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Sick Man! the One Who Is Seriously Ill, Vomits Blood and Faints from Time to Time! ! !
If it can't be cured, it will be as miserable as it is, with a pale face and a gentle cough occasionally.
Is There Any Book About Dog 1 Cat 0? I'm Going to Order. Who Wrote It? Yes, Thank You.
I'm really at my wits' end... I can also recommend fanfics (◠‿◠) Is there any chef who is willing to write a fanfic for me? Haha
No More Good-Looking Shuangnan? Please Feed the Child Some Fine Bran...
The writing is so good😭 Children won't pick it (but don't push it anymore if it's like the one who writes about the memory of your brain😣)
Are There Any Fake Knife Articles? I Can't See the Swordsman~
It's the kind of fake story that is misunderstood and distressed, but is actually caused by the system or made up by people's imagination.
The Male Protagonist Is Sick and Weak (Any Disease Is Acceptable, Not in Good Health, the Weaker the Better)
Sick and weak (such as stomach problems, waist injuries, coughing up blood, poisoning...) Are the kind of people who are weak and suffer pain. As long as the two male protagonists are not in good health and are sick, it will be fine. I really like to watch this type of movie.
The Child Is Starving to Death. I Want to See Shuangnan. Can You Please Give Me Some Food?
I want to read a book similar to "Top Players Kill Crazy Copies and Abduct the Evil God (Leading the God to Fall)". Must be both strong! !
A Novel About a Passerby Who Suddenly Realizes One Day That He Is in a Comic Book World
I want to read a book like "I tore up the cannon fodder script after seeing the comic barrage". No cp forum body passerby "Comic Cannon Fodder Self-Rescue Guide"
Is There Any Online Game Called Shuangnan? I Really Can't Find Anything About It. I Don't Want E-Sports.
I want to read a book similar to "Holographic Game: I Rely on Assistance to Become Star Dawn (Holographic Dawn Game)".






































It's delicious, delicious, and the characters are delicious. Just this cute little kitten and cute puppy. I will be defeated by cats and dogs in my life. The beauty of this book is not only the love line, the family line is also the most worth reading. Xiaoluo and her brother are both thinking about each other. The most poignant plot for me was when her mother died. Xiaoluo asked her brother if he would be like this in the future, "Brother will not let you do this." I was very moved when I saw it. The author really shaped the relationship between the two brothers very well. Even if the brother sacrifices everything, he must let Xiaoluo grow up safely, and Xiaoluo has always been thinking about his brother. He wants his brother to pursue his dream, and he also wants to be his brother's backing. The relationship between the young master and Xiaoluo has also transitioned very well. From the initial wariness and distrust to understanding each other and then falling in love, they have always been devoted to each other and trusted each other. The young lovers must always be together. Please support our author a lot! This is my first time writing such a long book review, please forgive me🥺 I can see such an appetizing book, teacher, you are my partner, my wife, my baby, my wife, my boss, my shopkeeper, my woman, my Ernie, my mother, my little fairy, my mentor, my idol, my sweetheart, my pillow. My sweetheart, my girlfriend, my dear, my wife, my lover, my wife, my ancestor, my baby, my condom, my wife, my wife, my wife, my virtuous wife, my other half, my true love, my sweetheart🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️
It's pretty good to watch. I hope there isn't a secondary character behind it (actually, it's fine if there is one, I just hope it doesn't take too much of the main character's role) The two brothers are so cute, and as far as I'm concerned, there shouldn't be anything poisonous about them.
The overall structure is good, and it has the look and feel of "A Little Smile Is Alluring". The writing style is also quite fluent. It is different from the ordinary two-male protagonists. It seems that there is not too much "intervention" at the moment. It is like the author telling such a story and letting it happen naturally. The description of the setting of another world "Xianzhou" is also quite good (this should not be counted as MOBA). The details of the fighting and "surrender" are very good, especially the description after "surrender", which really made my eyes shine. Overall, there is no water character, and the logic is relatively rigorous. You can take a look.
Hot face and cold face are the best match. This setting of Brother Control has always poked me. The one with a little paranoia should be the one below (point to the jpg.) [I am a Shang Control, if I said something wrong, I am really sorry ಥ_ಥ] I really like the way Xiaoluo and Tan family get along, and the friends around them are all good babies (except for the ugly guy who used Xiaoluo's photos to cheat money) Then Xiaoluo's genetic disease will be cured, right? What the system says can be cured is true, right? I don't want to be, and I don't want to die twice [crying] Add another sentence: I want to see my brother and Xiaoluo meet つ♡⊂ Congratulations on the completion. Instead of stepping on my bad points, they danced crazily on my XP. The cold-faced cuteness and warm-faced ones are a perfect match. It's completely made from a simple background, with entertainment industry elements + pastoral elements + online game elements, daily sweet stories, and a little bit of family affection. There is no excessive description of appearance (the most annoying to me), the writing is moderate, the characters are well developed, and the emotional line can be said to be very complete in Yang Persimmon. There are no excessive logical problems, but the last few chapters are a bit sad and break the fourth wall. I am fortunate to have my book review appear in the text in the form of a wish. Xiaotan and Xiaoluo will always be happy, and so will Dada. Then I'm just looking forward to Dada's next book. ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡
A very good book! I read it in one breath, and I didn't feel any discomfort, nor did I have any thoughts of stopping halfway. It was very comfortable and warm to read. Just looking at it makes me want to play "Xianzhou", but unfortunately there is no such game in the real world, \(°o°)/. Talking about Xiao Zhi and Xu Luo, these two names are really catchy and nice to hear. From the "confrontation couple" in the game, to the person who mistakenly thought Xiao Tan was Qin XX, to the relationship getting closer step by step, and then to being together. (Suddenly a sentence came to mind, if he runs away and chases him, he will be unable to fly) Xu Sheng loves his younger brother Xu Luo very much, and Xu Luo loves his older brother Xu Sheng very much. Let me see the noble love between relatives. One of their brothers controls the other, which is very good. Finally, when Xiao Luo Gene recovered from his illness, I was really happy (∩_∩) Xiao Luo Jian was healthy and happy. System 1033 is also great, very cute. I keep reporting to the main system for Xiaoluo. Thank you for your hard work! I hope they in the book and us outside the book are all healthy and everything goes well.
So far, the writing is very good, the overall rhythm is very comfortable, the writing is long and flowing, and the story is eloquent. The writing style is also relatively delicate, and the image of the characters is also very clear. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot development. The affection between brothers really touches me! We are also looking forward to the development of Xu Luohe and Tan Xiaozhi's emotional line! I hope the author will continue to work hard!
Very good, I like it very much. Whether it is the progress of the main CP or the insertion of the deputy CP, it is very harmonious. The only thing I don't like is when I can make a wish for the first time. I feel that I can actually research a drug to treat genetic diseases in the near future. In this case, I don't have to make a wish alone. No. Letting my brother get a genetic disease, but then I thought again, Xu Luo has this disease himself. He has experienced the pain, so he doesn't want his brother to experience it, which is normal. After all, his original intention from the beginning was for his brother. Although there were twists and turns, he was happy in the end, which was good. But if a vicious person like me would write it to him, haha.
It's so beautiful, Shuang Jie is pure love, the emotional line between the two is quite smooth, there are no hardships. My brother is also a very strong and good brother, and the family line is also well written. The integration of the game Xianzhou did not make the text very procrastinating and boring. Instead, there were many plot nodes, which were cleverly designed and very interesting [licking the screen]. I was reading the book reviews when I was halfway through the book, and I saw a lot of them with very sad endings. I thought I was going to die, so I looked through the table of contents, and I felt relieved when I saw Resurrection A. In fact, the ending is not very sad, but more touching, and I was moved by the emotions of many people. Many people pray for the same person in different places and in different ways. It is a tree covered with prayer signs, blessings from volunteer workers and children in the welfare home, and blessings and prayers from relatives and friends. Maybe they don't know each other well or they don't know each other at all, but they all unanimously send blessings to the person who is suffering from illness. I think it's not abusive, but rather sublimates the emotion of the article. I also wish everyone who is suffering from the disease a speedy recovery, so all readers are safe and well. [Bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one] [bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one]
It's so delicious, woo woo, the knife in the back made me pee in my eyes, woo woo. I was a little excited after watching it The emotions are very well written, from family, friendship to love, the emotions are so delicately written [cry] [cry] [cry] (go to hell with my poor vocabulary [cry]) The plot at the end is a bit fantasy but it conforms to the logic of this novel. It's a bit fantasy when written from a perspective that breaks the dimensional wall, but it's so delicious. It's a very interesting perspective. By the end of the paragraph, it has really integrated with the idea of the novel. I just want the young lovers to be together [crying][crying][crying] I was so excited after reading this that I quickly wrote a book review. Later, when my brain calmed down, I had a different view. It's delicious [sending heart] [blowing kiss]
It's very beautiful. I originally wanted to watch a cookie, but I didn't expect it to make me burst into tears. Of course the ending is good. This article has family, friendship and love aspects. The only thing that makes me personally regretful is that what Lin Luo did was so great and perfect, and his final choice is actually very understandable. But the only unsatisfactory thing about watching a little love dessert at night is that when he was going to die, he didn't seem to think too much about talking about it. It made people feel that it didn't matter as long as my brother was safe. The world didn't matter and I could die peacefully. It's like thinking that you will forget me after I die. There is not even a feeling of regret, of course there may be such a feeling, but the author did not write it out, or I did not notice it.
Ok, after reading this book, I don't have any surprises. The overall tone is very warm, there is no problem logically, and there is no problem emotionally. The writing is also very good. Overall, it's very good! But I forgot whether there is a dual-power standard here. If you are here for the dual-power, I suggest you give up. It can't be said that it doesn't happen. It's just that it can't be reflected in some aspects, but it is still possible in some aspects. What can be reflected is that the two people's IQs should be both high. What cannot be reflected is the background of one party. The family background and resources are strong, but the other party is not. But I personally feel that there is nothing wrong with it overall, and this score is really low. It's only around seven o'clock now, I think he should be able to make it to nine. I think if more people watch, he should be able to break nine.
Perfect, so perfect, it made me cry all the time when I read it. It's really good. It's really sublimated later on. Everyone should read this book. The writing is so good, not childish at all, and the plot is so good. Damn, I don't know what to say. Go read it!
The writing is superb, I can't help it, and the angle is very novel. I finished it all in one go. I'm so moved that I have endured it until now [crying][crying][crying] I really feel sad for the plot about Be because of a serious illness. Fortunately, we 1033 are really too silver-winged. 1033 We like you. I really want to cry when I see tens of thousands of people praying for Xu Luo and doing good deeds. I really like the loyal dog type that clings to our little talk, it's so cute. Yes, that's right, our Xiaoluo is the group's favorite, you know. The relationship between the two brothers is also very touching [crying] [crying] Taohua's family's characters are also super good. Moreover, the author's teacher's logic is so clear. I enjoyed watching Werewolf, hehe. I hope that 1033 will have smooth sailing after being reincarnated, and wish Tan Xu 99, and I hope that Xu Luo will be safe and happy, and have a smooth life [Salute]
Let's just say that in this book you can see the cat-like Luo Bao and the dog-like Mr. Tan. Why not talk about the big cats and dogs? It is a very delicious work. The family lines and emotional scenes are well written, and the whole thing is relaxed. It is not tiring and you can see the proper plot lines. It is very delicious [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
The author's writing is good, and the plot is coherent. Many places can be rounded off later, and there are some callbacks. The last part where the protagonist's condition keeps getting worse is very real and can make people sympathize.
It's good to watch. The ending was a little bit scary and made me want to cry. I really like the family line between Xu Sheng and Xu Luo. The relationship between Luo Bao and Xiao Tan is also good to watch [Adoration]. There are also many funny parts. I feel sweet when I watch it. In short, it's my favorite type. (I can't help but say that 1033 is quite cute and cute [Shy])
After the serious tasting, my eyes were swollen [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
It's super good-looking, and I feel soft-hearted after reading it. I really think the author's writing is super good, the characters are well created, and many small details are well connected. Moreover, the system in this article is also easy to understand. I like it, like it, and I say important things three times! ! !
The writing is still good, with elements of online games and variety shows. The villain makes me want to go through and beat him up. It's so impersonal. The daily life of the young couple is also cute...꒰* ॢꈍ◡ꈍ ॢ꒱
After reading it, it's delicious. Xiaoluo and Xiaotanzong are a pair of cats and dogs that make people feel warm in their hearts. They finally made a wish, "I hope those readers outside the book who have carefully read our stories will have good luck every year and be safe for generations to come." This is really touching ヽ(°◇°)ノ. This sentence is also dedicated to Xiaoluo and Xiaotanzong. After all the hardships, they finally ushered in happiness ヾ(@^∇^@)ノ (the kind without obstacles) In the story, except Qin xx (forgot his name) and the one who stole the photo, they are all very good people (especially the brother, Jiang Taohua, 1033). Even the minor characters are carefully portrayed, and the world view and small details are also echoed. Overall, it is a very good article (○゜ε^○) "False words can also give birth to true love" "Existence is reasonable" This is a general analysis of the novel (possibly) and a confession (very romantic). These words really gave birth to my (reader) feelings for the characters. I hope everyone will be happy forever, and I also hope that patients with genetic diseases can get rid of their suffering. Note: The above is just my personal opinion
Okay, okay, although it may be a little bitter in the early stage, it is still sweet. I don't mean it won't be bitter. Young lovers must stay together for a long time. . Also, that Qin won't really be reborn, don't do that. The already not sweet life is even worse. Still looking forward to the later plot. The author will update quickly.
I recommend this teacher, it's really good. Come and take a look. [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] The plot and content are all very good [Love] [Love] Very quickly recommended [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts]
Look! Xiaoluo got sick five or six times, which made me cry all the time. He is really great. It was the same at the Comic Exhibition. I especially hoped that my brother and brother would meet each other as soon as possible. Unexpectedly, it was Tan Xiaozhi who finally showed his strength. Teacher Kuquau has written a new article, hehe
The author and teacher write it very well. The two characters in Xiaoluo Xiaotan are so adorable, and the cat and dog are so cool! I was really touched when I saw what happened next. Tears kept flowing. Everyone was praying for Xiaoluo. I was very touched [crying] [crying]
It's over so quickly? I thought it would take a longer time to follow, but this time it also made me happy. [Shy] I really like the character of the protagonist! I didn't pay much attention to e-sports elements before. The author's rhythm and writing style are very good. I just don't care about it. I really like the family line, it's such a touch of happiness.
✓, Cute, home invasion love. The writing style is light and humorous. Looking at the title, I thought it was about the entertainment industry, but in fact it is more about daily life and pastoral life. The protagonist is very exciting, and I am seduced by him from time to time. CP is an enthusiastic stupid puppy (bs, this person has his own sense of humor. Looking forward to the following episodes~
The arrogant cat and the sunny and silly big dog! So sweet, so sweet, so sweet! I also like the brother's family line! Woo hoo, the younger brother who is controlled by brother, and the older brother who is controlled by brother! Except for a few villains, the other characters are so cute! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
This novel is really beautiful. When I saw a little knife at the back, I really wanted to cry. But it's super good-looking, but I haven't watched the extras, and my heart aches (this knife is caused by external forces, so you can use it with confidence). I feel like I should give it five stars.
Perfect, it hurts so much, Perfect, it hurts so much, Perfect, it hurts so much, Perfect, it hurts so much. The stamina is a bit strong, Tan Puppy and Xu Xiaosu Cat are so delicious, honestly speaking, I cried [crying] [crying] [crying] It's so delicious, boss, we like you
It looks good. I like Xiaoluo and my brother very much. The author's writing style is also good. I will continue to appreciate it =ᗜωᗜ=