Collapse of Iron**********

It's not fun enough. It's fine in the space station, but the plot in Belloberg is too original, and the lines of the local characters have not changed much. Personally, I think the biggest problem is: the characters are too clearly distinguished. The biggest joy of the subject of transforming into a peer is the reaction of others to familiar and unfamiliar people. Even people like Jeppard will at least be confused for a moment when they see such similar people. Especially the attitude of Randuck, Pella and others towards Banya, they didn't react at all to the fact that she looked similar to Bronya, as if they knew that Banya had nothing to do with them. Question: Is it reasonable to expose the birth of the Trail Blazers in minor hockey? The birth of the pioneers is related to the star core hunters. This kind of thing should not be known to people on a closed planet. Moreover, the pioneers were printed out by the ether editor, but Pella did not have any reaction (about the abnormal birth method of human beings). Beloberg has been closed for more than 800 years, and not many people even know what his own planet looks like (although there is a model in the Grand Guardian office, probably only the top brass know it). Even if the starting point is good, it is to prevent the pioneers from being wronged, but I personally do not agree with this method (this should be regarded as the personal privacy of the pioneers). Writing a book is not easy, so I give it four stars. (Three stars are my evaluation of the book, and the other star is dedicated to everyone who writes books seriously)

It looks good so far. There are no bad points, but there are too many typos. Also, don't follow the main line all the time. You can also write some branch lines and peers. Banya's happiness is quite different. It is different from other Tomato fans who persecute Lao Yang after time travel. It is quite innovative.

The look and feel is good, and it suits my taste well. There is nothing particularly toxic. The author's writing is okay, but I always feel that the protagonist is not very happy [Thinking] The above is just my personal opinion. If you want to know it, I still recommend you to take a look [Love]

Bong Ya: Bong Ya thinks the author's sister doesn't need to imitate Bong Ya in speaking. Bong Ya has grown up and will no longer call herself Bong Ya (ᗜ ‸ ᗜ) (Hey, the whole thing) (Kitten sticking out tongue jpg.) To be honest, I don't know why, but I always feel that the author's later plots are starting to become a bit monotonous and too close to the main plot. I always feel that the character of Banya is starting to be purely to make up for regrets. When I first watched it, I really thought the character design was quite attractive, but later on there was no innovation, and it was inevitable that I would suffer from visual fatigue.

Give yourself a five-star self-encouragement₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

It looks good and the score seems to be more than 6.8. There are few elements of joy. I hope you can add more. Come on, the author.

It looks good, but I haven't seen any poisonous spots yet. (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ) (°ㅅ°)☝

You wrote so well [I learned it], cute little Banya

I wonder if there will be a story about the Holy Grail War in the future? Sword: Liya, Bow: Emiya, Spear: Blue Lancer with rotating thrust, Technique: (), Riding: (), Kill: (), Madness (). Which one will the protagonist occupy? Will he even explore the world of Xingyue? [Eat melon] It would be great if a world other than the world of the sea of trees could be added, even if it was a side story. Like type moon or other anime world

How did Bronya and Xier give birth to a child?

(๑> <๑) Yummy! (๑•͈ᴗ•͈)❀Send you flowers

Very beautiful, highly recommended, very sweet, and good emotional foreshadowing, but why did it end suddenly!

So will there be a plot in the future where the protagonist is in Collapse 3 [Chigua]

Follow the instructions... Good reviews

Good books worth reading

Duck duck~ duck duck~ duck duck duck~~

Look good, good, good

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

It's very interesting, good luck to the author [laughs]

Nice! So pretty!

Banya is so cute!

Don't break it. As long as you don't break it, I will do anything.

Ah, no, I have finished raising books and raising books?

It feels pretty good and suits my taste. I hope there will be more.

It feels okay and suits my taste

Not bad, not much changed in the main plot

Has the protagonist's Herrscher form already appeared? Chapter

It's okay, but it's not good to use a lot of extras later to make up the numbers.