Operation Delta: You Started It

Yes, I finally found a Delta fan that is not a game live broadcast, or rather a game that comes to reality in the national destiny survival game. The only pity is that I prefer pure force and am not used to reading this kind of literature about being a drone pilot.

I have read Chapter 58 so far, and I don't dare to read on, because when I look at the table of contents, there are only forty chapters left. Please read it again, and let me talk about my current feelings. As an ordinary person with limited culture, my understanding of firearms is usually through non-military fans of games. The article is filled with a large number of firearm models, vehicle models, and some professional terminology knowledge. In my opinion, it is like a bible. I can't understand it, but I am shocked. I think the creation of the protagonist is very successful. The protagonist is not Long Aotian. The so-called cheats are not particularly brainless at present, but provide a little help at critical times. The protagonist is smart, emotional and very charming. The plot is very hard-core and real. After all, it is not a mindless novel, at least not for now. The character creation in the article made me feel that these characters are flesh and blood, not just tools to promote the plot. The part where Lina performed surgery on the members of the Black Fox Team touched me deeply. She is the best doctor. As for the poisonous point, when being surrounded and killed, the protagonist revealed his identity as a time traveler to Mai Xiaowen. Some people may think that is a poisonous point, but in my opinion, this plot made me feel that the protagonist is a living person. In the face of death, no one can always remain calm. He will also be afraid of death. As he said, it is not his war.

It's really good-looking, much better than Tomato's other deltas [cool], especially much better than the National Games and Parallel World live broadcasts [face covering]

Some people say that Chapter 17 of Moral Kidnapping is not well written. But he explained this again in chapter 18. You can take a look at the back, the writing at the back is really good. There is quite a lot of professional knowledge. It can be seen that the author really paid attention to it.

Although this third-rate title and this stupid pig cover caused me to miss this book many times, it is still a good book, and Chinese people do not lie to Chinese people. It fits the background of the game plot (I am not a military fan, but the author Balabala has written a lot, and it looks very powerful). The author updates a lot very quickly, and the quality is also online. But what worries me is that this game has only been out for a year, and the plot and content planned by the game are conflicting and imperfect. In the later stages, the plot will most likely have to be edited or directly treated as a novella and ended as soon as possible. (There is nothing wrong with this. It is very important for a first novel to have a good reputation. For a reader, there is no need to forcefully write a complete work to continue its life.) My personal suggestion is that you can write the plot based on the operators, skins, and benchmark actions in the game. For example, After Lace completely takes over the dam, Hudson sells inferior Mandel bricks on the private estate and attempts to take over Space City. In this way, there are 10 pounds of rose red waves Landon Harrison and gti mole tidal prison operation black tide and cheerleader, The space base's Operation Brave will be connected with the plot of Dragon's new red skin. The Dam Breaker is tied into Saving Uluru (the previous story event). Finally, it ends with the battle between GTI and Huck after five or ten years in the game plot (it is a big battlefield, which fits the plot, and everything that needs to be written has been written) All in all, this is a good work, I'm looking forward to it

It's okay, but it's a little tricky in the early stages. Maybe the author took it for granted when he was imagining it, resulting in a less immersive sense of plot. But it gets better later on, whether it's the logical self-consistency, the characterization of the characters, or the author's description of military knowledge, they all attracted me. Not to mention occasionally giving out benefits to satisfy readers' fantasies about game characters. In short, the writing is quite fulfilling. And with this update efficiency, I just pretended that I didn't see some of the little poisonous points in the early stage [laughing evilly] Come on, author!

I personally think there is no problem with the rhythm control. It takes time to defeat monsters and upgrade. The content is serious, lively and lively. It is considered an excellent work in Delta fan fiction. It makes up for the problem of Veyron's physical injury. I won't comment on the emotional line because I haven't talked about it. The impression is acceptable and there are a lot of updates. Good luck to the author.

I have read so many Delta fanfics, but this one is the one that suits me. The data is accurate, the descriptions are delicate, and the emotional lines are clear. Although there are multiple female protagonists, it does not give people the feeling of a stallion. Come on, please read more! ! [Sinister smile]

I hope that the author can let the male protagonist provide some theoretical and ideological guidance to Said in this book, so that Said's character can be sublimated. Whether he joins the Communist Party or the commune in the future, he can make Said, the son of Orion, transform from a local warlord who only vaguely protects Asara into a real fighter with clear goals and practical ideological and philosophical guidance. Regardless of whether Said can successfully eliminate outsiders and lead Asara to independence in the future, at least Lao Sai has worked hard and fought hard. [Sending Hearts]

Delta +1 star Not a brainless cool article +1 star +1 star for opening a harem and catering to repressed groups The strategy complies with the process of giving wood in every corner +1 star Because +1 star, so +1 star

It's not a Delta formula. The atmosphere of iron and blood and the cruelty of the battlefield are very gripping and immersive. As for opening a harem, I personally think it's harmless, but others have different opinions. Worth a five star.

The writing is good, but the front part is a little slow, and the large description inserted in the middle is not in-depth enough (this may also be the reason why I watched Red Magic Melon Ge Lao A in advance). After all, the text is not as intuitive as the video, but overall it is good.

Come on, it's good. Chapter 11 is a bit awkward and I can't read it. I wish you better and better. (The above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize me, I'm a glass-hearted person) [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Stare ]

It's very smooth and really beautiful. It's the best book I've read so far on Delta (✪▽✪). I suggest the author change the cover to attract people. Otherwise, the popularity will be too low. More chapters would be better. I have a plan, how about the protagonist changes his code name to Lagus? [Think]

The quality of the book is very high, the data is rigorous, and the writing is not bad. I feel that it should be at least 8.5~9 Points in quality. The pace is a little slow but the details are very comprehensive. Each round of rhythm is very comfortable to read. Write a review to support it [Note]

Some of the author's tactical phrases are quite good. This is the first time I have read the author's book and been able to write these things. The author has done a very in-depth study of the background story of Delta, but to prevent you from being arrogant, I started with a four-point score. However, among Delta fan fiction, this one is one that I personally think stands out.

The writing is very detailed, the details of the war are presented very comprehensively, the plot is very compact, and it is updated quickly. It is a rare good article.

It's pretty good, but it's a pity that it's not popular and I can't recommend it. I saw it from the update page of another book. Come on, author, it would be a pity if it was discontinued. Alas

Delta is the first of its kind, no other Only delta, um, versus The writing style in the later three or four volumes is a bit weak.

It looks good and suits my taste. The author begs you not to stop updating [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's beautiful❥(^_-), I'm really looking forward to the follow-up (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The tactical explanations and weapon introductions are very detailed, and the relationship between the characters is also good ٩(๑^o^๑)۶[Please update]

It's really good [Admiration] I like this kind of hard-core novel with a female operator attached to it [laughing]

It's pretty good, except for the first few chapters. One thing is that there is actually no need to say that Zoya is the doctor's ex-girlfriend. She will be a bit poisonous and can be changed.

The writing is very good, very detailed and accurate.

Very good fan, let me use the top secret specialization shield to fly a few more escorts

The best among fairy products, I will do anything if it is updated Ounegai, Wadaxi~

The absolute first in the delta It also describes the cruelty of modern war There is absolutely no moisture in this five-star

It's different from many delta books I've read before, and it's quite realistic. Except for the harem part, which I really can't say much about, I think the others are pretty good.

It's good to read, but there's a little too much military introduction, and it's a bit unfriendly to readers. I just don't know why the rating isn't high.

Don't say anything else. It's much better than the others. Come on, author.