Siheyuan: I Snatched Xiaoe, and She Said I'm No Good

After reading 150 chapters, I can only say that it is definitely more than 5 points. I don't know why the score is so low. Even some professional details are a bit verbose, but both the overall and the details are perfect. The characters are vividly portrayed, the plot development is reasonable, the cool points are well-founded, and the golden finger is hidden... To be honest, the author's writing style is more than enough to write an unsystematic time travel novel, which is really good.

When it comes to Qin Huairu asking Silly Zhu to get a lunch box, I don't think we need to spend too much time describing it in detail. A brief summary is enough. Especially the character of Silly Zhu, his performance in this plot is really disappointing - he is all about other people, but not his own sister He Yuyu. Even though Yu Yu had already made it clear that he was hungry and showed that he didn't want him to take away the meal, he still insisted on giving the lunch box to Qin Huairu. This is how it is handled both in the play and in the original work, but as a reader it is really disturbing and uncomfortable when watching it. I hope the author can simplify the following paragraphs as much as possible so as to avoid poking the readers' minds less. The overall book is still very interesting, and I sincerely hope that the author can make more updates and keep writing steadily, come on!

It's relatively thin, but how can I put it? For some Tomato readers, they don't have much patience to persist in reading for a long time. It lacks some excitement and excitement, but the article is really good and worth reading. If you think you have insights, please go elsewhere and speak alone. My comments will not prevent everyone from swiping away from the screen and moving their fingers. I don't know how long ago this book was published. I almost forgot about it.

Good looking, logical, invincible, must support My family looks great (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡❤️❤️ Invincible recommendation. This is really beautiful. (=¯ω¯=)

The jujube tree in the courtyard somehow produced a few fruits this year. I picked it and tasted it. It was slightly bitter, which was not good. But when I think of you in my dream, the sourness in my mouth becomes a little sweeter. In my spare time, I turned to look out the window. There is summer, but it is not just summer. There is chaos and idleness, There is splendor and splendor that cannot be concealed by spring flowers and autumn moon. There are green locust trees and tall willows swallowing new cicadas, and the wind blows into the strings; There is gauze kitchen rattan mat. There are pomegranate flowers ready to burn; There were sparse stars falling on the painted eaves last night, and the jade lady was fanning her hair lightly; There are also birds that come and go like swallows in front of the hall, flying in the clouds. The room was quite stuffy, and suddenly I felt inspired. Then he picked up the pen that had not been wet for a long time. I always feel like I should write something, but I don't know where to start. Maybe it's probably because this day has made people feel depressed. Until the end, think twice, I crookedly wrote down the next "front row" and then gave it up.

I think the writing is quite good, and I think the score should not be low. After looking at the comment section, I think there may be a problem with the title and content not matching this aspect. I originally came up with the title, but I forgot the title as I read it. The title was a harem article, but it might actually be a career article. I don't understand those professional things, but he seemed quite professional. I didn't care about it, maybe because everyone has their own preferences for carrots and cabbages. When I saw the score was so low, I quickly gave it a score, fearing that the author would spoil it and stop writing. I'm short of books now, so I found this very interesting. I hope the author will not give up

It is different from the regular courtyard houses. The content is very professional and it seems to have a different feel. It's just that the heroine has too few roles, only the beginning

To be honest, many people can't eat fine chaff, so you can't say that. This article is very well written, thoughtful throughout, and can withstand scrutiny. Many people seem to be too boring and not happy, but this article is not a refreshing article in the first place. This article is more like a slowly unfolding picture scroll, without rich colors and gorgeous pictures. But every stroke is as if it were made by nature. Those who like it will regard it as a treasure, while those who don't like it will regard it as a child's graffiti. If you are patient and just want to read a novel quietly, I highly recommend this novel. If you just want to read the life of the Dragon King and read cool articles, then there is no need to come in.

Hiss~ Originally, I had finished chasing the latest chapter and quit. When I was reading other novels, I suddenly realized that there were more than 300 chapters. A month had not passed yet? [Shocked]🙀Isn't the progress of this plot a bit slow? [What]

Haha, the reader hastened to leave as he ran towards his sister and harem. I guess it was only available in a later period. The author hasn't updated it to this point yet. The early stage is purely professional writing, very beautiful.