The Heavenly Kingdom’s Revelation

A great book, the writing style and rhythm are more suitable for the starting point. I don't know which master opened a small account to write a book. The writing style is very mature and delicious😋. I just love watching this kind of young man grow up passionately.

The gender of the author is unknown, the orientation is tentative, the mental state is good, there is a possibility of bad habits, there is no record of interruption, please keep up the work [currently working on the manuscript] 😳

This is my first time to write a review on Tomatoes. It is a very good book. I have to say that I can see many shadows, but this is not a bad thing. After all, who would dislike his wife looking like Liu Yifei (laughing) Bookworms who like Dragon Clan, Apocalypse Forecast, Lord of Mysteries, and other similar or "pedigree" books with obvious classes, mysterious origins of the protagonists, lots of female characters, clever protagonists, etc. Are welcome to read it. Anyway, it's pretty solid here.

The plot is good. I have read similar stories. The protagonist group should be the first group to have superpowers. The male protagonist must be awesome. But there is something indescribably awkward, the Chinese description mixed with Western elements

I have read Chapter 27 so far. I will give you a small review and I will continue to comment when I come back after reading it. It's a very good book. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are very high, but in my opinion, the pace may be a bit fast. In the first small climax, there are many powerful characters on the stage, and the explanations are all left to one hand, so it is a bit confusing to read. You can try to explain part of the world view, which will make the look and feel much better. Then I feel a little anxious about pushing the main line, so I can go slower here. Overall, there are some cute parts, but it's very good, and the descriptions are on point. As long as the relationships between the characters, main plot, and hidden plots are further polished, I think it will be even better.

This book made me see the self that once loved novels. It's really touching.

Exaggerating too much might sound like flattery, but finding this book really gave me a feeling of relief after a long drought. The writing is very romantic and free. I like the visuals of this book very much, and I have never used the bookmark function so many times in other Tomato books. I feel that I can really go to the starting point. If I have to talk about shortcomings, there are still some things that are too deliberate and not handled very well, but I think they are innocuous. I hope the author can write better and better

Looks good. Which boss opened a trumpet account?

It's a very good book. It's like finding gold. It's rare to see a well-written book before a meal. It has its own novel setting and the plot is also full of twists and turns. The only thing I'm confused about is that since Sun Ranran came to arrest people from the beginning, why did he tell the protagonist later that he should tell the girl the complete facts? They are all here to arrest people. That is the opposite. You go catch her and tell her that I was not actually here to save you before. Is there any point in pretending to arrest people? What's the matter with arresting her and saving her at the same time? There are problems with the character creation, but the plot is still quite attractive to me. I will look at it later. If there are no big logical problems, I will not change the rating.

? Why did the rating drop from 6.2 To 6.1??? The book is very good. I'll give it a conservative 9.0 To 9.2 Now. If I write nb later, a 9.5 Is not impossible. Why doesn't the rating go up?