Game Invasion: the Explosion Rate at the Beginning Is 100%!

Very well written. 1. Advantages: There is no beginning where the younger sister is seriously ill or a relative is seriously ill, and there are no links such as school beauties. 2. The overall style is step-by-step, not invincible, but changes from weak to strong, and the composition is measured. 3. The protagonist and supporting characters have distinct personalities and their own characteristics. Disadvantages: There are a lot of water characters in the later stages, and the live broadcast scenes could be slightly less, which will affect the quality of the novel. Especially mindless barrages. Be cautious in emotional scenes and avoid licking the dog. It's better to have interests tied up and support each other. Avoid vases. Novel style: live broadcast + national destiny + lord.

Nice! ! ! First of all, the most comfortable thing is that there is no classic plot, and there are no inexplicable descriptions of women. The descriptions of battles are also pretty good. At least I, who usually likes to skip it, am watching it [Sending Hearts] It's the first time I've seen this kind of lord story with this kind of beginning (meaning the territory is not directly established). Of course, it may be because I don't read this kind of stories very often, but I really think the plot is handled well [shy]

It is not easy for the author to write a novel, so I gave him encouragement and good reviews. I persisted in reading it for several days, but it really didn't work anymore. The female assassin is always delicate and cold, erratic, and has an inexplicable smile. She also said that she has not smiled for a long time. The female lord has a breathtaking figure, a bumpy body, and a stunning face. I have to describe it every time I mention it. I am tired... But the article is very well written, the content is novel, and it is very good. It is my problem that I can't read it. This is a very high-quality article, thank you [laughs]

The writing is very good, and each character is well portrayed. I read it a little too early. . .

I really like this book. The author's writing is solid, the plot rhythm is comfortable, the combat power is not broken from the beginning to the end, the logic is rigorous and does not contradict itself, the story is very attractive, I can't stop at all, it is a pity that I have to catch up on more chapters.

The writing is good. Although there are some complaints about the actual writing, the protagonist has a brain and dares to take risks in the real world. There are no dangers for newcomers. How can you grow without taking risks? But betting on dogs will lead to nothing in the end. The word count is currently small, so it doesn't matter. I think I won't continue to win.

It's pretty good. The protagonist's IQ is above the mark, and helping the country is not in vain. I read a novel this morning, and it also cooperated with the country. As a result, the protagonist was exhausted, and he kept helping the country, and moved wherever there was trouble.

Very good looking, very good looking story about national fortune, survival and lords. Follow for more updates.

The writing is very good, and the rhythm in the early stages makes people want to put it down. I hope there will be this kind of quality in the future! (This is a treasured article, if it's not good enough, don't leave it unfinished!)

It's pretty good. There's no all-in-one plot, and the whole story is smoother.

I finished reading it in one day. It's pretty good so far. The pace is a bit fast. You can read it as a fun read after you get through the early dull period. You can choose it to pass the time when you're bored. The disadvantage is that there are too many descriptions of digitized places, but it does not affect reading.

Less nonsense, more troops stationed, increase the strength to pretend to be a wave. Players should try not to add more because it will be troublesome to draw more characters and worry about collapse. Write more NPCs, the natives who will be more cooperative with you. Qin Ruishi. It would be better if more historically famous troops can be recruited in the follow-up. And if the Nightmare Tide has that kind of history, If General Shi kills him, he will get the kind of soul-ball that inherits him (for example, the general/strategist randomly gets a part of him or inherits it perfectly). Anyway, writing must be more enjoyable, otherwise the number of readers will not increase. Come on, author, it would be better if those in the navy can have them (I don't know if you have any suggestions at the moment)

It's very nice. I gave the protagonist a gold finger, but it's not particularly big. Although some readers think that the 30-day cooldown for 100% guaranteed drops is too long, which leads to the protagonist not developing so fast, but I think it's good now. The protagonist's development has been very fast. It has only been a few months since entering the world and it has developed to its current scale. There are also those hero templates and two high-level wonders, which have been opened a lot. It's a big golden finger. You don't have to get all the good things at once. There has to be a process to make it interesting. If you want to read a cool article, just read it. There is no need to read bad reviews or anything like that. Although the descriptions in some places are repeated, I think the author has written the plot very well. I look forward to the author's next story [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

[Like] Overall, it's pretty good, better than most survival stories about national destiny. 1. The world rules and the special status of the lords designed by the author are quite interesting. In the later period, the status of the protagonist naturally improved, which is more natural. 2. However, the author's narration is too slow! ! Too slow! ! Readers have been waiting for you to build the Great Wall, but it turns out that it's been a long time and you can't even see the shadow of the Great Wall. It's really annoying. The development of the main character Goldfinger was also restricted. I couldn't read this book for a month or two because it was too stressful. [Laughing and crying] This book doesn't feel like a good read. The biggest problem with this book is that it is too detailed and wordy. The progress of the plot is unimaginably slow. Watching the protagonist make progress is like passing the day, and it is boring to watch the foreshadowing and foreshadowing. The protagonist's golden finger only takes 30 days to get something. In the end, there is only a small progress, which has already flattened the readers' expectations into dust.

After reading it in one go, I feel that the author wanted to write a lot and integrated a lot of things, but the writing is also good. If you pay more attention to every detail, maybe it will be the next masterpiece in my opinion. It also depends on the subsequent author's performance.

The writing is good, I have collected it, the writing style is more European and American, and the balance of talents is just right. I look forward to the follow-up development and hope that it will not cause any surprises. A common problem among new authors Give some suggestions The description is a bit too much, and some of it can be mentioned in just a few words. Everything can be said without saying anything, especially Shadow Snake. Regardless of whether she is the heroine or not, the first description can be more detailed, and the rest can be brushed off in one stroke. Too much detail will make people upset. For example, "There was a new wound on her left shoulder. It was scratched by the bone blade of a dying skeleton when she finally put the knife away. The blood soaked the leather armor, but there was no expression of pain on her face." It can be written as "Although her face is expressionless, there is a wound on her left shoulder, which is deep enough to see the bone, and the blood is soaked in the leather armor. It was accidentally scratched by the skeleton soldier who was struggling to death when she was retracting her sword in the battle." Or "Beside her expressionless face, there was a wound on her left shoulder with bones visible and blood soaked in the leather armor. ..." And "There was a very faint but extremely real emotion in those cold eyes at the moment. She didn't speak, just looked at him quietly for two seconds. Then, she nodded slightly, turned around and disappeared into the night." This kind of thing should be simplified when you have described her character at length before. "With her cold eyes with a touch of warmth, she stood in the dark and looked at him quietly for two seconds, and then disappeared into the boundless night." And "Shadow Snake raised his eyes and looked at him. There was a very faint but extremely real warmth in those cold eyes at this moment. She slightly curved the corners of her mouth, a very faint, almost imperceptible smile. "This sentence will basically come up when she talks. How much do you like this sentence? It is recommended to abbreviate it. Sometimes you can even omit it. You know she likes him. There is no need to write it repeatedly." Shadow Snake said. This is my opinion on these recent pictures and some small suggestions. Please correct me if you think it doesn't work.

It's okay, I can watch it, but there are several beautiful women around the protagonist who like the protagonist. It feels like there are many female protagonists. . . .

The plot is smooth and reasonable, I like it very much,

The content of this subject matter is really good, I really like it, but the author's writing style shows that it is still a new work. Many of the emotional descriptions and dialogues in the article are a bit abrupt. The author wants to create a stable and decisive character for the protagonist, but without the foreshadowing, sometimes the dialogue is too cumbersome and procrastinating, making people feel that the protagonist is innocent and a bit fledgling. Such a high school student looks a bit disconnected. In fact, when writing about emotions, you don't need to describe the emotions. You can write actions and then hide the emotions in the actions. For example, when writing about envy, you don't need to write envy on the surface. You can write that the envious people look at each other and add some psychology. When the author can hide some emotions, characters or details in the action, the writing style will definitely improve! Although I am not very professional! But he is also a bookworm for twenty years! Come on author! I hope I can have good books to read every day! ! !

What to say. Can see. So far it looks pretty good! Although the rhythm is a bit abrupt. But it's still okay. I read it in a skip. To put it all together, it seems that there is no cp at present. But there are female characters too. Not bad.

The pit is very shallow, but after reading it, five stars encourage it. So far, there is relatively little live broadcast content, and the national games are not involved much. The one-month cooldown of Goldfinger is very lax, but the frighteningly low drop rate makes up for this.

Five-star praise! After reading the seventy chapters, so far, the protagonists are brave and resourceful, and the plot of the article has no surprising points. The upgrade process makes people excited. I don't know how many chapters this book is expected to write. I hope there will be more plots about the national destiny in the follow-up. Is the protagonist's female classmate his CP? ?

The subject matter is quite good and the writing is quite good, but it just feels a bit awkward. There are many details described, and the words are gorgeous, so that's what it means. There is also the description of death. At the beginning, it is said that after death, you just return to the earth, but later on, a large amount of text is spent describing what it is like to face death. It feels like dying and disappearing. I mainly read it for the cool articles, but I didn't feel that it was cool enough. Come on, author.

There are no messy things. It's not about being green at the beginning, nor about relying on the protagonist to rescue the whole country. It's well written, but there are too few. I hope the author will add more.

Progress: 251 The career line is very good, but the emotional line is unclear at the moment, and it is biased towards the harem. If it is not written well, it will be a hindrance. The protagonist's golden finger can specify a 100% probability of dropping an item every 30 days, such as a village building order. The world view is very interesting and has some game elements. When you reach the age of 18 and enter the nightmare world, you can travel back and forth between Blue Star and Nightmare if the territory established by the National Fortune Cauldron is recognized. If the National Fortune Cauldron is broken in the end, the country will also be destroyed. The nightmare world is the biggest crisis. The latest rules have changed. The catastrophe has begun. The protagonist's territory has reached the county level. He is currently exploring the dungeon and is very much looking forward to seeing the construction of the Great Wall.

This may be my first time watching a game about national luck and survival. I think it's very interesting, but there's one thing I don't like very much. It's too game-like. It would be nice if there weren't things like attack power x1 and the main body dies when you die in the nightmare world. The more I look at it, the more boring it becomes, and it becomes more and more gamified. The emergence of dungeons brings the gamification of boredom to the top, and it slips away.

This book is really wonderful! From the moment I turned the first page, it was like a powerful magnet, attracting me tightly. The plot in the book is ups and downs and exciting, and every turn is unexpected. The characters are also very vivid, and their emotions seem to be conveyed through the pages of the book, making me feel the same way. The author's writing is delicate, vivid and contagious, and the scenes in the story are described so vividly that I felt like I was actually there. Whether it is the exciting adventure plot or the warm and touching emotional description, they are all handled just right, making me immersed in this wonderful world and unable to extricate myself. This is really a rare book worth reading carefully.

I saw Chapter 43 and came here to comment. It was the first time I read this kind of lord novel. It was very well written. I cried when I read it. I built my own village. I am no longer a refugee. I can finally go home. Come on, it will be better in the future. [Almost crying] I was very young. I went abroad with my grandfather when I was 3 and a half years old. At that time, many people scolded us, and later many people praised us. But the time that I will never forget is when I know that I can return to my country. I have the same mood, a sense of solidity of returning to my roots.

I read two hundred chapters in one day. Compared with novels of the same type, this book is really good. The first is that the villain is not brainless. The second is that although his combat power is suppressed, the protagonist is the best in changing jobs and other things. It is not brainless. I hope the author can stick to it.

The setting is quite good and the content is very interesting. However, the 30-day cool-down period for the protagonist is too long. I have seen that the protagonist and his teammates have all turned three times, and then I have drawn more than a hundred pictures before the protagonist has turned three. It is really too long, and I am tired of watching it. Then when the protagonist gives things to his teammates, I feel that the description is similar every time. In fact, the teammates can also get them themselves. But overall it's pretty good. I feel like it's still fine after 8 o'clock.