One Person: Start with a Treasure Bag, Lao Tian Comes and Takes Two Steps

This is the best unfinished novel I have ever written by an author. Although the story line is a bit bland, the writing is still good. I hope that the subsequent plot development will not disappoint.

So far, I can score 90 points. The plot is relatively smooth and the rhythm is well controlled. Except for some problems with the characters and some minor cognitive flaws in some plots, there are no big problems in logic, character IQ and plot, and there are no very obvious loopholes. It is still worth reading.

The character's personality is perfectly created and makes people feel immersed in it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The characters and plots are all online, which is good

Not bad, very interesting

Hahaha, Doraemon's pocket.

Funny article, finished firmly, hahahaha

The characters are so vivid and the plot is not too slow. I couldn't stop watching it and waited for updates. The idea is very good. The combination of Doraemon and one person is really a stroke of genius 😂😂😂😂😂

Use Doraemon props to conquer the whole sex, it's easy and funny and still not watery [Like][Like]

The writing is good, the story is good, and it's easy to follow.

The characters are lively and interesting, I like it.

The story is novel and interesting.

Ahhhhhhhh, so pretty😁😁😁

It's really good, don't miss it🤔🤔🤔

Good looking, good looking, good looking😊😊😊

It's okay to watch it for fun

But I am uneducated, so I can only tell the world about my good looks!

Coming from the book world, I didn't expect it to fall into my heart at first glance🐮🐮🐮

Well, I felt so disappointed. I had this feeling before when I first started reading. Then I got used to it after reading it. I didn't expect this long-lost feeling to appear again!

I hope it can be made into a short drama which will definitely be a hit👍👍👍

A very good novel, I haven't seen a novel of this caliber for a long time. To be honest, I'm not belittling Eggplant, but it's really cool that this kind of book feeling appears in Eggplant...

It's very well written, but the number of words is too short. Please give it a try, author.

It's really good, thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up🤣🤣🤣

It's very well written. I hope you work hard and don't end it!

Love it, love it, the author has his own ideas, very good ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა

I read more than a dozen chapters every day, and after reading it for a few days, I finally saw the latest chapter. Personally, I feel that the writing is pretty good, but it's just a little short. If you can, just write more!

It's a very nice book. I hope I can keep writing at this level!

It looks great. It's fun to move Doraemon's props into a one-person world. I'm looking forward to the future development.

Very good, cleverly conceived and full of attractions (￣ ▽￣)o╭╯☆#╰( ￣￣)╯

It's quite nice, very beautiful, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง