After Wearing the Book, He Was Pinched by the Real Daughter and Given Electric Shocks Every Day

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Noah's outer ring and the Noxus guillotine, he would have been killed by the M4's six times strafing, but I was more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan. The young man was proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang, and showed Zhuge Liang's resentment towards the monkeys who knocked him to death. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like being there, and the characters are well described.

It looks good. I really like this torture. I also want to be controlled like this... Feel the despair that life is worse than death.

It's very interesting. It's not just a sad story, but also a bit of a battle of wits. The protagonist clearly understands that his primary goal is to survive. Freedom and dignity are all empty talk, and he uses his best acting skills to survive.

Very good, a bit violent and bloody, not for the faint of heart

Uh... I'm currently reading Chapter 16, and there's nothing I can complain about. Personally, I feel it's purely depressing, and I feel sorry for the heroine. (Die Jia: It's just a personal feeling, no malice. I hope the author will get better and better. Personal hobbies are different and normal. Friendly discussions are welcome) It feels almost like Reply Warlock [face covering] I'll read it later. If the second female lead wasn't abused, this book would only have three stars in my heart. SM is not in my comfort zone. Everyone has their own preferences. There are some minor problems in some places. The second female lead actually dares to sleep in front of her "enemy" (the word used in the book is deep sleep). And the heroine doesn't want to resist. Since she has traveled back home, she will definitely not be able to go back. It's me and I will definitely have an affair with the heroine. Death is not terrible, but death is... (Wait, I'm deaf again...) I quite like the heroine's character, so I'm even more disgusted with the second heroine's behavior (but after all, the second heroine's perspective is not God's perspective. I can understand it, but it doesn't mean I won't feel uncomfortable when I see the heroine being tortured) Hmm... I'll consider adding more points when I check it out later. Currently I can only give 4 stars.

The author wrote it very well and I enjoyed reading it. As for the ending, if it's he, I hope Qingyuan can pursue his wife for a while longer; if it's be, I hope I can tell you in advance; Finally, I wish the author better and better writing results.

Lily is awesome, I just love watching this kind of sadomasochism [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's nice to watch, but so far it feels like another ending of Ghost Mom, it's so suffocating I still hope that people will let me go. It feels like the sky is falling. It's so uncomfortable to have a real family collapse [crying]

I have to say that I have been impressed by Shibie for a few days. The quality of this book written by the author is much higher than before. It is more organized and logical, and the character creation is also very successful. I am gratified.

It's the best torture novel I've ever seen. Some of the plots made me feel embarrassed for the protagonist, but it's okay😏 I was really tired of aesthetics. I looked through the yandere novels I had read before. The plots were basically the same and the routines were the same. Even the action props were basically the same. 😄😄😄😄😄 Were all small dark rooms. But the only good thing about this book was that the heroine was about to die in a section, which was different from other yandere novels.

The first volume is great, really great, and the character development of the two heroines is very impressive. This is not a sweet love story, nor is it a story about torture just for the sake of torture. It can be said that there is no love at all in the first volume. I only saw two conflicting hearts hurting each other. Although there are still shortcomings, some of the plots in the early stage are well written, and some are difficult to explain in one sentence, but the most eye-catching thing is the pull between the two heroines in the middle and later stages, which vividly expresses the characters of the two heroines. The ending of the first volume was also very satisfactory. Wanxing finally came home, while Qingyuan was living in extreme pain, which even made me sympathize with her (although what she did to Wanxing could be described as "animal"), and later gave Qingyuan a little hope, which was really enjoyable. At first I didn't know how good this novel was, and I was even put off by the low rating. But after reading it later, I can really say that the author is really great. In short, it is really rare to see such a powerful novel on Tomato. It deserves a higher rating. I thank the author for creating such amazing content. I also hope that the author's writing will get better and better, and the novel will become more and more popular [laughs] (When I read Chapter 137, I was really attracted to it and stayed up all night to read it)

The contrast between the characters of Su Wanxing and Su Qingyuan is so great. The fake daughter is arrogant and bullies the real daughter in the early stage, but the soul-traveling twist in the later stage directly pushes the plot to the climax. Weakly begging for mercy, trying to be influenced, and resisting the knife to survive, every step is written delicately and heart-wrenchingly. From forbearance to giving up to complete madness, the progression of emotions is particularly real. Su Qingyuan went from revenge to emotion to paranoia and imprisonment. She knew she had hurt innocent people but could not let go. Guilt and possessiveness were incisively intertwined. The setting of Soul Travel is novel and exciting. The dual lines of the two worlds echo each other - medical rescue in the real world and body organ failure in another world. On one side is the hope of returning home, and on the other side is the entanglement of despair. It makes people's hearts tighten. The ending is even more impressive! Su Wanxing returned home with a drug problem, and the words "live well" became the shackles of Su Qingyuan's life. The regret that was not forgiven until death brought the sadomasochistic atmosphere to the extreme. The supporting characters are sober and transparent, the characters are not broken, the plot logic is online, the entanglement of love and hate, and the impermanence of fate are written penetratingly. The writing is delicate and empathetic, and the more cruel it becomes, the better it gets.

The author's writing is great, really good. They fell in love and killed each other, they hated Hai Qingtian, and they tortured each other when they first traveled through time. I hate forced love. Later they also liked each other. But in order to go home, the protagonist has no choice but to return to the real world later and it is indeed very good. I feel that the real world is indeed very good in terms of ideas and plot. Now it's another stage of torture with a knife, which is still very good. It depends on how to write it later. If you write a good ending later, the book can be called perfect. Next, they should go to the United States separately. Later, they may meet or get together for some reason. The two of them are really sweet together. Come on, the author must write a good ending! The author's writing is great and I highly recommend everyone to read it. Finished watching it, it's great. Both sadistic and loving. The ending is really satisfying, although the sweetness at the end is a bit lacking. But still very happy. I am looking forward to the author's new work. This article has two lines. One is traveling to the novel world, then the protagonist dies, and finally comes back, and the heroine also returns to reality. Chase the protagonist. Both lines are beautifully written. Especially when we return to reality, the author writes the ideas and plot very well. The author is great, super great. Very powerful!

Author, oh my god, this is your autobiography, right? The writing is so excellent, the writing style is delicate, and the feelings are deep. I have been in phantom pain for a few thousand words on one page, [laughs evilly] You can't really feel it, right?

I feel it's more than that, it's quite beautiful. It would be even more perfect if there was a Chasing Star Crematorium behind it [Blowing Kisses]

Torture for the sake of torture, knife for the sake of knife, the characters are not vivid, the plot makes people's breasts blocked, making people uncomfortable and angry. There is no crematorium to chase the wife, only to move oneself, and the two sides are not equal. All problems are caused by unreasonable internal friction, internal friction, internal friction, internal friction, which makes people sick and stupid. But from a erotic perspective, it is a good book. In addition, the emotional description is quite detailed. I admit that this book has merits, and I hope it will be reprinted and re-edited. It's a book with great potential.

There is nothing wrong with this book. Not bad. One of the few endings that doesn't support he. Be is the best ending. The author is very persuasive. The heroine has no love brain. Great! Must be! ! ! Which true daughter does not deserve love?

It is a very imaginative book. The content is so crazy that it makes people feel suffocated when reading it. However, the result is good, a romantic ending. Maybe this is the meaning of the protagonist's existence. The ending lays a lot of foreshadowing. (I watched the extra episode. It's very heartwarming, so I won't comment on it.) "I'm Lazy" Weaving a cage with death Create everything with paranoia Cover others with madness Smooth scars with extreme Use loss to save everything Use tears in exchange for apology One life in exchange for another life Use your life to redeem your mistakes Rating: An extremely crazy book (I like it very much) The flower language of iris is: secret admiration and desperate love

I've read 200 chapters. The last book I read by the author was the one by Black Silk Feet. I can only say that he is still the purest yandere I have ever seen. This book is even crazier than that one. I don't know anyone who doesn't have mental problems anymore. The blood of the two heroines is enough for 10 people, non-stop. In the battle, the injuries were basically not healed, and the body is always in poor condition. Lin Weiwei has no brain to protect her shortcomings, which is suitable for the character of a female supporting character, but it is very annoying to yell all the time. Uncle Lu is really the most normal human being, always maintaining a high-intelligence state, except for Prisoner Lu and Passerby A, there are no normal people in this book

Okay, okay, it's very enjoyable to torture😋 Looking forward to chasing my wife in the crematorium

Overall, the writing is delicate and smooth, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the plot is progressive and suspenseful, and there are no redundant routines. It is a very solid and enjoyable article, and the torture is quite good. The character creation is good, the personality is distinct and not flat, the plot advances naturally, and the details are well described. Summary: The writing style is comfortable, the characters are full, the story rhythm is stable, and the overall quality is online

I like this setting very much, but why is it so cruel? I don't dare to watch it anymore, why is it so cruel! 😭Both of them are so miserable. I dare not continue reading after more than 80 chapters. It's heartbreaking! Heart-wrenching!

Although I have only read Chapter 19, but now, I really like the content of this book, and it has perfectly stepped on my XP. I really like the kind of story where you come through the book, and then the original heroine does all the bad things to the original heroine, and then you are abused by the rising original heroine. In order to survive, people who have traveled through the book can only lie down at their feet in humiliation and beg for forgiveness, or take the initiative to stick to it, such as begging for mercy with ambiguous signals, or punishments such as training and ambiguity, or pure S-type punishments ̊(´◊ω◊｀). I really like this kind of ₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎♡. I didn't expect Tomato to have this kind of article. I generally don't read anything below 9.0. No wonder I didn't find this type of article. Maybe most people don't like this type of article because it's like being controlled, or seeing the heroine being so abused from the main point of view. So the ratings may range from 5 stars to one or two stars, and the ratings may be polarized. Moreover, the character of the sister written by the author has two characters that overlap with the name of my OC sister, even the sister position is the same, and I really like this plot. I have even fantasized about this kind of plot. I think this plot is so cool. I feel like this article was written purely by the author to satisfy his own XP (maybe?), But I think it is really well written and it satisfies my fantasy. Come on, the author must keep writing. 🩷🌷

The content is interesting and I look forward to the follow-up development of the two girls😄

Abuse, the writing is very good. But in order to write about sadomasochism, the author has some settings (poisonous points) in the book that are difficult to accept. It is not recommended for friends who have a righteous outlook on life. I hope Kite and Star can be happy in the extra story.

After reading it, the plot is pure sadism at the end. The heroine becomes Li Huowong. She wants to go back to reality and cannot go back. She breaks the heroine's defense, uses knives, sees blood, and suffers physical and mental torture. The author is very touching. Listening to the book at night gave me goosebumps. The whole movie is torn apart. The development of the plot later is extremely violent, but it is also very consistent with the plot and character setting. It is highly recommended to watch. By the way, the opening is bloody, prone to physical discomfort, and the extra ending is good.

It seems a bit curious. If the author has an if line, I would like to see the heroine completely fall in love with the protagonist, then torture the protagonist back to the original world, and then the original owner comes back, making the heroine hate but unable to hurt the body, and can only mine on the side, being an incompetent husband [smile].

An alternative book that explores the crime of trafficking

I feel like I will awaken some attributes after reading this book. A little cool. How do you rate it... It's a bit complicated, the focus and the nail part at the beginning actually passed the review, but it's really well written, a little bit... Bloody?

It suits my taste, not bad, not bad, I really like it [Send heart] [Send heart]