An Ordinary Girl Cultivates Immortality: From the Start, She Finds a Space-Bearing Wooden Bead

It's pretty good. The heroine is also cautious. There is no Virgin behavior in more than sixty chapters. The author will keep up the good work and update more (I hope they don't write anything with cp, otherwise I won't be able to bear it.

Those dialogues about acting coquettishly and acting like children are a bit awkward, and the proportion can be reduced a little, but the part about cultivating immortality is not bad. Again, I choose to read the novel about cultivating immortality just to see that the heroine successfully cultivates the great path and achieves immortality. If you want to watch conspiracy, conspiracy or emotional drama, I have my own arrangements.

The author's writing style is good, and the conception is also very good. There are few plots, intrigues, and intrigues in the article. Everyone devotes themselves to cultivation and achieves the great road together. I really like this kind of article. However, it can be seen that the author likes to use words such as deep knowledge, deep understanding, and far beyond. I hope the author can reduce the number of uses or replace them with other words and sentences in the future. Moreover, some of the descriptions in the article are too detailed and wordy, making it tiring to read for a long time. For example, when praising the heroine, when the heroine is setting up formations and casting spells, there will be many descriptions and praises of the heroine's super talent. After reading too much, it feels a bit vain. Overall, it's quite good-looking, good luck to the author!

Overall it's pretty good, at least there's no female competition, no heartthrob control group, there's no plot in the book, there's no vicious characters, there aren't that many people looking for trouble, it's all robbing by rogue cultivators, the rest of the heroines are having a smooth life, but it just feels a little too smooth 🤦 I've never been injured, drawn talismans to make alchemy, and the array judge learned it right away. She was only 8 years old the first time I went out to experience it, and no one took me with me, does she know the way? 🤦 The second time I went out to experience it alone, it was still 5 I just came back in 2018. His senior brother said he protected her so well that I just wanted to laugh 😂 I have only been in the world of immortality for 8 years in total, and it has been five or six years since I went out to practice. Cultivation may be relatively boring. After watching it, I felt that the plot was a bit too bland, that is, the heroine's parents were very good after receiving the world of immortality. I felt that there were too many inner thoughts in it. I skipped through the rest of the book. I felt that there were more stories about other people, and the heroine's cultivation level was constantly improving 😂 Overall, it was good

It's good to read, but don't stop updating it. If you do, you can only read other novels. You will forget the previous ones in a few days.

I think it's okay. The author didn't handle some small details well, which sometimes causes misunderstandings among readers. People who are impatient may not be able to read it. Overall, it's okay. It's just that I prefer the genius flow, and I don't like some unnecessary hiding, such as my own space. I definitely have to hide it, but I think it is necessary to slightly highlight my talents within a controllable range. Maybe I don't like the mouth-mouthed protagonist. Well, I hope this book can find readers who like it more.

Everything written by this author is beautiful! All five-star reviews! Nice

The plot is good, there is no intrigue, and the heroine is given a lot of gold, such as the fusion of the secret realm. The secret realm is refined by the heroine without anyone else knowing. This kind of silently making a fortune without the risk of being coveted and hunted down is really good. The heroine is very sincere to her teachers, family and friends, and she guarantees that she will not be stingy when practicing cultivation, and will not feel that what she is giving is charity. This is much better than some of the things I have seen before. But there is a problem. The author writes very much like a high school essay. The various descriptions look like words. It feels like you only need ten words to add up to several paragraphs. Ah, for example, if you arrange a formation disk to protect your family, the author must first write about how to make the formation disk, how to arrange it, and the surrounding reactions after the arrangement. If you read it carefully, you will find that your brain cannot extract any information [shocked], so it is suitable for readers who can read quickly, or who like detailed descriptions.

I hope that Xia Shuhe and Xia Shumian, brother and sister, will work together in the world of immortality, not rejecting hardships, overcoming difficulties, practicing hard, learning more skills, reaching a higher realm, and ascending to the immortal world and the divine world. In the future, they can bring their parents from the mortal world to learn slowly in the world of immortality. Xia Shumian can take advantage of the time difference in Qingmian Space to concentrate on practicing and learn various skills. The time outside should be different from the time in the space. In addition, for other cultivation resources, you still have to rely on yourself to work hard for other training resources. The golden finger of Qingmian Space is a bit wide, so it seems that you don't have to work hard to fight for it, you have everything, the kind of win-win situation

To be honest, I can read it, but any person or object is too flashy [laughs awkwardly], just read ten words out of 100! 😂