"Also known as "About the time I got hit by the system and ended up as a corpse in Gotham."
· "System: I opened a mall for you. Xigua: Are you asking me to earn money while in the state of a corpse?"
· "System: I killed you but I opened a membership for you"
· "Watermelon: I want to see Batman. System: Arrange to turn you into a corpse that Batman may pass by."
· "Starting with a corpse, all equipment depends on the system's charity"
· "This is probably the most hard-core way to travel to Gotham – traveling while lying down."
· "Batman: I seemed to see a corpse winking at me during my night patrol today?"
· "Arkham Asylum's New Patient: Always Feels Like the Corpse of a Time Traveler"
· "System: I will strengthen your body! Xigua: So now I am... An enhanced corpse?"
· "It is recommended that the title be changed to "The woman who was killed by the system became a corpse in Gotham""
· "Gotham Villains: We kill people. Watermelon: I am a corpse."
· "This is probably the most suitable way to travel through Gotham - it's not even alive."
Reader comments
I haven't seen the back yet, but so far I feel it's pretty good, and everyone's interactions are heart-warming. It's much better than many of those forcibly tragic tragedies in which the protagonist actually doesn't feel anything. In many of them, the protagonist spends a lot of time saving people, and even after helping many times, he still has a high degree of distrust of the protagonist, and even wants to drive him away. It may also be a timeline problem of this type, which is basically at a very late stage, and then this book The subject matter is also very novel, two souls in one body, not an old traditional system novel. The content I have seen so far has a light sense of daily life, but the description of fighting scenes or parts falling into crisis and difficulties is too monotonous. For example, when Gummy Candy and Watermelon are disconnected, although the feelings are written in the later chapters, they are said by themselves. I think I can try to write about the behavior of both parties when they find that they are disconnected, and it can also portray the importance of both parties to each other.
It's nice to see the setting of Two Souls in One Body is very good, but can the conversation between Watermelon and Gummy be heard by others...? I don't quite understand what's going on, I hope you can explain it. I feel like the introduction mistook me (I didn't understand the introduction and I read the book out of curiosity, but it attracted readers/In fact, at first I thought Gummy was a girl hhh I didn't react when I saw the height of 1.9. The relationship between friends now is very good, let's keep it like this, and will we kick the lunch box in the future? Oracle and Jason, etc. The setting of the parallel world is very interesting. Can you write about Lego or the ordinary parallel world or the dark universe...? (Dark universe uh...)
It's really good to read, please give it a thumbs up to the author!
Watermelon and Jellybean get along extremely well, and the characters' emotions are well written.
I like the author's idea very much. It's very novel. Watermelons and gummies are both cute. Just go save the world and kick around. The writing style is relatively fresh, but the same writing techniques appear repeatedly in some places, a bit like AI. But it's worth reading, it's also very friendly to DC characters, and it's a good DC fanfic in Tomato. The author will update soon, I want Modo Modo's food˗ˏˋ ♡ ˎˊ˗ ૮ ///▽/// ა
It's a form of time travel that I've never seen before, it's beautiful! Looking forward to the next plot! 🌷🌷
Nice! It feels light and feels so comfortable! ʕ ◦`꒳´◦ʔ
It feels very novel. Their interaction makes people feel warm and warm.
I haven't seen the back yet, but so far I feel it's pretty good, and everyone's interactions are heart-warming. It's much better than many of those forcibly tragic tragedies in which the protagonist actually doesn't feel anything. In many of them, the protagonist spends a lot of time saving people, and even after helping many times, he still has a high degree of distrust of the protagonist, and even wants to drive him away. It may also be a timeline problem of this type, which is basically at a very late stage, and then this book The subject matter is also very novel, two souls in one body, not an old traditional system novel. The content I have seen so far has a light sense of daily life, but the description of fighting scenes or parts falling into crisis and difficulties is too monotonous. For example, when Gummy Candy and Watermelon are disconnected, although the feelings are written in the later chapters, they are said by themselves. I think I can try to write about the behavior of both parties when they find that they are disconnected, and it can also portray the importance of both parties to each other.
It's nice to see the setting of Two Souls in One Body is very good, but can the conversation between Watermelon and Gummy be heard by others...? I don't quite understand what's going on, I hope you can explain it. I feel like the introduction mistook me (I didn't understand the introduction and I read the book out of curiosity, but it attracted readers/In fact, at first I thought Gummy was a girl hhh I didn't react when I saw the height of 1.9. The relationship between friends now is very good, let's keep it like this, and will we kick the lunch box in the future? Oracle and Jason, etc. The setting of the parallel world is very interesting. Can you write about Lego or the ordinary parallel world or the dark universe...? (Dark universe uh...)
It's really good to read, please give it a thumbs up to the author!
Watermelon and Jellybean get along extremely well, and the characters' emotions are well written.
I like the author's idea very much. It's very novel. Watermelons and gummies are both cute. Just go save the world and kick around. The writing style is relatively fresh, but the same writing techniques appear repeatedly in some places, a bit like AI. But it's worth reading, it's also very friendly to DC characters, and it's a good DC fanfic in Tomato. The author will update soon, I want Modo Modo's food˗ˏˋ ♡ ˎˊ˗ ૮ ///▽/// ა
It's a form of time travel that I've never seen before, it's beautiful! Looking forward to the next plot! 🌷🌷
Nice! It feels light and feels so comfortable! ʕ ◦`꒳´◦ʔ
It feels very novel. Their interaction makes people feel warm and warm.