Jobless Reincarnation: The Twin Stars of Sword and Magic

The character design of the protagonist is really well done, with a precocious mentality, small arms and strange strength, and a tenacious and even wild fighting style. She is obviously Rudy's younger sister, but she has a more sister-like personality. The contrast between her thin appearance and these elements is very cute, and coupled with the right amount of natural stupidity, it is a really well-written character. To be honest, the plot is not very special. It can be seen that the author wants to write a plot that respects the original work but deviates from the original text. However, due to the restrictions of the fan fiction, it is difficult to write a good story as long as you respect the original work. In fact, the author has done a good job in this aspect. For example, the protagonist's attitude towards Sylphy is something I have not seen in other unprofessional fan fiction. It is indeed a fresh idea. As far as the plot is concerned, the author should just keep to himself. Don't let what I said above influence your original thoughts. Personally, when I read fan fiction, I care more about the creation of characters. The character design of the protagonist is really well done. I personally like it very much. Come on.

Let me start by saying that the conclusion is beautiful. I have read Chapter 196 so far. Let me share my thoughts. The protagonist feels so pseudo-human, as if he is playing a game, always striving to be correct every step of the way, making everything perfect from the beginning, without setbacks or growth arcs. It can be said that the original Rudy lived up to its name, struggling all the way out of the mud. The characters (including others except Rudy) are full of depth. This book takes advantage of fan fiction. Readers already have well-created characters in their minds, so they will not feel that the characters are thin. But aside from the original work, it is difficult to say to people who have not read it. The other characters are more like appendages to the protagonist. Another point, why does the pseudo-human protagonist look at the reborn Son of God differently? Is it just sympathy? It doesn't feel like she fits her cold-blooded persona. Just because she's an important plot character in the world of the story, do you treat her in a different light? The main character (the author) is too utilitarian. I don't know if there will be a decisive reason later, so I'll leave it like that. Overall, the book is very interesting and I love reading it.

So far it's pretty good, and the main character is quite to my liking. She has a cold-faced cuteness, and I feel like she's someone who could be a mother.

The protagonist can be described in one word: hard! It has a language system like thunder, beautiful numbers like fortune, steel-like moral concepts, and devilish mental perseverance. Neither good nor evil, more like Chu Zihang type, born to kill embryos, born to kill gods🤫 I just want to say when Ariel has to eat

😳Reasons for Xiaoitoyu's recommendation: 1. This is a new writer who is just starting out. He is diligent and hard-working, has strong learning ability and has a lot of room for improvement😏 (2. The author is suspected of being a member of the Great Love Alliance and deserves a try as an ally🧐) 2. The heroine is a (loli) growth player. The protagonist of a good book must grow up, so this is a good book😏 3. Shen Nong's taste of herbs may not necessarily mean that he has a clever tongue. Only when you try it yourself will you know whether it is good or not. 4. (They are all here, right?) This writing is powerful [please read carefully] 5. The ending of the story is written by the author, so the author is Kamiyama Feiyu Zhen😏 6. 😢Oh Nei Gai, Wadahi… (mouth covered) 😏 (An AI person pops up on the left side of the screen) The novel has an outline! The updates are stable, the content is interesting, the details are reasonable, and the writing becomes more and more popular. Click below to read and enter now! (Jumps back to the left side of the screen) 😏 (An AI person pops up on the right side of the screen) The heroine (she is a loli) has no system, she is pure hard work and sweat, she has brains, and is non-toxic (so go out and turn left to "White Snake" 😢). Currently, she is a single heroine. She is pure love. Don't worry, click below to read and enter immediately! (Jumps back to the right side of the screen) 😏 (An AI person pops up at the bottom of the screen) The author is kind and willing to communicate, but is it suspicious? Internet introvert (I never lie to others, people call me honest😏). Book lovers are friendly, smart and talkative. Just add it to your bookshelf and enjoy reading all year long! Click below to read and enter immediately (jump back to the bottom of the screen) 😢Koito Yu highly recommends meow😢

It seems to be okay for the time being. Although most of the original content is slightly modified, it can be seen that the author is a relatively potential author. I look forward to whether the subsequent plot will follow the original work or be more multi-dimensional. (If the writing is good, I will add that star) There you have it. .

The most comfortable episode of Rudy's Little Brother. In the original version, he was responsible for everything alone, and the dragon boss's true nature and milk dragon's big problems could not be found. The growth rate and consciousness here are lower than in the original work, but he is the deputy throughout the whole process. Hilde is the real power and is at C throughout the whole process. Rudy is messing around.

It's good to read. As a book lover who has read the original work three times, I can say that this book is exactly the same in restoring the plot of the original work (not in a derogatory sense, which at least shows two points. First, the author has carefully studied the original work. Second, this book is very careful in the arrangement of the plot. It still writes very good new things without conflicting with the original plot while taking into account the original plot.), The rhythm of the plot is in place, and the shaping and understanding of the characters of the original work are very good! Presumably this will be another T0-level jobless fanfic! Highly recommended! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I really want to spend the whole night watching it in a hurry! Renew! Update!

I haven't seen Jobless Tensei, and I've only heard about the characters in general, but there's nothing I can't understand. Each plot is written in detail, what is to be done when, and the main line that the protagonist should take is not deviated from at all. Very good There are a lot of bad points in the follow-up, but overall it is an excellent second-generation fanfic. The biggest bad point is that it also writes about the relationship between the original partner and the original partner without breaking up the original partner. The writing is very 🐢. Then the heroine seemed to have practiced well as she went to the back, her head was pointed, and she was becoming more and more insane🤦

Let's give it a five-star rating, because this is one of the better Doujinshi no-job reincarnation fanfics I've read in Tomato, but I personally think it has shortcomings. If there is a 4.5 Rating, I still want to give it a 4.5 Rating. What we do better are the following: 1. The best thing is that the author has an outline. And it feels like the design should be pretty good. Therefore, the plot is more reasonable, and the overall structure is relatively compact, and there will be no confusion when writing. So when I read this kind of long article, I thought it was not like this. 2. The author has studied the original work quite deeply. He really loves the party. Therefore, the characterization and plot of the original work are very good, especially the characterization, his psychological description, and dialogue characteristics, etc., Can be considered good, so you can rest assured. If it's bad 1. I personally think that it is a bit of a group portrait, but I am just saying that it is a little bit, because Hilde, this character is the protagonist, he does not give people a strong sense of substitution, and the relative sense of substitution is not very strong, but in fact he does have a sense of substitution. Because when we read normal novels that are not group portraits, they are almost always portrayed from the perspective of the protagonist. Although this is also the case, it may feel that there is a lack of psychological portrayal? And a subjective perspective? My own inner feelings? It always feels like this character is only added with some characteristics, without his own real flesh and blood, and it feels a bit like a human machine. The sense of immersion is not very strong, especially at the back? This is the biggest point I want to say In fact, everyone reads jobless reincarnation novels. I was initially attracted to the Mushi Reincarnation anime because of its strong sense of immersion, which is like truly traveling to another world. So, this can be regarded as a little dissatisfaction. 2. It is a description of the emotional drama of the three heroines and the progress of the relationship between the protagonist and the three heroines. In my opinion, the love line is quite hasty. Just like the seven-star section, it was a bit hastily advanced. The same goes for Blue Hair... When it comes to describing emotional lines, I personally feel that a lot of psychological foreshadowing is needed, a lot of foreshadowing. Although there is a little foreshadowing, it is more equivalent to you eating my meal, and I eating your meal, as time goes by, and then suddenly, without breaking out... It is a bit abrupt. In fact, I think the description of the protagonist's emotional line needs to be improved. So in fact, when it comes to jobless reincarnation, I personally think that some people are attracted to the other world, but more and more, what can retain the audience are those flesh-and-blood feelings, the bond between family, the bond between father and son, the bond with the beloved, love, family affection, friendship, these strong feelings are the core of this jobless reincarnation, and what really moves people. Therefore, you must not be casual in the depiction of emotional lines. The above is my small and insignificant comment.