Xuanhuan: Senior, Stop Controlling Me Already!

Five-star encouragement. The game part of this book is the most touching among the books of this type. The conclusion of the prologue is particularly artistic, and the setting of the male protagonist is also quite good. Compared with the workplace social beasts in other books, the outdated professional player is obviously more reasonable. It can also avoid too much description of reality in the early stage. At the same time, it has the setting of completing the realistic simulation to activate the talent skills, but the process is simplified. Compared with some articles that give pills or describe a lot of realistic exercises, it is a summary optimization. However, I feel that the heroine's large amount of complaints is a flaw. If you want to set up a heroine setting, you can write about the heroine's actions when the player is offline. When the player is playing, the heroine's inner drama can be occasionally included as a spice. Too much will feel weird.

The content of the description is substantial. It is neither superficial nor a running account. It is just that some places, such as the protagonist's previous experiences, are a bit vague. However, the protagonist's current performance is not that kind of fool, which is already very good.

The subject matter is novel, the writing is smooth, and the plot is exciting and fascinating! It's a pity that the male and female protagonists haven't interacted yet. The most important thing is that the author must stick to the single-player mode and never expand the worldview into an online mode to allow other people in the real world to participate. In this way, the uniqueness of the protagonist and heroine will be lost!

Recently, I have read quite a few fairy tales. They are more imaginative than those traditional novels and have many more jokes. The author should be a classic ldx. I also hope that the author can write more interesting stories. After the praise, I will comment on the shortcomings. To be honest, I think it is a bit like AI, but this is harmless.

Yes, but there are some bugs in saving and loading files. Every time I play a mini-game, I have to load files a hundred times. That means there is no limit to loading files a hundred times. Another stand-alone game has the feeling of not having a pause button. If the heroine wants to communicate, she can't write a diary message without being manipulated? The story is quite in line with the mentality of test players.

Give me some support, so far so good

It feels like a fire, without any poisonous points

I have read many books. This book is very interesting. I wanted to see a serious and orthodox story of growth-oriented immortality, but it was inexplicably mixed with other things. Chapters 68 and 69 are not well written.

Not bad, not bad, much better looking than other similar ones [full] [full] [full]

After seeing the latest part, I feel it's okay. I hope the author can continue writing [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]