The Frost Pillar in Demon Slayer Is Being Adorable Again

The paragraphs are extremely long and messy, the battle paragraphs are like reporting anecdotes, and the characters are a little OOC. Maybe the author wants to express a very warm content, but it is a bit artificial. At the same time, the main content is almost the same as another book I have read. I won't comment too much. One star is the bottom line. If you don't like it, the author is welcome to reply (I am very serious)

The writing is very good, no OOC, no regrets, and the writing style is also very beautiful. Qiangyi CP is very enjoyable, but the descriptions of other columns are a bit lacking (such as Xiao Ren 😢 😢 😢), but overall the writing is very good. The author keeps up the good work [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

The article written by the teacher is very good, very good. I think it is really good for a novice author to write such a good article. I think the overall style of this article is one that leans toward everyday warmth, and I think it's true. Very nice, this, this is I really like this

I really like the author's wife. Can I marry you?

When I first saw the introduction of the book, I thought it was very exciting, so I read it. However, there is a problem with the plot of Infinite City in the teacher's article. It is known that Infinite City was underground when Muichiro died in the battle, and it should not be hidden. In addition, Infinite City is mysterious, how could it be possible to stand there and wait for it to be hidden? Infinite City is not hidden. After killing a 12 Onitsuki, you should want to kill demons regardless of whether your teammates are dead or not. It can be seen from the paragraph of the original Hu Die Ninja that everyone is stunned for a moment before continuing to kill demons. You have to find Wu Pei's lair in the early stage and eliminate Wu Pei. After being stunned for a minute, the battle situation will be different. I don't understand this. To sum up, I think it's great for a newbie, teacher, but my suggestion is that if you want to open the next book, I suggest that you revise the original work before opening it.

The writing is okay, but I feel that there are too many sub-CP plots, and the progress of the main CP is very slow. I can't see the emotional line of the protagonist. Some sub-CP plots can be appropriately reduced. After all, this story revolves around Moo Yang and Muichiro. It can't overwhelm the protagonist, but the writing style is okay.

The author writes beautifully

Ichiro is one of those people who doesn't seek abuse. He can save people in the front, but when he wants to save people later, he has to insert a mission.

It makes me heartbroken. I don't understand why I joined the Demon Slayer Corps so early. I feel that the Demon Slayer Corps is here to exploit people. It's all because of the bad missions of the Demon Slayer Corps, otherwise his brother wouldn't have died. This shows that I have a big head

Great writing, great