A Mortal Girl Cultivates Immortality and Picks up the Wooden Bead Space at the Beginning

Those dialogues about acting coquettishly and acting like children are a bit awkward, and the proportion can be reduced a little, but the part about cultivating immortality is not bad. Again, I choose to read the novel about cultivating immortality just to see that the heroine successfully cultivates the great path and achieves immortality. If you want to watch conspiracy, conspiracy or emotional drama, I have my own arrangements.

It's pretty good. The heroine is also cautious. There is no Virgin behavior in more than sixty chapters. The author will keep up the good work and update more (I hope they don't write anything with cp, otherwise I won't be able to bear it.

Overall it's pretty good, at least there's no female competition, no heartthrob control group, there's no plot in the book, there's no vicious characters, there aren't that many people looking for trouble, it's all robbing by rogue cultivators, the rest of the heroines are having a smooth life, but it just feels a little too smooth [face covering] I've never been injured, drawn talismans to make alchemy, and the array judge learned it right away. She was only 8 years old the first time I went out to experience it, and no one took me with me, does she know the way? [Face covering] The second time I went out to experience it alone, it was still 5 I just came back in 2018. His senior brother said he protected her so well that I just wanted to laugh [laughing and crying] I have only been in the world of immortality for 8 years in total, and it has been five or six years since I went out to practice. Cultivation may be relatively boring. After watching it, I felt that the plot was a bit too bland, that is, the heroine's parents were very good after receiving the world of immortality. I felt that there were too many inner thoughts in it. I skipped through the rest of the book. I felt that there were more stories about other people, and the heroine's cultivation level was constantly improving [laughing and crying] Overall, it was good

The author's writing style is good, and the conception is also very good. There are few plots, intrigues, and intrigues in the article. Everyone devotes themselves to cultivation and achieves the great road together. I really like this kind of article. However, it can be seen that the author likes to use words such as deep knowledge, deep understanding, and far beyond. I hope the author can reduce the number of uses or replace them with other words and sentences in the future. Moreover, some of the descriptions in the article are too detailed and wordy, making it tiring to read for a long time. For example, when praising the heroine, when the heroine is setting up formations and casting spells, there will be many descriptions and praises of the heroine's super talent. After reading too much, it feels a bit vain. Overall, it's quite good-looking, good luck to the author!

It's good to read, but don't stop updating it. If you do, you can only read other novels. You will forget the previous ones in a few days.

Everything written by this author is beautiful! All five-star reviews! Nice

I think it's okay. The author didn't handle some small details well, which sometimes causes misunderstandings among readers. People who are impatient may not be able to read it. Overall, it's okay. It's just that I prefer the genius flow, and I don't like some unnecessary hiding, such as my own space. I definitely have to hide it, but I think it is necessary to slightly highlight my talents within a controllable range. Maybe I don't like the mouth-mouthed protagonist. Well, I hope this book can find readers who like it more.

The heroine got so much from the Wood Spirit Bead!

To be honest, I can read it, but any person or object is too flashy [laughs awkwardly], just read ten words out of 100! [Laughing and crying]

I hope that Xia Shuhe and Xia Shumian, brother and sister, will work together in the world of immortality, not rejecting hardships, overcoming difficulties, practicing hard, learning more skills, reaching a higher realm, and ascending to the immortal world and the divine world. In the future, they can bring their parents from the mortal world to learn slowly in the world of immortality. Xia Shumian can take advantage of the time difference in Qingmian Space to concentrate on practicing and learn various skills. The time outside should be different from the time in the space. In addition, for other cultivation resources, you still have to rely on yourself to work hard for other training resources. The golden finger of Qingmian Space is a bit wide, so it seems that you don't have to work hard to fight for it, you have everything, the kind of win-win situation

It's very good to watch. I'm really looking forward to the scene where the whole family is practicing. I saw it right away. I was so excited [blowing kisses] that I don't have to be separated from my family [shy]. The heroine's golden finger is very open.

The story is very good. There are no messy relatives or anything like that. It's very comfortable.

7.7 Points is too low, the lowest it can be rated is 9.3 Points! Thank you for your hard work, the writing is very good! Come on! 👍👍👍👏👏👏✊✊✊

It looks good, it would be great if it was finished

This novel is quite interesting and I recommend it to everyone to give it a try.

I like the character of the heroine very much. She is affectionate, righteous and kind, but not like the Holy Mother. She doesn't have the kind of jealous white lotus that makes her evil. I also like the atmosphere of the sect and the geniuses of the same class.

It turns out that the heroine should be the same person. Maybe it was some great reincarnated god who practiced cultivating his mind and nature. Opportunity, luck, understanding, and endurance are also a kind of strength.

The writing is pretty good, very good

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

I like it very much, it looks good.

Very beautiful, very beautiful.

This book is quite nice.

It's quite good-looking. It can be seen that the author loves his heroine very much. There are no brainless villains or pretentiousness. You can read it in Shuhuang.

So well written! Thank you to the scammer for your hard work!

Not bad, I personally think it looks good (♥∀♥), worth a look

Big cheers for the author!

Come on come on come on come on

I like it very much, it sounds good, and I give you a good review. [Love][Love][Love][Like][Like][Like]

I don't think there's a male protagonist, but it's okay. It's not the best. It's pretty good.

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