Mo Yi's Past

Please give your support to the newbies! இдஇ (Looking at the flow of books with trembling eyes)… First of all, the author made this book short, but each chapter has a lot of words. Because I don't have enough time to write, and I'm in a hurry. (My parents don't support it. It's a pity that I'm in my second year of junior high school...) However, I believe that as long as I write seriously, there will always be a novel that can be published. Mo Yi's Past is not a good book, but Chen Mo is a microcosm of the author's time in school... Many of the plots in it are based on his own personal experiences. For example, getting tuberculosis, being bullied, or... Secretly having a crush on some people. I don't have a brother, I'm a girl. However, in their imagination, they became a couple who couldn't reconcile each other. Dear book friends, every character in this book has a very distinct personality. You will definitely have some feelings after reading it! I can only pursue my own novel dryly 0^0... After all, my writing style is still immature and needs to be improved! I hope someone can give me more encouragement and support (I look forward to it with all my heart...) This is my first time writing a sadistic novel, and it has two male protagonists. Please encourage me! [Spray the tonic around, please...] [Don't abuse it, it may be a little confusing and funny] Writing novels is just a hobby when I relax from my studies. It is written for fun. Naturally, it cannot be compared with the works written by high-quality writers.•͈ ₃ •͈ I want my carefully written story to be seen by more people, please book shelf + comment [book review plus paragraph comment], I have seen your support ~ (I will reply when I see it, but the semester is about to start, and the student party will withdraw from the network, so I cannot reply in time. I hope everyone can understand me. ₍˄ ₗ ̫ ₗ ˄₎◞ ̑̑) We strive to comment and add more to the bookshelf. I love you all⌯>◡❛⌯ಣI look forward to the book becoming a hit, and hope to see considerable data when I return next time! (Everyone should be friendly and happy in the comment area!) Regardless of whether the book reviews are good or bad, having high-scoring book reviews is the greatest encouragement to me. Bad reviews are okay, and I will accept your criticism of me. In the future, I will write better works! In fact, to be honest, the cruel ending actually fulfilled momoyyi and the others. Because last time a reader said that if you forgive Yiyi so easily, it would be unfair to us. I guess most readers think so too. (Because of silent wishful thinking and secret love ꒦ິ^꒦ິ) Indeed, it is indeed unfair that he has gone through so much, whether it is illness or physical and mental torture. In our family, Mo Mo also has a masochistic constitution and self-abuse. To normal people, he is in love, but... This can be considered infatuation. Going in both directions and wishful thinking are two different things, but they are both emotions. ——But in general, the last thing we want is to be with his brother, because he has fantasized about it countless times for eight years, and his obsession is too deep, and he will definitely not be reconciled... Therefore, the author will help him in the extra chapter~ [Please help them both] If you feel uncomfortable, you can write a little side story to talk about Jiang Yi, but don't scold him too harshly. Momo will be sad because he defends his brother~ (You can also write a little side story, it can be sweet or cruel. I wish you all have fun in the comment area!) Okay, the above is what the author said. It is his own reflection and personal opinion. Pay attention and pay attention again haha ​​ᝯ◂ ˙Ⱉ˙ ▾ಎ↝Everyone should be friendly to each other in the comment area and speak actively!

I've read almost half of this book. Overall, it's really good. I'd like to give it five stars for encouragement. The young author's language is fluent and the plots are not confusing. Some plots are quite innovative. Worth encouraging! Although this article is not as cruel as expected, for this young author, it should be his best effort. Finally, let me say this: One of the places that impressed me the most was the chapter where Chen Mobaozi was about to die of illness. My heart was still very heavy... So I wish this little author good luck with this book! I have finished reading this book. I read it while listening, word for word, so it is relatively slow. I saw a lot of details. Overall it's really good and worth a visit. This book cannot be called sadistic, but there is always a slight sense of suffocation, because I personally feel that the author has written many small details of life, and the author is very careful. There are also life, separation and death between relatives. It can't be called that kind of violence... However, for those friends who are low on tears, you should find several abuse points. You may get tears in your eyes. Well, personal opinion. I really like the character Chen Mo. Although he is too humble, I really feel sorry for him [I almost cry], yes, because my tear point is a little low...

Now I've seen the extra and finished reading the main text. To be honest, the sense of immersion in the diary style is really strong, and the author has established the personality of each character, and the image of each character is quite distinct. In fact, for the character Chen Mo, from my personal point of view, his efforts were rewarded in the end, but it was a belated reward after his death. Because, if you look carefully, he still can't let go... I think the most distinctive feature of this article is that the male protagonist Chen Mo, after experiencing life and death, the death of relatives, and being bruised and bruised, finally chose to believe in his brother. Although it is in the extra story of the parallel world. It feels like everyone in it has regrets, but they ended up with peace in the end, although there were also sad endings. However, it's not bad. Overall, it's not just a word count, both protagonists have their own souls. The writing style of the young author is quite mature.

A bit of a knife. It's okay, overall, it can't be tortured to the point of crying. Where there are tears, it needs to be savored slowly. Give it four stars... The closer you get to the back, the more sadistic it becomes, that faint feeling of sadism. Friends who read books at a fast pace may not understand it. The characters' personalities are quite distinct, and I feel that Chen Mo is quite pitiful🥹, a pitiful child. It's difficult to explain intentionally, but there are also sweet parts in the extras. Generally speaking, I didn't feel bad after watching the sweet extras. But I always felt depressed... Maybe because I read the second volume, because the second volume has a sad ending. ... I can only say that it's not bad. After all, this young author is only so old... Looking at the number of students, there are quite a lot of them, so give me some encouragement.

Using a diary to tear open the folds of love and pain, Chen Mo's love that was so humble to the dust finally came to an end, and Jiang Yi's belated regret was gnawing at the bones. The main text is cruel to the point of suffocation, but the extra chapter uses reincarnation and daily life to mend regrets. The sweetness and cruelty are intertwined, and it expresses the heaviness of "you only know how to cherish when you lose it". It is a regretful work with great potential.

The writing is very good, but each section is a bit long. But it was really sad... Some chapters really made me cry. The author must have experienced it personally, right? 🤔

I took a look, it's really cruel