What Are You Two Doing? I'm Your Elder, You Know

Excellent Liu Bei's article, not bad, you have to read it in ten chapters, the key is not obtrusive, the interaction is also good, it is worth reading [smile]

The five stars are not just a count, but the sigh in my heart when I turned the last page. The pages of the book are yellowing like autumn leaves🍂, but the words are like spring water flowing over the embankment. Halfway through reading, the rain stopped outside the window, and the world suddenly became quiet. It turns out that good stories are the magic that slows down time. Xiao Tianwen looks okay

The writing is fine, but the author should not raise his head when he has a nosebleed. Please change it. In Chapter 27, you should not raise your head when you have a nosebleed. Lowering your head is not too correct, but you can judge that the blood flow rate is less harmful than raising your head. The correct method is to keep your head straight, press, apply ice, and apply ice for three to five minutes to stop the bleeding. If you raise your head, if the blood flows back to the throat, it may irritate the stomach and cause suffocation in the trachea.

It's a good read for the senses. I hope Chen Ruo's line won't be a sloppy and regrettable debut. [Thinking] If I didn't write this kind of regret with top-notch writing, I might be scolded by readers. [Holds face] I always feel like I might not be able to stop it by the time I do it. [Exploration] I read some of the author's replies. The author wanted to write a plot like Chen Hansheng's. When they first watched "I Really Didn't Want to Be Reborn", it was difficult for Xiao Rongyu and Shen Youchu to reconcile. They wanted to pull out the bad author and beat him up [angry]. The official struggle in Wanquan County was actually quite interesting [face covering]. However, it was quite uncomfortable to watch the discovery of feelings and begging for forgiveness. As I said above, writing this kind of be literature will either make you famous through the ages, or be infamy forever. (This ending is pretty good)

A great book, with two female protagonists, the male protagonist is upright, and the female partner is a passerby and a clown [laughing][laughing]

There is no pulling, the writing is quite delicate, and it is worth reading.

Why do I change my name all day long and I can't recognize it anymore...

When will the younger sister come online, or is she really raising her as a younger sister? When will the male protagonist's younger sister come online?

Overall, there isn't much of a problem, but the frequency with which the male protagonist goes to inspect the female protagonist's school is a bit too high.

It's okay. I haven't seen Goldfinger. I don't know how many female protagonists there are. I have only accepted one now. However, if there is no Goldfinger in this kind of officialdom novel, writing too many female protagonists will give the opponent an advantage.