Mushoku Tensei: Twin Stars of Sword and Sorcery

The character design of the protagonist is really well done, with a precocious mentality, small arms and strange strength, and a tenacious and even wild fighting style. She is obviously Rudy's younger sister, but she has a more sister-like personality. The contrast between her thin appearance and these elements is very cute, and coupled with the right amount of natural stupidity, it is a really well-written character. To be honest, the plot is not very special. It can be seen that the author wants to write a plot that respects the original work but deviates from the original text. However, due to the restrictions of the fan fiction, it is difficult to write a good story as long as you respect the original work. In fact, the author has done a good job in this aspect. For example, the protagonist's attitude towards Sylphy is something I have not seen in other unprofessional fan fiction. It is indeed a fresh idea. As far as the plot is concerned, the author should just keep to himself. Don't let what I said above influence your original thoughts. Personally, when I read fan fiction, I care more about the creation of characters. The character design of the protagonist is really well done. I personally like it very much. Come on.

Let me start by saying that the conclusion is beautiful. I have read Chapter 196 so far. Let me share my thoughts. The protagonist feels so pseudo-human, as if he is playing a game, always striving to be correct every step of the way, making everything perfect from the beginning, without setbacks or growth arcs. It can be said that the original Rudy lived up to its name, struggling all the way out of the mud. The characters (including others except Rudy) are full of depth. This book takes advantage of fan fiction. Readers already have well-created characters in their minds, so they will not feel that the characters are thin. But aside from the original work, it is difficult to say to people who have not read it. The other characters are more like appendages to the protagonist. Another point, why does the pseudo-human protagonist look at the reborn Son of God differently? Is it just sympathy? It doesn't feel like she fits her cold-blooded persona. Just because she's an important plot character in the world of the story, do you treat her in a different light? The main character (the author) is too utilitarian. I don't know if there will be a decisive reason later, so I'll leave it like that. Overall, the book is very interesting and I love reading it.

So far it's pretty good, and the main character is quite to my liking. She has a cold-faced cuteness, and I feel like she's someone who could be a mother.

The protagonist can be described in one word: hard! It has a language system like thunder, beautiful numbers like fortune, steel-like moral concepts, and devilish mental perseverance. Neither good nor evil, more like Chu Zihang type, born to kill embryos, born to kill gods🤫 I just want to say when Ariel has to eat

[Shy] Reasons why Koito Yu recommends: 1. This is a new writer who is just starting out, diligent and hard-working, has strong learning ability and has a lot of room for improvement [laughter] (2. The author is suspected of being a member of the Great Love Alliance, and deserves a taste from allies [exploration]) 2. The heroine is a (loli) growth player. The protagonists of good books have to grow up, so this is a good book [laughing] 3. Shen Nong's taste of herbs may not necessarily mean that he has a clever tongue. Only by trying it yourself will you know whether it is good or not. 4. (They are all here, right?) This writing is powerful [please read carefully] 5. The ending of the story is written by the author, so the author is Kamiyama Feiyu Zhen [laughing evilly] 6. [Crying] Ouch, Wadahi… (mouth covered) [Laughing evilly] (An AI person pops up on the left side of the screen) The novel has an outline! The updates are stable, the content is interesting, the details are reasonable, and the writing becomes more and more popular. Click below to read and enter now! (Jumps back to the left side of the screen) [Smile] (An AI person pops up on the right side of the screen) The heroine (she is a loli) has no system, she is pure hard work and sweat, she is smart, and non-toxic (it's so good to go out and turn left to "White Snake" [crying]), she is currently a single heroine, pure love, feel free to eat, click below to read and enter immediately! (Jumps back to the right side of the screen) [Laughing evilly] (An AI person pops up at the bottom of the screen) The author is kind and willing to communicate, but is it suspicious? Internet introvert (I never lie to others, people call me honest [laughing evilly]). Book lovers are friendly, smart and talkative. Just add it to your bookshelf and enjoy reading all year long! Click below to read and enter immediately (jump back to the bottom of the screen) [crying] Koito Yu highly recommends meow [crying]

It seems to be okay for the time being. Although most of the original content is slightly modified, it can be seen that the author is a relatively potential author. I look forward to whether the subsequent plot will follow the original work or be more multi-dimensional. (If the writing is good, I will add that star) There you have it. .

It's good to read. As a book lover who has read the original work three times, I can say that this book is exactly the same in restoring the plot of the original work (not in a derogatory sense, which at least shows two points. First, the author has carefully studied the original work. Second, this book is very careful in the arrangement of the plot. It still writes very good new things without conflicting with the original plot while taking into account the original plot.), The rhythm of the plot is in place, and the shaping and understanding of the characters of the original work are very good! Presumably this will be another T0-level jobless fanfic! Highly recommended! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I really want to spend the whole night watching it in a hurry! Renew! Update!

The most comfortable episode of Rudy's Little Brother. In the original version, he was responsible for everything alone, and the dragon boss's true nature and milk dragon's big problems could not be found. The growth rate and consciousness here are lower than in the original work, but he is the deputy throughout the whole process. Hilde is the real power and is at C throughout the whole process. Rudy is messing around.

A jobless veteran writer, no need to say more! Hilde also inherited the heroic physique of Gray Rat's family. Well, as of the latest chapter, the heroine has only had an ambiguous relationship with one female character, and is also suspected of being a brother-in-law. If it is for Lily, you need to think about it. Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰 🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rocky Hikawai🥰🥰🥰Rockyhee🥰🥰

I read it from next door and it is still of reliable quality. I am very impressed that now that the third season of Jobless is about to start, there is still a veteran Jobless author who can continue to write about his imagination of Rudeus's different stories with his original intention [making a face]