Seer: When a Lightling Meets the Elves

It looks good. I have broken hands and feet. I have lost my face. I am paralyzed and unable to move. Down syndrome, Alzheimer's disease, polio, comminuted fractures all over my body. No fingers. Both eyes were gouged. My hands and feet were chopped. Comminuted fractures. Bone dislocation. Hip dislocation. Double high prolapse. Pelvic tilt. Cervical scoliosis😱😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🙄😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

The overall setting is very good, but the writing still needs practice. The interaction between the protagonist and others is a bit stiff, and after the author revised the text, some places repeated explanations, and some lacked explanations. I hope the author has an outline and doesn't get round to the end. As a very new author, Xiaobai is doing pretty well, so I would like to encourage you with four stars.

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It's very interesting. The author must keep updating it!

It's very nice. I wish I had a nicer cover.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

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I'm going to read it carefully. I hope the author will continue writing and the protagonist's character will be interesting, like a cat.

The content is profound and the characters are lifelike. Make persistent efforts! [Bird Food Masterpiece] Come on [please update]!

Good luck, author, come on ୧•̀ꇴ•૭