The Low-Key Fool of Hogwarts

. It's okay, but it's better not to write any more awkward emotional scenes without a female protagonist.

Since it is a potion synthesized in the Harry Potter world, why does the protagonist still play it?

I'll give you four stars for encouragement, and I'll put one star in the meteor shower. It looks much more comfortable after removing the emotional scenes. I don't like to watch mysteries and I haven't watched them, but if I put this setting in HP, it feels okay, as long as I don't promote the rules of mystery in HP. However, according to my experience in reading online articles, it may be more difficult for you to write later. Most Tomato fandoms can only advance to the end of the competition. If there is no change, you may also end in the competition. The subsequent plot has no conflicts and consistent bosses that can be used to advance. It is recommended to slow down the pace appropriately. I very much hope to see a book that can successfully graduate from Hogwarts and join the work. It can not interfere too much with the original plot, and then participate in the final battle a year after graduation. According to the sequence set in your article, you can try to switch from participation to observation. Regarding the third promotion sequence, you can also refer to the setting of Huo Yi in the game, which should be a good breakthrough. After all, the era of the Big Four has been badly written, and Rowling's own settings for the era of the Big Four are not complete enough. Huo Yi can also substitute magical animals later. Since Dumbledore in the original text does not reveal the details of his acquaintance with the protagonist, then if you want to write like this, you can start with Grindelwald, which does not involve Dumbledore, and you can have a brief contact.

It's very good-looking, with a single female protagonist, and she doesn't overwhelm her fighting skills. I wonder why some people always talk about irrelevant issues and criticize her without writing a better one. She even glorifies the name Shen Nong. If she's good, she's just average. If she's ordinary, she'd say she's a very poisonous person, right? Look. If you don't go down, you can just go on your own. Why do you have to force me to do it? Thank you for testing the poison and sitting at the same table. Believe whatever others say, and you don't know if they are exaggerated. The verification period and recommendation period should not be changed casually. It will affect the platform push. It will take a while for the data to be stable.

It's really well written, and the integration of Lord of Mysteries and Harry Potter system is very good and exciting. Without the emotional line, it looks even more beautiful, haha. Top

The rating of this book should not be so low. It is completely written by the author seriously, and it is completely different from those cookie-cutter AI articles.

It would be perfect if the heroine had less scenes later on. The length itself is not very long, just over forty chapters. Currently, the heroine's total scenes are almost three chapters.

Praise the fool A fool who does not belong to this era The mysterious master above the gray fog The King of Yellow and Black who controls good luck

It's very interesting and worth watching. I'm going too far with the rating, 🤦

To be honest, the portraits of Gryffindor and Slytherin were just left alone? I was still thinking about moving to the principal's office.