hook is really delicious, and the story plot is very classic. I feel like I hugged him when I was a child, and I laughed to death. It is so funny. How many advertisements did the author have to watch to write the plot of the bloody novel on the market? Hahaha, the writing and plot are both interesting. Highly recommend

Let me express my opinion first: I like the author's writing very much! I am a protagonist fan, but after more than 170 chapters, I feel tired from following the protagonist's story. There are too many Chinese characters in the text, and there are too many irrelevant CPs. I don't know what role they play in the protagonist's story. I don't exclude Chinese characters. The first time I came into contact with Zerg characters was "Pure Love". This Chinese character promoted the protagonist's relationship and helped the protagonist's career. However, this book is simply a Chinese character. Deleting the irrelevant CP and Chinese characters will have no impact on the protagonist. To put it simply, there are too many digressions. And irrelevant CP has become a safe haven for the author to a certain extent. There were times when the plot climaxed, and the author changed his pen and started writing irrelevant CP. The climax of the plot was abruptly cut off, and once the story was over, everyone forgot about the climax. If a writer wants to make progress, he must learn to write climaxes. Finally: I'll write more about the main cp [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

It looks very good and it's true. I would like to ask for a little less CP. I am looking forward to posting from the main CP every day, but I really like the emotional line of the main CP. At the beginning, it feels like a pure brother (actually it is not complete), the opening is more natural, the emotional line is quite smooth, and the Chinese content of the article is also good. It's just that the main cp has too few emotional lines! ! It's not enough to watch. Yunzhou Yunzhou will update soon.

It feels okay, and the writing is not particularly awkward, except for some logical problems in some places. . I feel that this article is for an old feudalist like me who has been reading Zerg books since 20 years ago: sometimes the Chinese text is too long, and I haven't seen the protagonist for a long time. For me who is following up on reading, I may forget the previous content! ! ! ! Excluding the content other than the Chinese text, I personally feel that apart from being a bit verbose, their interaction is quite sweet. I like the feeling of short attack, kawaii 1, strong man receiving, big breasts receiving, and being pampered. I just like to attack the arrogant and weak look, oh, no, no, I'm a bit verbose. I can only say that I really love the way the Zerg gives you equal rights in a world of inequality. Okay, back to the topic, the highlight of this article is that there are too many descriptions of the protagonist's previous life, and the descriptions are repeated many times when the personnel are basically complete. (But I don't care.) There is also a deputy cp. The author sometimes draws a few more descriptions. Also, in the Chinese version, sometimes the protagonist, as the author, doesn't know much about the Zerg, and there are some, um, embarrassing situations. But I feel that it is a little different from most of the tomato-based essays. It feels like the author really thought about it seriously. Also, the advancement of the main plot is too slow. Judging from this situation, it should be a long story. The advantage is that it is suitable for omnivorous people. If you are too tired to watch a single CP interaction, you can relax with some short stories. However, this gives me a feeling like the live-streamed writing of Little Green Book, which may also come from this (obviously I only had 100 favorites when I read this book!!!). But this is a cut-down version (I think it's because I didn't spend money to buy it.) But this novel looks quite interesting. That is, I suggest you update three chapters a day? Two Chinese texts plus a plot chapter, or insert a plot into the two Chinese texts. I waited for two days and found out that the four texts were all in Chinese. Sometimes I was really helpless.

Oh my god, this is so interesting! Many times I have to slow down for a while while reading, and then continue reading when I've laughed enough. The articles in the article are also classics! It reminded me of the days when I was crazily watching ads on major social media apps. It was ridiculous, but it was so fun! 🤦

Very well written! It's different from most Zerg stories! A very novel feeling! The characters of the two protagonists are quite good, very interesting characters! I really like the Zerg written by the author. I feel that the sense of life is very vivid. The female Zerg will not blindly pursue the male Zerg, but will still accept the male Zerg that can be dated. The local male Zerg have different personalities, and they are not all ugly, fat, short, or stereotyped. I really like the author's large-scale writing in Chinese. It feels like one real-life insect after another. I hope my wife can write more, and I hope that each insect has its own ending. And madam, please let the bloody blood come more violently! ! !

Very good, very novel. Females are strong and control reproductive resources more than anything else. I was a little bit reluctant to eat kava 1 at first, but then I thought about it and realized it was delicious. I want a military female! I want a military female! I want a military female!