I'm Really the Deputy Captain, Not the Strongest in the World

Before we tie it up, let's talk about it first. I personally think this is great with no cp, no heroine and no harem! ! You should make good friends instead of being a bitch🐴. There is a bit of Al in the article, but so far it seems that there is nothing poisonous in the description, and it can be seen that the author really thought it through. I feel like there aren't too many bugs in the system. For me, don't use your brain when reading novels. The more realistic they are, the less interesting they are (unless it's really too outrageous). Walking with the flow of the boat, he was in a semi-invincible state. Personally, I prefer to follow the boat. While I am fighting and fighting, I can also get some comfort from friendship. I think it is very good. As long as there is something like trust between you and your companions in each article, I will have a good impression of the article. At least it is humane. There is a common problem with boat flow, poor writing skills are like nanny novels, but actually I am not very disgusted with this kind of thing... I think since the protagonist has come to a new world and made a new partner, it is good and normal to care and work hard for it. This is not a poisonous point for me. If some viewers don't like this, they can leave it first, and there is no need to curse the author. Whoever writes does not want to write well, and everyone writes for love and does not charge a penny. Comments are ok but they are virtuous. To sum up, this is a semi-satisfying article for me. Anyway, I don't feel aggrieved when I read it, nor do I feel that I am abusing the protagonist. I personally think that it would be great to be able to finish a book or a novel well! Everyone has different tastes and opinions. The author should not be too obsessed with the attacks of some people and just regard writing this book as an experience. Come on! Part of the reason for giving five stars is because it is not easy to read the author. It takes a lot of courage to write a novel and publish it. I have written it before, so I understand. Come on, I will keep urging you to read more, as long as you don't skip it later [top post]

When I saw Zoro, I felt a bit OOC. Luffy was too calm and lacked the lively energy he had before. Zoro felt like he talked a bit too much. If we had just met him, I wouldn't have talked a lot. The Deserter King still performed steadily, the only one who didn't have OOC [facepalm] Some comments say that it is not consistent with the original work. This is considered to be the author's private design. The author also explained it before. It is probably because the protagonist met Luffy first. Because of the protagonist, they arrived at Shields Town in advance. The private design is that the knife was placed first by the swordsmith (I didn't look carefully to see if it was a swordsmith, that's all) Call it like this) Then, the navy will go there, but the protagonist and the others have arrived at the navy ahead of time and haven't asked to go there and put it at the base (actually, it feels a bit unreasonable. I don't know why they put it at the swordsmith's place. According to the navy's ethics, they should just call the shell or something and take it away, but let's see it this way for private purposes) This can still be connected with the original work, but the public execution later is really a private design. It is probably similar to the difficulty for the protagonist group. After all, there is a time traveler with cheats [Thoughts] I feel that it is quite normal to write that Zoro has no strength after being put down before the fight. After all, he has been hungry for so long. Although in the original book, after being put down, Zoro directly kills people with a knife, but the little girl's 🍙 Luffy was fed to Zoro, and he regained some strength (maybe?). Then the author changed it to the water with sugar and salt that the protagonist was fed. He rested for half a minute and seemed to start the fight. I think it is very reasonable. A lot of things have been changed, but the plots are probably similar, and some small incidents and conflicts are completely gone. For example, after Nami fell ill, Weiwei had a conflict while reading the newspaper and finally decided to go to Guci Island for treatment. She didn't even meet Dalton on Guci Island, so it just passed by. Luffy's little highlight was removed, and the relationship between the characters was not right. Did Doto know Weiwei before? But that's okay. If they were all the same, it would feel a little watery. It's okay to write it this way, and it's still a bit fresh. Also, the protagonist can tell some intelligence information every time, and prepare medicine to cure Nami in advance, and prepare antidote for Luffy. For example, no one asks about the smart Zoro, is it already tacitly understood? [Thinking] I feel like the writing is pretty good, and it's still acceptable to me [Chigua] Uh, I didn't feel that good after meeting Qing Pheasant, and I felt a little overwhelmed by the protagonist later on, uh...

Although the rating is low, it is really good-looking. Five points is an encouragement to the author and he should not run away. If I give it a real rating, it would be about 4 stars. In the early stage, there were some settings that were a little bit of a conflict between the left and right brains. There was also a section that had no plot but only exposition, and I almost abandoned the article. Fortunately, it's not very long, and the plot runs much better. When it comes to pirate fan fiction, it's really not easy to come across something like this with few interesting points. I hope the author can continue and not engage in ambiguity with the same boat. It is best not to write about the heroine in the main text. I really want to write about the heroine as an extra chapter. Never write it as a male-to-male romance, especially the male-to-male romance with Luffy. It's so shocking that those who have read the original work can't bear to watch it. It's pretty good so far until I read the latest chapter, so keep up the good work!

It looks great, but I haven't rated it yet. [What] It should be suitable for those who like to go with the ship, but not suitable for the protagonist who only accepts being a lone wolf or being a captain. [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] It's not tied yet. The writing in Queshi is better than the previous one. The author is getting better and better as he writes. There are many interesting little complaints. Moreover, the writing is not violent, and it does not make people angry like other novels. It is quite relaxing to read. I prefer the kind that show off without brains. The protagonist here is quite stable, and the villain is also very smart. The villain becoming smart should be an advantage, not a disadvantage. There are some small changes in the front, and the author also explained it. Just don't get too entangled. There are not many good books to read now. [Love] [Love] I hope that the author can highlight the influence of the protagonist more in the future, so that the Straw Hats will have new vitality and more changes. I feel like I can have my own original island. Normally, there will definitely be many other islands in the Grand Line. [Almost crying] [Almost crying] The protagonist is very strong, and it is best to have some wits and analysis later on, taking advantage of the intelligence advantages of the analysis system and the advantages of multiple ability systems.

Chapter 3 updated daily, please support, please urge me to update [I'm about to cry]

After reading the first twenty chapters, I think it's okay. The protagonist doesn't have a small head to control the big head, and he gradually becomes stronger and invincible. I don't know if the enemies in the back are strengthened. It's a bit boring to push them side by side. It would be good if the protagonist group doesn't suffer [Eat Melon]. I don't know if there will be a battle of wits. After all, the protagonist Goldfinger is invincible in terms of information, and he should be able to keep crushing him. But being invincible by one person is almost meaningless. It would be great if the entire Straw Hats could be invincible together🤣

I laughed so hard. I originally wanted to see if the author had any similar articles. When I entered the author's homepage, I was disappointed to find that there was only one article. I saw that the author had tweets, so I thought the next best thing would be to read the articles the author had tweeted. I didn't expect that the tweets were all the author's own articles in a fancy way. I felt a little sad and funny at the same time. It seems clever, but in fact it's useless, hahahahaha. This is a tweet without coins to improve the rating, so if it is less popular, the rating will also be lower?

It's good-looking. This book is really good-looking. The characters are well grasped, and some expressions and descriptions are not very fluent, but overall the writing is quite good.

Although it is a nanny story, it describes the bond between the partners in One Piece, which is a high degree of restoration of the plot. It is quite touching when I read it, but the sense of participation of the protagonist is a bit weak.

The AI ​​polishing may not be very good in the front, but overall it looks pretty good in the future.

Please support me and I hope the author will not stop updating. After reading the previous article, I think it's quite clever so far, and it's a semi-invincible article.

It's good-looking, and the growth of the main characters is visible to the naked eye, and it's not mindless.

Everything written by the author is beautiful.

It's okay.

It's so comfortable to write that I feel dizzy

See it's okay now

Not bad for a boat trip

The crew members on the Hope Road spacecraft have all strengthened [sneered laughter] [sneaky laughter] [sneaky laughter] [sneaky laughter]

No heroine, no ambiguity. Help the entire team improve their strength. In Tomato it is indeed an excellent article about following the boat flow

I've only read a few chapters, starting with Donghai, which is pretty good.

It's okay, I hope the protagonist's strength will improve by leaps and bounds.

At present, I like the non-CP and boat flow, and there are no big poisonous points.

It's well written, but the author is more suitable for writing in the "suspense" genre. A pirate fanfic, not suitable for those who are nervous or depressed

Please give me a 5-star review

It's ok sincerely, keep up the good work

Not bad ✍️It's a good fight

To put it bluntly, I also said it in vain.

Suitable for my liking

Not bad, you can take a look

Good-looking, can recommend, good-looking